[COMIC] Pokemon: Chapaz Region

[Fistodragon]

Chapaz NEWS
Will take spots for Guest Stars soon. (Send your application through PM)

PLOT
Fisto and Silver are on a journey through the Chapaz region. There will be some tough times and tough challenges along the way. The evil organization, Team Metal, are trying to capture the legendary pokemon Kyurem! Our heroes have much to learn on this long journey through the Chapaz region.

Credits

credit goes to Ant2011 for the whole comic format. ^_^
credit goes to Gamefreak © for the sprites used in this comic!

By reading Ant2011's pokemon comic, it inspired me on making this comic:)
Sorry for not adding graphics to the attacks, i am just a lazy guy D:

Credit goes to Ant2011 for making Team Metal's sprites:)!!

Updates:
6-27-12: In Chapter 3, i messed up on the battling thing D: Will fix further on in the story!
7-25-12: Comics 5 and beyond will be PNG files.
10-22-12: Will no longer add the levels to pokemon.


Comics
Prologue
Chapter 1
Chapter 2
Chapter 3
Chapter 4
Chapter 5
Chapter 6
Chapter 7
Chapter 8
Chapter 9
Chapter 10
Chapter 11
Chapter 12
Chapter 13
Chapter 14
Chapter 15

[Fistodragon]

Reserved, because I'm most likely to have too many comics for the above post.

[Fistodragon]

Characters:


=Main Characters=
=Protagonists=



Name: Fisto
Age: 15
Gender: Male
Badges from Chapaz: 1
Trainer Title: Pokemon Trainer
Pokemon 1: Bulbasaur, Male
Pokemon 2: (species, nickname(if it has one), and gender)
Pokemon 3: (species, nickname(if it has one), and gender)
Pokemon 4: (species, nickname(if it has one), and gender)
Pokemon 5: (species, nickname(if it has one), and gender)
Pokemon 6: (species, nickname(if it has one), and gender)



Name: Silver
Age: 15
Gender: Male
Badges from Chapz: 0
Trainer Title: Pokemon Trainer
Pokemon 1: Treecko, Male
Pokemon 2: (species, nickname(if it has one), and gender)
Pokemon 3: (species, nickname(if it has one), and gender)
Pokemon 4: (species, nickname(if it has one), and gender)
Pokemon 5: (species, nickname(if it has one), and gender)
Pokemon 6: (species, nickname(if it has one), and gender)

=Antagonists=



Name: Zol
Age: ??
Gender: Male
Badges from Chapaz: 8
Trainer Title: Team Metal's Elite Member
Pokemon 1: (species, nickname(if it has one), and gender)
Pokemon 2: (species, nickname(if it has one), and gender)
Pokemon 3: (species, nickname(if it has one), and gender)
Pokemon 4: (species, nickname(if it has one), and gender)
Pokemon 5: (species, nickname(if it has one), and gender)
Pokemon 6: (species, nickname(if it has one), and gender)

[Cheerful Cherubi]

I think that it's a little early to truly critique this right now, but I will say that you should learn how to use the correct use of "your." "Your" is possessive, as in, "I like your Treecko.", while "you're" is a contraction of you and are, as in, "You're a really great trainer." Okay? Great.

[Fistodragon]

Originally Posted by Cheerful Cherubi

I think that it's a little early to truly critique this right now, but I will say that you should learn how to use the correct use of "your." "Your" is possessive, as in, "I like your Treecko.", while "you're" is a contraction of you and are, as in, "You're a really great trainer." Okay? Great.

Oh, thanks! I knew i had an error somewhere. I'll be sure to fix and upload that comic again.

[Fistodragon]

Chapter 4 is out.

[Cheerful Cherubi]

Originally Posted by Fistodragon

Oh, thanks! I knew i had an error somewhere. I'll be sure to fix and upload that comic again.

That's actually in every comic. If you'd like, you could send them to me for revisions before you post them. Just PM me.

[SuperUltraZekrom]

Good so far, but remember to save as PNG instead of JPG or JPEG.

[Ant2011]

Originally Posted by SuperUltraZekrom

Good so far, but remember to save as PNG instead of JPG or JPEG.

I don't really think filetype is a big deal with comics. While it does deter from the sprite colors, it helps avoid sprite theft. Besides, people read comics for the story I think.

Anyway, this is coming along well! I'll keep checking up on it to see where it goes!

[Pokemon Trainer Sarah]

Hey, nice comic so far. Extra points cos one of the main characters has Bulbasaur! :D I look forward to seeing what happens next!

[Fistodragon]

Originally Posted by Pokemon Trainer Sarah

Hey, nice comic so far. Extra points cos one of the main characters has Bulbasaur! :D I look forward to seeing what happens next!

Thanks:D

Originally Posted by Ant2011

Anyway, this is coming along well! I'll keep checking up on it to see where it goes !

Thank you:)

Chapter 5 will be coming soon!

[Fistodragon]

I'm looking for some guest stars to star in my next comic. It may be the next upcoming comic or it may be a few issues down. I will find a spot for you^_^ Please post registrations here!

Name:
Age:
Gender:
Personality:
Preference: (battles or contests)
Trainer Title: (i.e. trainer sprite. ex: bug catcher. nothing before d/p or after hg/ss)
Pokemon 1: (species, nickname(if it has one), and gender)
Pokemon 2: (species, nickname(if it has one), and gender)
Pokemon 3: (species, nickname(if it has one), and gender)
Pokemon 4: (species, nickname(if it has one), and gender)
Pokemon 5: (species, nickname(if it has one), and gender)
Pokemon 6: (species, nickname(if it has one), and gender)

[SuperUltraZekrom]

Name: Axel
Age: 16
Gender: Male
Personality: Quiet, Shy, but loves to battle, even if he loses.
Preference: Battles (battles or contests)
Trainer Title: PkMn Trainer(i.e. trainer sprite. ex: bug catcher. nothing before d/p or after hg/ss)
Pokemon 1: Shiny Charmander, Blaze, male(species, nickname(if it has one), and gender)
Pokemon 2: (species, nickname(if it has one), and gender)
Pokemon 3: (species, nickname(if it has one), and gender)
Pokemon 4: (species, nickname(if it has one), and gender)
Pokemon 5: (species, nickname(if it has one), and gender)
Pokemon 6: (species, nickname(if it has one), and gender)

For the sprites just use the Ace trainer sprites with red hair and dark clothing.

Here is Shiny Charmanders overworld sprites, just in case you need them.

http://imageshack.us/photo/my-images...owryperior.png

[Cheerful Cherubi]

You have a typo. It's Treecko, not Treeko.

[Fistodragon]

Originally Posted by Cheerful Cherubi

You have a typo. It's Treecko, not Treeko.

Eh, thanks. I just did my best on pronouncing the name.

Sorry for the delay of the next comic, just busy.