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Old 10-18-2011, 04:56 PM
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You awake to the pitter-patter of the rain against the rooftops and watch as they sail down through the night sky, each landing with a small 'plop' on the ever-growing puddles around you. With a sigh, you rise and take in your surroundings. Behind you, the oaken doors of the Church, the place you had sought shelter the night before - not for religious belief or penitence to God - no, you have long since lost faith in everything. But you came here for shelter, it was a last resort but it had to suffice.

With a sigh, you feel your stomach claw at you from the inside as it lets out a moaning, painful growl. You clutch it as you try to think of the last time you had eaten. A few hours, a day, three? As you go to lie back down and try and sleep the pain away, you hear something.

It's not the pitter patter of the raindrops, no. You can hear a steady beat - footsteps walking by. The sound of them increases which leads you to assume that whoever - or whatever is moving, is heading your direction.

You could lie here and feign sleep, or you could run, or even attack the assailant and take their warm clothes. You could do just about anything, well anything you could do, anything someone useless could do.
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(13:51:02) Khimera: What're you talking about? I'm under siege by raptors
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(13:51:20) Breadfan: not the rapture

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Old 10-19-2011, 02:14 AM
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You awake to the pitter-patter of the rain against the rooftops and watch as they sail down through the night sky, each landing with a small 'plop' on the ever-growing puddles around you. With a sigh, you rise and take in your surroundings. Behind you, the oaken doors of the Church, the place you had sought shelter the night before - not for religious belief or penitence to God - no, you have long since lost faith in everything. But you came here for shelter, it was a last resort but it had to suffice.

With a sigh, you feel your stomach claw at you from the inside as it lets out a moaning, painful growl. You clutch it as you try to think of the last time you had eaten. A few hours, a day, three? As you go to lie back down and try and sleep the pain away, you hear something.

It's not the pitter patter of the raindrops, no. You can hear a steady beat - footsteps walking by. The sound of them increases which leads you to assume that whoever - or whatever is moving, is heading your direction.

You could lie here and feign sleep, or you could run, or even attack the assailant and take their warm clothes. You could do just about anything, well anything you could do, anything someone useless could do.
>Hide nearby and try and catch a glance of the mysterious figure. After all, you don't know who... or what it could be...
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Old 10-19-2011, 08:11 PM
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OOC: Well, been 24 hours and only one reply so I'mma continue

After a little deliberation, you decide to retreat a little, but not too far. Rising slowly, one eye on the surrounding shadows, you get to your feet and scamper along. The noise of the clattering rain masks your footsteps over the rain-drenched grass as you move away. You drop down onto your stomach in order to crouch. Immediately, regretting your haste to move, you slip a little in the mud, making a squelching sound.

There's a quick shuffling sound and fear rises up inside you like an inflating balloon. There's another scuffle, this time its much closer. You close your eyes, not sure what you're even afraid of.

Suddenly, two dark amber eyes meet your grey ones. A curled tail pops out of the long grass and the creature's violet skin contrasts magnificently with the dark grass around. Its buck-toothed grin is oddly comforting. Its head twitches a tad.

"Ta, ta. Ratata!" it chirrups.

You have always wanted a Pokemon. But they were dirty, especially rats. Not like you're much better, though. Still, maybe it'd be good to not be so lonely; to have a future perhaps?
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(13:50:47) Breadfan: (as evidenced by the lack of rapture right now)
(13:51:02) Khimera: What're you talking about? I'm under siege by raptors
(13:51:15) Breadfan: that's jurassic park
(13:51:20) Breadfan: not the rapture
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Old 10-19-2011, 08:11 PM
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OOC: Well, been 24 hours and only one reply so I'mma continue

After a little deliberation, you decide to retreat a little, but not too far. Rising slowly, one eye on the surrounding shadows, you get to your feet and scamper along. The noise of the clattering rain masks your footsteps over the rain-drenched grass as you move away. You drop down onto your stomach in order to crouch. Immediately, regretting your haste to move, you slip a little in the mud, making a squelching sound.

There's a quick shuffling sound and fear rises up inside you like an inflating balloon. There's another scuffle, this time its much closer. You close your eyes, not sure what you're even afraid of.

Suddenly, two dark amber eyes meet your grey ones. A curled tail pops out of the long grass and the creature's violet skin contrasts magnificently with the dark grass around. Its buck-toothed grin is oddly comforting. Its head twitches a tad.

"Ta, ta. Ratata!" it chirrups.

You have always wanted a Pokemon. But they were dirty, especially rats. Not like you're much better, though. Still, maybe it'd be good to not be so lonely; to have a future perhaps?
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(13:51:15) Breadfan: that's jurassic park
(13:51:20) Breadfan: not the rapture
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Old 10-20-2011, 12:56 PM
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>See if the Pokemon is friendly and ask if it could accompany you.
>Look around for any supplies you may have.
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Old 10-23-2011, 07:08 PM
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OOC: Great to see only one person cares for this :|

After a little bit of thought, you realize that having a Pokemon would actually be pretty darn cool. As you extend a hand to pat the little Ratata on the head, its eyes glaze over and it leaps backwards, diving beneath the tall grass. With a look of bewilderment, you turn around to see a large black dog covered in silver rings and an orange underbelly. The rain pours down its angry face and it snarls at you.

You hesitantly make to your feet before it lunges at you, gnashing its pointed teeth.

"Dour, dour!" it yelps in anger as you make a frantic attempt to scramble backwards and out of its way. It lunges at you. Desperately, you shove your fist forwards, hoping to make some sort of contact and deterung the beast. From your closed eyes, you hear a wince of pain. You allow your locked eyelids to slide open and you see the black mutt lying on the ground, whimpering in pain. After a quick look around, you see the purple rodent sitting there, grooming itself.

You exchange a look of bewilderment, but your grin quickly fades from your face when you hear a howl in the distance. Followed by another, and another.

"Ratata, come on. Let's get out of here," you say. You grap your crappy rucksack and run through the grass and out towards the gates. You push them open until they grudgingly move with a creaking sound. You look down the pavement. To the left, there is a dark shrouded forest. Huge trees tower above the horizon. To the right, there is the cracked street. A lone streetlamp flickers and illuminates the smashed windows of the houses and cars smashed into. You hear a bang, almost like gunshot in the distance.

Where to go?
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(13:51:20) Breadfan: not the rapture
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Old 10-23-2011, 09:52 PM
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>Go down the street. It may seem dangerous, but it is better than traveling alone!
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Old 10-24-2011, 11:37 PM
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> Go to the seediest bar in town, have a drink, and ramble on about how awesome your Ratatta is, Jr. Trainer Joey.
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Old 03-25-2012, 07:27 AM
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> wouldn't you be underage?
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