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Old 08-25-2010, 07:24 PM
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hey i would like someone to judge my avatar for me
First , you need to crit someone else's work to get crits on yours. :/

Second, what is your avatar even supposed to be?
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Old 08-25-2010, 07:28 PM
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an elite evil pichu
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Old 08-25-2010, 07:43 PM
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It looks like a demented, bald Marge Simpson elf impersonator. -_-
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Old 08-26-2010, 04:44 AM
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Well... it's got no background, was left to be resized, and is impossible to make heads or tails out of. This is the graphics section, yo, try and put in some graphics next time.
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Old 08-26-2010, 08:28 PM
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hey i would like someone to judge my avatar for me
We're not even sure (probably you didn't) make that avvy. Plus, artwork like that belongs in the Fan Art section. =\
If you want someone to rate your avvy, go to the Trivia game section and go to the "Rate the Avatar above you".
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Old 08-27-2010, 05:16 PM
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Okie-doke.
So since I appear to have been skipped over and I have more stuff to show anyway, GET READY FOR A BARRAGE OF UGLY NEWBIE GRAPHICS. All of them were requests or gifts for people on another site, so there's a truckload of KH in them. There are a lot of problems in 'em, I know, but... have mercy? Please?

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Old 08-29-2010, 08:14 PM
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Okie-doke.
So since I appear to have been skipped over and I have more stuff to show anyway, GET READY FOR A BARRAGE OF UGLY NEWBIE GRAPHICS. All of them were requests or gifts for people on another site, so there's a truckload of KH in them. There are a lot of problems in 'em, I know, but... have mercy? Please?

:3

(...there seems to be not much changed here. the text is a little too clashy with the black background, and you might want to clean up the white circles a litte. they look like crumpled paper.)
(not very good here, i don't think... the background behind Cid is... boring. in my opinion, the eye should observe both the background and the render/C4D as a whole, and the eye is distracted by 1. the render and 2. the writing. also, a border around the background would be nice.

i do, however, like the bar floating above the background; i've never seen it before.)
(this one is much better, background-wise. but it would be better with a border.)
(nothing wrong here; though the second orange one looks less better than the first.)
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^--inspired by the song Dracula, by Rob Zombie. give all the comments you can, this is the first tag i've made with lyrics in the bg.
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Old 08-29-2010, 11:04 PM
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^--inspired by the song Dracula, by Rob Zombie. give all the comments you can, this is the first tag i've made with lyrics in the bg.
Okay I see what you were trying to do but I just think that it doesn't really work all too well, you have way too many lyrics in the back and to me it looks dumb. Try using a lot less and make them bigger.

Whoever comments next, comment on MW's I don't need any just wanted to give input.
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Old 09-05-2010, 05:22 PM
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Made this last night.
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Old 09-05-2010, 05:39 PM
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Made this last night.
It's nice, but I can't make much out. His skin looks a weird colour; was that natural or were you changing his colours? The blue things just look weird but otherwise it's a great banner. First banner I've seen without text in a while.

I was following the Lyrics tutorial by Mawile_rocks. I can't edit it, but tell me what I should improve in my next lyrics banner.
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Old 09-05-2010, 06:49 PM
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Stock: http://slickeel.files.wordpress.com/...ft-2-17621.jpg

Of course I play around with colors and lighting.
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Old 09-05-2010, 09:39 PM
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It's nice, but I can't make much out. His skin looks a weird colour; was that natural or were you changing his colours? The blue things just look weird but otherwise it's a great banner. First banner I've seen without text in a while.

I was following the Lyrics tutorial by Mawile_rocks. I can't edit it, but tell me what I should improve in my next lyrics banner.
lmfao. Not to be rude but theres kinda some things wrong with this crit. The blue things pretty much make it original work, because otherwise it would just be the Starcraft 2 boxart zoomed in. Also, there is text, it's just really really small. So I would change that in the future TS. Try to make it more noticeable, otherwise the placings alright.
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Old 09-05-2010, 09:41 PM
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Yeah the text on that one is kinda crap. Anyways, I made three more today...







As for this one:

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It's very basic. I suggest learning new methods to blend stock (default blending options are a no-go). Also check out dafont.com for some more interesting font. Lyrics in the back don't really look good that often, especially not in huge prominent font.
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Old 09-12-2010, 12:08 AM
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Yeah the text on that one is kinda crap. Anyways, I made three more today...






First:
Honestly, the lighting is bad, there needs to be a little more depth with the focal and the lighting from the blaster needs to me more subtle rather than "right there" as it is. Blend the focal in a little more, it looks sort of copy/pasta'd in there.

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flow is good, the composition needs to be fixed (idk how but it just needs to be), your focal is way too overused and its like seeing it makes me want to throw up blood (a little harsh but its true). with all your grungish looking bg/textures need to be able to blend into the bg to make a more subtle blend look. and the right side is a little empty and the c4d you have out there needs to be erased or moved toward the focal. also try staying away from putting your focal dead center

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I cant really say too much on this one, except work on depth and stay away from centered focals. also your lighting is off, work on that as well

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Old 09-12-2010, 04:04 AM
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Figures that there'd be at least one person who doesn't understand the concept of trying new things and not making tags that look the same as everyone else's with the same overused blurry effects. If my assumption is correct, you probably use a Mac.

As for the tag, blurry. The light is way too bright and so the eye doesn't initially know where to find the focal. There also appears to be something going on that seems cool, but it's too damn blurry to tell.
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