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Old 05-15-2004, 08:36 AM
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Hi, I'm back, and what better way to return than to start something new? =P Hope you enjoy this.

EYES
A Fan Fic by Vex, of Team Trainer
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Prologue: The First Eye

Sweat drenched Sami's forehead as she walked onward. How many days was this now? Sami couldn't remember. She didn't even know why she was walking. How she was here. All she knew was her name...and the name of the small creature that followed her belligerently.

Sandshrew seemed not to tire as it plodded along behind Sami. Its eyes sparkled in the sun as if it were its birthday - Sami had to admire its stamina. This was not a gift she herself possessed.

Clutching her waist in a stitch, Sami continued to move along the endless sands, the flying grains stinging her eyes as a small wind blew it up into her face.

Fire.

Sami stopped dead in her tracks for the first time in a day. Her eyes, just for one second, saw only a bright orange flame that burned as if there was no tomorrow. What was more, she felt the blistering heat of the fire as it crackled menacingly.

And then the desert was back. Sami brushed her dark brown hair out of her face and wiped her forehead. How....what....what had she just experienced? It must have been the heat getting to her....but it was so real...

Sunset was creeping in at last, and Sami ate a small piece of her precious chocolate, which was all she had left aside from a near-empty water container. Sandshrew found a tiny bug in the sand and promptly swallowed it, cherishing the blissful nutrition that was so hard to find.

Sami sat on a rock and closed her eyes for a few moments to savour the brief rest before getting up once more and beckoning to Sandshrew.

"Just a little further before we stop for the night, Shrew."

Fire....everywhere. Tall buildings burned and toppled to the ground. Huge dark shadows soared above, raining flames to the city below. And screaming. Painful, eerie screaming that shook Sami's very soul. Screaming, but no running. There was no one fleeing, no one to wail in despair as the demon storm punished them.

And the flames...all that remained in Sami's view were the flames. Curling, twisting, and burning so bright Sami felt her eyes would turn to ash. The heat streaked at her, burns covering her arms...and she screamed an unearthly scream of terror.


In the sands of Saldun Desert, Sami dropped to the floor with a sickening lack of noise, her arms and legs burned beyond belief and her face contorted in an expression of shocking pain.
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Old 05-15-2004, 04:09 PM
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Awesome job Vex! Is it ok if I call you Vex? Anyways, you made a great start to the story and really left my on the edge of my seats. Why is Sami seeing these images? What secrets behold this? Great start my man! Awesome description as well, felt like I was really there. Can't wait for more!
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Old 05-15-2004, 04:43 PM
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Wow!

Nice way to write a story!

You sure know how to come in with a bang, Delichicken!

You don't mind being called Delichicken right?
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Old 05-18-2004, 11:16 AM
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KCash: Thanks, glad you liked it. Vex is perfectly fine. ^^;

DP: Oy, watch it. =P Thanks for the good review.

I plan to have the first chapter up by Friday, when I get a day off school.
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Old 05-18-2004, 11:31 AM
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Yay! Another good story! I love this place, so many good things to read! Can't wait til ur next update...
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Old 05-18-2004, 10:12 PM
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Wow Vex! This looks like it'll be a good fic! ^_^ *Waits until friday*
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Old 05-19-2004, 10:30 AM
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Woohoo! I managed to update before Friday! ^^; Too bad it's because I'm to ill to go to school. =P

EYES
A Fan Fic by Vex, of Team Trainer
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Chapter One: The Second Eye

Matt recorded the readings off the windmeter with a bored, frustrated expression on his face. He was a little indignant that after going to so much trouble to come on this expedition, he was assigned to do menial jobs like measuring the wind speed around the base.

Glancing over his shoulder, Matt took a look at the team's base compound, which looked like something out of Star Wars...but not in a good way. This strange, bumpy and extremely untidy and informal semi-cylindrical building was ugly, with a capital U, G, L, Y and no less than sixteen exclamation marks.

Matt had an odd way of creating unusual descriptions for the things he saw and people he met. Every evening, before going to sleep, he would huddle at his desk and write in his diary about everything he'd done, and described the most important things in weird and wonderful ways. Matt was quite a free spirit, who loved to perceive things in different ways, but this job was really restricting to him. He desperately wanted to be going off with Derek and Tina, who were busy exploring this strange polar region of Allashore.

At last, after half-heartedly taking readings and repositioning his windmeter for over two hours, Matt packed up the equipment into its light plastic case and wandered back to the compound. Tina and Derek should be back now, and he could listen to their stories about the area.

He opened the sheet steel door to the compound and dumped the apparatus' case on the floor, before raising his head to the seating area where Tina and Derek always hung out together and beginning to speak.

But they weren't there. That was odd....it wasn't like them to be late. In all the long years that Matt had known the couple, they had been punctual down to the second. Glancing at the clock on the wall, Matt shrugged and grumbled about how it must have been a really exciting trip for them to stay away this long.

Sighing, he fixed himself a steaming pot of coffee and flopped down onto the soft armchair by the electric heater, shedding the fleece coat he had been wearing over his black sweater. He heard the wind blow outside, and throw the small windows could see snow whirling around in the cold gales that wrapped themselves around the base.

Two hours later, and there was still no sign of Derek and Tina. Heck, thought Matt, even the other two members of the team shouldn't have been so late. Now he found himself seriously worried. The coffee was long finished, and if he left the heater on for much longer, the power might cut, and he couldn't risk that.

He reluctantly forced himself to put on his coat once more, and flipped the switch on the side of the heater before opening the door and stepping out.

The blizzard was now in full flow, and Matt thought with horror that his companions couldn't possibly survive outside for much longer at this rate. He yelled at the top of his voice, trying to see if they were nearby, but the rushing winds silenced him to the point when he thought he was merely whispering.

Find your friends...

Matt jumped, startled, at the sudden voice he heard in his head. He did this to himself a lot, but to his head, this voice was foreign. Something was wrong here. Very wrong. Cautiously, Matt slowly began to retreat toward the compound door as he knew it was folly to stay outside.

Find them!

Not knowing why, Matt feebly uttered "No...". The cold was evidently beginning to sap his strength, as his speech was slurred and weak.

I said FIND THEM!

The voice roared in Matt's head so loud that he thought his eardrums would snap. Suddenly, a sharp wave of excruciating pain and limitless cold coursed through him like an electric shock.

Matt's screams were lost to the oncoming polar night as he crumpled to the floor.
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Old 05-23-2004, 08:53 AM
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Please keep on reading and reviewing! =D

EYES
A Fan Fic by Vex, of Team Trainer
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Chapter Two: The Third Eye

"I'll say that again, Kajan, as it's obvious you weren't listening." The Executive looked sternly at Randall as he adjusted his notes.

Randall said nothing, but secretly wanted to take the Executive by the scruff of the neck and beat some sense into him, to tell him he had been listening, but he was so undeniably boring that it was difficult to look interested in whatever it was he was on about.

The Executive's dark, rounded office was walled with stone painted a dark red, nearly black. There were stacks of paperwork on his black marble desk, surprising, as Team Magma preferred action, not deliberation in words.

"As you know," the Executive began his speech again, "we recently lost a Meteorite to a young meddler in Hoenn. He subsequently defeated Maxie, our leader at the time..."

The Executive accentuated the last words of the sentence with his obviously dislike for Maxie's apparently limited ability. His consequential firing from the position of Magma Leader had allowed people to voice their real opinions about him that they had been disallowed from revealing when he was in power. Gossip went that Executive Marrat, the one Randall was listening to now, was likely to be the next leader once the Executives had finished bickering with one another.

"So, we've decided to turn our attentions to another possible way of increasing the land mass," continued Marrat, "namely, the Force Dam in the Pelar region."

Randall had been surprised about this decision the first time round, but the second time that the Executive had mentioned it to him really made it sink in that they were going to attempt a defeat of the most brilliant piece of science ever known.

Pelar's Force Dam was a barrier of pure energy that stopped lava from flowing out all over the Pelar region. The mountain it was situated on, Highwing Peak, had had its side blown open by Team Rocket a few years back, and the former city of Icepoint had been completely demolished. The world's best scientists pondered the crisis until one man, Professor Christopher Eucalyptus, had come up with an idea. He suggested gathering one of every kind of Pokemon known to man and channelling their elemental energy, which would create a reaction so large that it would stabilise itself in a state where the elements had any power to move, leaving pure energy in its place.

It had been a radical theory, rejected by most scientists, but Professor Eucalyptus had gathered those who agreed it was worth a try and together they had collected all the Pokemon and successfully created and stabilised the Force Dam. They had set up a Power Centre for each element of Pokemon type, spread around the Pelar region. One of all Pokemon of that element stayed there and channelled energy into a transmitter that projected the energy to the Force Dam, keeping it up.

The Executive kept on. "We will take out the various Power Centres of the Force Dam until it finally breaks, unleashing magma all over the region. Kajan, you're going to command the regiment that will attack the Electric Power Centre."

Then, suddenly, the room faded away and Kajan found himself standing on a wide wall of red rock. There was someone on either side of him, a man on his left and a young girl on his right. The Force Dam was shimmering in front of him...and Randall realised he was standing on the volcano, Highwing Peak.

The Executive's office returned into view as Randall saw a fading image of lava running through the barrier...

"Kajan! Get up! KAJAN!"

Executive Merrat bent down over Randall Kajan, Team Magma Grunt, and looked in horror at his seemingly lifeless body.
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Wow, this is something else! Keep it coming!
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New ava and siggie to go with the fic. ^^; Apparently you may need to clear your temporary internet picture files or something like that to see them. =P

Anyway, this is a short chapter, but I've got a decent ending for it and there's not much between Sami's vision and the end of this chapter. The next chapter will focus on Matt, and will be a good deal longer.

EYES
A Fan Fic by Vex, of Team Trainer
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Chapter Three: The Sacrifice

Consciousness slowly returned to Sami's head as she felt salty water drop onto her arm. Her eyes were still a blur, but looking to one side, she could make out the dim colour of the desert sand.

As her gaze shifted to her right arm, and her vision improved, Sami saw her diminutive friend Sandshrew bending over her arm. To her sadness, she saw it was crying. Dry, salty tears dropped onto her arm, and Sami felt a pang of compassion for it. Strangely, she was unsurprised to see the horrible burns that had mutilated her arms beyond recognition, and something in the back of her mind worried about this.

Unfortunately, this tender moment did not last for long as a sharp crackle of pain surged through Sami's arms and up to her shoulders. She let out a weak cry, but Sandshrew did not look up. To her horror, Sami noticed there were tiny golden ripples emerging from where its tears hit her.

She mouthed "what are you doing?" to Sandshrew, but as its head was down it did not notice, or perhaps chose not to respond. Sami couldn't tell.

The sand did not move an inch, but Sami felt a strong wind blowing around her. She was more scared now than she had ever been in her life, which was unusual as she had just experienced something unnatural, a vision that harmed her for real.

Staring at Sandshrew, Sami felt like her eyes were betraying her as something shocked her beyond her limits, and she did well not to pass out..

Sandshrew was shrinking. It was so tiny now, almost gone. She reached out to try to help it, but her hand just grabbed thin air. Her companion had gone...but that wasn't what shocked her most.

What shocked her most was the yellow-brown scales that now covered her arms and hands.

Sandshrew scales.
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EYES
A Fan Fic by Vex, of Team Trainer
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Chapter Four: Strange Meeting

Cold. Sheer, pure cold. Harsh cold. Unforgiving. Pierced his arms...

Whose arms?

When arms?

Arms?

How?

I?

Questions, questions...what were they? He felt empty...or at least he thought he did. Empty...the opposite of full...but...but that was so shallow.

Empty.

Abscence. Empty was an abscence...an abscence of anything.

The mind drifted. It was not quite alive...but not quite dead either. A word entered into it but it was not one it understood.

Dreamstate.

It was in a snowy landscape...but it was not there. It was...a part of it? No...the light was intensifying...at last, a final rest...

"Are you OK?"

NO! It wanted to scream it out loud - NO, NO, NO! No, I am not OK! No, don't bring me back! No, let me leave....No, let me stay....NO!

Then the mind realised that it WAS screaming it out loud. Why could it speak? It was an essence. It was not alive. It was....Dreamstate...

Vision.

The mind could see...

The mind was in the snow again. And the cold was back. Utter cold...and there was somebody looking down on it.

Somebody?

Som ebody?

Ydo bemos?

So many questions...

It knew the person. HE knew the person.

He? It was a mind. It was...no...the mind was inhabiting once more...it searched through the scarred brain, and found what it was looking for.

"...randallkajan..."

Why was randallkajan looking so surprised? It knew it was randallkajan.

"How do you know me?" randallkajan paused. "No, you need rest..."

randallkajan pulled on something. It was metal...a door.

"Wait...I know you. But...I don't......"

Meanwhile, in the secret Team Magma headquarters, the Executive gasped in shock as the lifeless body of Randall Kajan shimmered out of existence.
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