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Old 05-01-2004, 01:36 AM
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Default A Sad Story

Here's me again, with another sad story. I swear that this story will definitely be a touching one. It's ridiculously long, and somewhat mushy, but read it and you'll love it. I have the music on my computer too, if you want it, feel free to ask.

http://www.cabucojuice.com/sad.html
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Old 05-01-2004, 02:56 AM
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Default Re: A Sad Story

It's quite good, never once was I able to pull away from it and it read it word for word, rather than skipping entire blocks of text like I usually do when I reading something boring. It takes about an hour to read but it is worth it.
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Old 05-03-2004, 05:33 AM
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Default Re: A Sad Story

its pretty good, a bit inconsistent, but besides that...
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Old 05-05-2004, 09:47 PM
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Default Re: A Sad Story

*Sniff* This is the sadest story i've ever read since I was 8... a great story. If I read it before I read the alternate ending I most likely would of been the people that sent Val an E-Mail! (not a joke)
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Old 05-08-2004, 05:16 PM
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I didn't even read it, but.... The music.... It brings back very sad memories( Fights to the extreme to suppress tears). KYLE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! WHYYYY'D YA HAAAAFFFFTTTTAA GOOOOOOOOOOO????????!!!!!!!!
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Old 05-09-2004, 12:26 AM
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Default Re: A Sad Story

Also like it, very good story... and the music is so great...
Name: Zanarkand (right?)
from Final Fantasy X.... oh I love that song
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Old 05-09-2004, 01:42 AM
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Default Re: A Sad Story

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I didn't even read it, but.... The music.... It brings back very sad memories( Fights to the extreme to suppress tears). KYLE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! WHYYYY'D YA HAAAAFFFFTTTTAA GOOOOOOOOOOO????????!!!!!!!!
Go out if you're not even going to read the story, I don't need music whores here.
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Old 05-09-2004, 06:45 PM
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Default Re: A Sad Story

omg...that was sooooo sad...it made me cry....
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