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Old 05-27-2004, 01:35 PM
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Default The heartache hotel

Post stories/poems/whatnot that you wrote about the above topic. Here are a couple I wrote last night/this morning =\

The Moon

You have been gone for so many days
Iím missing you in too many ways
Happiness gone, the loneliness stays

I watch the moon as its weeping with me
I need you now, girl why canít you see?
When youíre not around, I feel so empty

The moon doesnít help me, and neither does the beer
Cuz Iím having a breakdown without you here
Iím so used to turning to you when youíre near
Youíre probably out where the moon doesnít roam
I have no idea when youíre coming home
But please come back quickly, I feel so alone

Watching the moon eating bittersweet delights
Suddenly, something doesnít feel quite right
Feels like Iím sitting in the blackest of nights

I donít know what to believe anymore
The moon just tells me to see whatís in store
It seems Iíll be walking out the back door



Asking

I sit down and think about all that we had
I really donít think I treated you bad
Made some mistakes, Iíll openly admit
But never did something to deserve all this ****

Smashing the memories, or trying to at least
Sitting in silence, hiding the beast
Asking myself questions Iíll probably never know
This pressure inside of me continues to grow

Things were great when we first started out
I could just hold you if you had to shout
But one day you suddenly seemed so distant
Maybe I should have just taken the hint

Was there something I couldnít give you?
Something about me that didnít fit you?
Was it something that I didnít do?
Or did you get bored and need something new?
Could you not tell me that your feelings had changed?
But whatís the point in asking, youíre not listening anyway

The way you looked into my eyes
I knew you didnít have a disguise
Somewhere down that line you met a thing deceit
Something I didnít know that youíd happily greet

So Iím leaving you now, Iím saying goodbye
This betrayal hurts bad, I think I might cry
Maybe before if I hadnít screwed up
Then this time Iíd have better luck

But thatís no excuse for the things that youíve done
Iím giving up now, you did it, you won
But one day youíll miss me, when your lifeís full of lies
And regret turning on me, your greatest demise

Was there something I couldnít give you?
Something about me that didnít fit you?
You broke my heart, you broke it in two
Broke all my trust lines when I had so few
So you go on now, leave with that guy
I wonder if youíll know when heís telling a lie

What can he give you that I do not have?
Heíll never be as good at making you laugh
Can he give you shivers like I do?
I know you must tell him things I already knew
Is he like me, can brighten your day?
What is it about me that turned you away?
Whatís the point in asking, youíre not listening anyway

Was there something I couldnít give you?
Something about me that didnít fit you?
Was it something that I didnít do?
Or did you get bored and need something new?
Could you not tell me that your feelings had changed?
But whatís the point in asking, youíre not listening anyway
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