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Creative Writing Share your fan fiction, stories, poems, essays, editorials, song lyrics, or any other related written work. All written must be your creation. Start a new thread, and keep replying to that thread as you add on more chapters. Anyone can join in at anytime.


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Old 12-15-2006, 11:20 PM
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I refuse to butter you up with mindless praise. This was awful.

You had some of the worst described battle scenes that I've ever read. Gameboy style battles are more entertaining than yours. I'm also amused at the fact that not even you know what's going to happen next in the story. That is the sign of a bad writer. Why the hell are people posting stale RPG sign-ups to make an appearence in a fic that deserves to be closed due to lack of quality? I'm appalled that you are actually posting pictures of your characters instead of describing them. How lazy can you be?

Please start putting some effort into your work because currently, this story has no redeeming qualities.
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Old 12-18-2006, 10:34 AM
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I love the story so far. Great charcters. Can you add my character please?

Name: Christina
Pokemon: Espeon, Combusken, Hitmontop
Move List for Espeon: Psychic, Swift, Confusion, Quick Attack
Move List for Combusken: Double Kick, Sky Uppercut, Ember, Peck
Move List for Hitmontop: Triple Kick, Dig, Earthquake, Rapid Spin

I would love it if you can add my character. And yes you can evolve Combusken at some point if you want to.
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Old 12-20-2006, 10:36 PM
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I'm so happy! I got a new computer! With a firewall better than a wet paper bag!
This is really good, keep a goin' !
BTW Marina's pokemon are ALL lightning fast, the only way to describe it would be breakneck speed.
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Old 12-22-2006, 03:27 AM
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Default Re: Pokemon UA!: Ultimate Annihilation

I just got a new laptop! Anyway, thanks and you'll see your characters in the next chapter. Onochou will be in next chapter so hold on to your computer chairs, because the chapter coming up will blow you away! It will be my longest chapter yet.
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Old 12-22-2006, 10:01 AM
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Default Re: Pokemon UA!: Ultimate Annihilation

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I refuse to butter you up with mindless praise. This was awful.

You had some of the worst described battle scenes that I've ever read. Gameboy style battles are more entertaining than yours. I'm also amused at the fact that not even you know what's going to happen next in the story. That is the sign of a bad writer. Why the hell are people posting stale RPG sign-ups to make an appearence in a fic that deserves to be closed due to lack of quality? I'm appalled that you are actually posting pictures of your characters instead of describing them. How lazy can you be?

Please start putting some effort into your work because currently, this story has no redeeming qualities.
Thats just plain rude, granted his fic may not be the best on offer but you're not helping by insulting him. BE POLITE, you could of just said "There is a lot of room for improovement, perhaps you should try..... to make it better" not everyone here is up to the same standard of writing and english

I doubt you'd like it if some one shotdown everything you worked for.

Don't let me catch you at it again or you'll find yourself with a ban
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Old 12-23-2006, 02:39 PM
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Next chapter coming soon. I'll make it more detailed, and longer!
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Old 12-24-2006, 12:53 AM
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it better be and I can't wait for it!
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Old 12-24-2006, 03:07 AM
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This should be good! ^^
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Old 12-27-2006, 10:18 AM
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Got that right!
Wanna check out my story?, it's called 'The Journey' (real original name...), I'm kinda brain dead, so it's not that long....... yet!.

Note: it's one of those really long stories, so... keep checking up!

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