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Creative Writing Share your fan fiction, stories, poems, essays, editorials, song lyrics, or any other related written work. All written must be your creation. Start a new thread, and keep replying to that thread as you add on more chapters. Anyone can join in at anytime.


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Old 12-01-2006, 04:20 AM
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Default Re: Through the Eyes of Itsu

Was there a time gap inbetween part 1 and part 2?

I reccomend you finish a section before you post it. Leaving a reader hanging at a random moment isn't exactly what you want to be doing.

Other than that, it was pretty good.
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Old 12-02-2006, 01:52 AM
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Default Re: Through the Eyes of Itsu

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Was there a time gap inbetween part 1 and part 2?

I reccomend you finish a section before you post it. Leaving a reader hanging at a random moment isn't exactly what you want to be doing.

Other than that, it was pretty good.
Yea I really didn't know what was happening at the start of chap 2 but overall its good can't wait till chap 3
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Old 12-02-2006, 03:10 AM
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Schmankies guys!



Important: I am postponing this story for the time being due to the fact that I am already working on about 4 stories, some of them on different sites other than here, and one is a major story that I really want to be published after I have finished and edited it.

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Old 12-10-2006, 09:31 PM
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Default Re: Through the Eyes of Itsu

It's really great, Ryenne.

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Old 12-10-2006, 10:03 PM
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It's really great, Ryenne.
Thank you! But honestly, it's not my best work. Will you read my MAJOR story? You know, the one that I've been bothering you forever to read?
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Old 12-25-2006, 12:22 AM
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I've read every bit that you have posted.........
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Old 12-27-2006, 02:30 AM
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I've read every bit that you have posted.........
Sorry.
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