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Old 11-29-2009, 03:58 PM
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Old 11-29-2009, 04:01 PM
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Hey guys! I posted the revisions for my Story "Chasing Rotom" almost a month ago and Elrond has been, and will be, too busy to regrade it any time soon. I asked Emma if people are allowed to regrade stories that they didn't grade the first time and she said yes, so can I please get somebdy to regrade this for me? I wrote this story back in August x_x. Thanks a bunch!

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Old 11-29-2009, 04:03 PM
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I believe I do, even though I haven't really been writing much- or at all lately. However, I'm faced with a problem: this story has no christmas feeling at all. Which would be all fine and dandy if it wasn't that I always seem to get the unofficial theme of this contest. If I go for something simple, rather happy I get put in a contest where there're only sad stories, and if I do something different, I get surrounded by happy-go-lucky stories.

I really can't get a break.

So I'm preparing a contingency plan, hopefully finishing a less serious story that I've been dragging for months.
Aww, whatever you choose to go for, I'm sure it'll be great. I've never stuck to the "theme" of the contest, but sometimes it does seem that everybody unofficially decides to write the same "theme" sometimes. xD

My plot, really, is more suited for Halloween. It has a stuck-up mage (though she calls herself a witch), spells gone awry, and dark magic. Maybe one of these years I'll write a Christmas story. *ponders*

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My plot, really, is more suited for Halloween. It has a stuck-up mage (though she calls herself a witch), spells gone awry, and dark magic. Maybe one of these years I'll write a Christmas story. *ponders*

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Mine kind of is too. Let's just say it involves Satan and a fiddle.
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Old 11-29-2009, 04:47 PM
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The Devil went down to Georgia, looking for a soul to steal...

I want to enter the WWC, but I never have a good story to submit :P The 'stories as votes' idea sounds really cool, though!
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The Devil went down to Georgia, looking for a soul to steal...

I want to enter the WWC, but I never have a good story to submit :P The 'stories as votes' idea sounds really cool, though!
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Aww, whatever you choose to go for, I'm sure it'll be great. I've never stuck to the "theme" of the contest, but sometimes it does seem that everybody unofficially decides to write the same "theme" sometimes. xD

My plot, really, is more suited for Halloween. It has a stuck-up mage (though she calls herself a witch), spells gone awry, and dark magic. Maybe one of these years I'll write a Christmas story. *ponders*

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I'll just said it's called Guilt Trip. And if I do it right, people won't really have any wish to celebrate... or I'll just screw this time around too and nobody will vote for me, which would be kind of depressing if I wasn't along just for the ride and a mildly beneficial feedback on the story (mildly because I don't dwelve too deeply on what it says xP)
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Old 12-02-2009, 12:07 AM
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I made that. A loooong time ago.

This doesn't exactly belong here, but I've noticed that particular piece of mine floating around... multiple people use it, and it makes me want to make everyone take it down and put a better one up. Dx /cries

Must make this connect to the topic somehow...
Uhhh... Story link? THERE. CONNECTED.
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Old 12-02-2009, 12:41 AM
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I'm gonna attempt to write my first URPG story by Christmas.
I pretty much suck at writing storys since I never give enough detail and everything.

So wish me luck pe2k :3
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Old 12-02-2009, 03:46 AM
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I'm unsure about my capitalization in the sentence, and would like somebody to take a look at it.

However, in the inky darkness that only luck we’ve had were a few shards, pearls, and a few other items that didn’t concern us, but we kept every last bit we could find thinking we could sell it later for some more food and equipment.

The worlds in bold are what I'm really focused on, and the general scenario is in the Underground.
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I'm unsure about my capitalization in the sentence, and would like somebody to take a look at it.

However, in the inky darkness that only luck we’ve had were a few shards, pearls, and a few other items that didn’t concern us, but we kept every last bit we could find thinking we could sell it later for some more food and equipment.

The worlds in bold are what I'm really focused on, and the general scenario is in the Underground.
I think that that that (xD, the one underlined above) should be the, but even then it still sounds wrong :\, but the words you bolded are fine :)
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I think that that that (xD, the one underlined above) should be the, but even then it still sounds wrong :\, but the words you bolded are fine :)
Thanks, and I think I've got a better sentence after you pointed the that/the mistake along with remembering the real word for the item that I was wanted.

In the inky darkness, however, we’ve only had enough luck to uncover a few shards, spheres, and a few other items that didn’t concern us, but we kept every last bit we could find thinking we could sell it later for some more food and equipment.
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Old 12-02-2009, 07:22 PM
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Thanks, and I think I've got a better sentence after you pointed the that/the mistake along with remembering the real word for the item that I was wanted.

In the inky darkness, however, we’ve only had enough luck to uncover a few shards, spheres, and a few other items that didn’t concern us, but we kept every last bit we could find thinking we could sell it later for some more food and equipment.
In my opinion, I think you should eliminate 'however' and there needs to be a comma between find and thinking. That would make it sound better. Also, one of those 'it's should be 'them'. Like this:

In the inky darkness, we've only had enough luck to uncover a few shards, spheres, and a few other items that didn't concern us, but we kept every last bit we could find, thinking we could sell them later for some more food and equipment.

Even with those edits, it's sort of a run-on sentence. =/ The 'in the inky darkness' part sounds weird, like something should be before it, or it should be after the first part. It's just... a weird sentence overall. Maybe you could use something like this:

We've only had enough luck to uncover a few treasures in the inky darkness, but we kept every last bit we could find, even the items that didn't concern us, in the hope that we could sell them later for food and equipment.

(This is me contributing to the thread in atonement. I freaking love grammar and sentence structure. <3 I can't explain it.)
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Hey guys! I posted the revisions for my Story "Chasing Rotom" almost a month ago and Elrond has been, and will be, too busy to regrade it any time soon. I asked Emma if people are allowed to regrade stories that they didn't grade the first time and she said yes, so can I please get somebdy to regrade this for me? I wrote this story back in August x_x. Thanks a bunch!

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I'm writing my first story right now. It's a story deal, so I gotta get it done fast, even though I've barely had time to do anything with it, cuz I'm really busy right now.

It's a Hard level story, I suck at writing stories, and I don't have Microsoft Word or anything like it.

Do you think I'll make it? I'm gonna put up another post for it in just a second.....
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