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[Max0596]

Originally Posted by Buoyysel

You're approved. Have fun in the park!

Ah, whoops. I changed a few things, name is now Max, trainer now looks like this:
...my timing skills suck x.x
I also won't be starting right away, I'm really swamped with stuff right now, sorry if this inconveniences you.

[JackHammer360]

Name: Li'l Mike
Age: 16
Gender: Male
Personality: Mike is short,very VERY short.Mike is a part-time beta tester for bad games.Mike enjoys forest strolls and volcanoes

Description: Mike is short.

Pokemon
Eevee(Bold)

[ChainReaction01]

Originally Posted by JackHammer360

Name: Li'l Mike
Age: 16
Gender: Male
Personality: Mike is short,very VERY short.Mike is a part-time beta tester for bad games.Mike enjoys forest strolls and volcanoes

Description: Mike is short.

Pokemon
Eevee(Bold)

Not approved, far too short. I want at least a couple fair-sized paragraphs for both of the Personality and Description sections. Take a look around at existing SUs if you need examples or ideas.

[akdude]

Name: Roark
Age: 24
Gender: Male
Personality: With a calm composure, he never folds under pressure. A very high determination to win at any cost. Short in speech when it comes to conversing with others, but loves to carry on a conversation with his pokemon. With mystery all around him, Roark pushes people away. Roark believes in power and strategy and that no one can rival his abilities in battle
Description:

Spoiler:

Pokemon Captured: none
Pokemon Natures:
Umbreon/Serious
Espeon/Jolly
Park Items: None

[WinterVines]

Originally Posted by akdude

Name: Roark
Age: 24
Gender: Male
Personality: With a calm composure, he never folds under pressure. A very high determination to win at any cost. Short in speech when it comes to conversing with others, but loves to carry on a conversation with his pokemon. With mystery all around him, Roark pushes people away. Roark believes in power and strategy and that no one can rival his abilities in battle
Description:

Spoiler:

Pokemon Captured: none
Pokemon Natures:
Umbreon/Serious
Espeon/Jolly
Park Items: None

Approved. Don't forget to add in your items and mons once you start going on runs! And remember you can always add more about your character as you develop him.