We don't care about the character sheets right now; you can add them on as you go along, but we only need to know about Ray right now.
And then there's the chapter itself. Even if it is a WP (work in progress), you should write it all down on a word editor - even Notepad would do - so that you can save it and come back to it later. There is absolutely no description, no background, no action, no anything. Who is Ray? Is he a fledgling Trainer? Is he a new Champion of the Pokémon League? Is he a shiny Magmar? As a guideline, all chapters should be at least three pages long - this chapter isn't even three sentences. Also, there should be a space after ' going,"' and "Ray," so that it looks more like this:
"We better get going," said Ray, "it is starting to rain."