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Creative Writing Share your fan fiction, stories, poems, essays, editorials, song lyrics, or any other related written work. All written must be your creation. Start a new thread, and keep replying to that thread as you add on more chapters. Anyone can join in at anytime.


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Old 12-15-2006, 11:29 PM
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Post The Beginning (or somewhere near it)

The sun beat down on a long deserted plain. No plants grew. No desert lizards scurried. There was nothing alive. Nothing.
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A cat-like creature raised her head in alarm. She could stil picture the plain. "Just a dream. Just a dream." she murmered. "How are you feeling, Mara?" another creature just like her known as an Ethra mewed. "I'm fine, Petro."Mara whispered to her mate, looking at her fat, pregnant belly as she did so."Just fine."
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A tall man stood. He was in the middle of a huge jungle. Somewhere in the middle, anyway.Next to him was a tall, spindly creature called a goblin. "There's gotta be some Ethra around here somewhere."the man said to himself. The goblin only grinned. "Meat.Meat."chanted the goblin.
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Old 12-15-2006, 11:52 PM
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Default Re: The Beginning (or somewhere near it)

This isn't a fan fic, more like a bad RPG post. There is only bare bones description. If the reader can't visualize what is happening in the story then you have not done your job as a writer.

Take your time. A fan fic chapter should be at least one and a half pages in MS Word. A good chapter is about three pages.
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Old 12-16-2006, 01:22 PM
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Default Re: The Beginning (or somewhere near it)

I've never done fantasy before. Only personal narratives. I think its awful too. Maybe I should delete.
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Old 12-16-2006, 01:25 PM
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Default Re: The Beginning (or somewhere near it)

how do you delete?
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Old 12-16-2006, 06:26 PM
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Default Re: The Beginning (or somewhere near it)

If you want it to be good then you have to take time in writing it. No one writes five-star fan fiction chapters in one sitting.

You shouldn't completely give up with your writing. If you wish to delete your thread then just simply edit your first post and look for the deletion box.
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Old 12-17-2006, 02:39 AM
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Default Re: The Beginning (or somewhere near it)

Don't delete it! You just need to make it a lot longer. I think it's pretty good for how short it is. Just work a little harder at it and I think you'll do fine.
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