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Old 11-09-2008, 02:50 PM
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Heh, I know I'm late and all, but that was a great chapter.
Nice to know that I'm not the only one who has thought of using Eon as a name.
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Old 11-09-2008, 08:59 PM
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Heh, I know I'm late and all, but that was a great chapter.
Nice to know that I'm not the only one who has thought of using Eon as a name.
No worries, ash. Glad you liked it. ^_^

Yup, I thought Eon would fit in well with what I'm going to do. Hehehe...eep! Spoiler! >_<
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Old 11-10-2008, 07:15 PM
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That was an amazing chapter! You really scared me when Rye woke up at the previous one but everything's okay now! It was nice learning more about his past -much were explained. The concept of a Dark army fighting another Dark army seems bad... really bad actually.

Oh and a small review of the previous chapter too. I think it was pretty interesting with the information about the first Light Pokemon and what he accomplished though I'd like to learn even more about him. I also liked the description of the temple!

Great job on both chapters! Keep it up!
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Old 11-10-2008, 08:07 PM
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O_O *stunned into silence yet again*

*snapped* LET ME AT HIM! I'LL KILL HIM!! DX

I've got it. *returns Aires to pokeball*

Well, it's safe to say you got your point across Gem. =^-^'=
Kris is too stunned to speak, and Aires has snapped yet again. *mumbles* Can't say that I blame her this time.

*shaking head* To even be able to go on and simply function after something like that... You've got more than physical strength Rye. I'd say you're will is much stronger than you think. B)

I'm just glad that Zanna was actually able to pull him out of it, and that he's actually alright. I'm sure Kris is glad too. =^-^=

O_O ... ... Wow.

Uhhh...yeah. Can't wait for the next chapter really!




You used two different punctuations for the quotes, and that should be fist.



I think maybe it should be startled.



Should be past.
I think that's all
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Thankyou! you found the miss-spelling i found but couldn't find again! yay! lol... and its the part i have put in bold
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Old 11-10-2008, 09:07 PM
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That was an amazing chapter! You really scared me when Rye woke up at the previous one but everything's okay now! It was nice learning more about his past -much were explained. The concept of a Dark army fighting another Dark army seems bad... really bad actually.

Oh and a small review of the previous chapter too. I think it was pretty interesting with the information about the first Light Pokemon and what he accomplished though I'd like to learn even more about him. I also liked the description of the temple!

Great job on both chapters! Keep it up!
Yes, I scared a lot of people, I think. ^^' It was necessary.

Hehehehe, yup. A dark army fighting another one can't be good, that's for certain.

Thanks, Golden Ray! Don't worry, the temple will be back! ^_^
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I read the chapter, and I honestly want to pound Rye's father into the dust.

Josh: Not that you could do it...

*Writes him into oblivion*

Liana: Blessed silence. Anyways, I'm with Nazo. How could someone be so heartless? And you know whats really angering me? The fact that a Pokemon is doing it!

What she means is that most stories and such are the humans turning the Pokemon bad and putting them in cages. Now, we have a Pokemon doing. Does that seem at all angering to anyone? I know I'm feeling anger.

On another note, have we read about Eon before? And furthermore, what happened to her?
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Old 11-11-2008, 12:32 AM
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Geez, er...calm down... ^^'

Kris is stunned? Again...? xD Sorry, Kris. Didn't mean to stun you.


Rye: I've struggled, yet I've overcome. Fear is a weakness; it's best to forget it.

But feelings, after all, is what makes us living beings.


Zanna: I hope he's okay...that must have been tough on Rye, even for him.

Oh! More typos! *stabs* Thankyou, Kris! =]

Virok: Bah! That only shows that you were too weak; not powerful enough to overcome the light, by the looks of it. So naive.

Rye: My pleasure. I only hope it's enough. *smiles*

And I know about wounds that never heal. I, too, have suffered its wrath. I only wish...he would see things the way I do.

Life is like a beautiful flower; it may seem a little dull, but wait until it blossoms...

And I don't think that would be the best course of action. I hope it doesn't come to that.
...Well, I don't know about you, but sometimes revenge is necessary...Your father just doesn't understand, Rye.

And Nazo is about to kill him 0.o


Weak?! Fool, you have NO idea who you are messing with! Your attacks would be helpless against me-I would cut you into tiny pieces and send them into a black hole spawned from my rage!

And I thought Future Sonic got angry

Sometimes it is best to forget the past...Yet it is also important to remember it.
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Old 11-11-2008, 01:55 AM
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I read the chapter, and I honestly want to pound Rye's father into the dust.

Josh: Not that you could do it...

*Writes him into oblivion*

Liana: Blessed silence. Anyways, I'm with Nazo. How could someone be so heartless? And you know whats really angering me? The fact that a Pokemon is doing it!

What she means is that most stories and such are the humans turning the Pokemon bad and putting them in cages. Now, we have a Pokemon doing. Does that seem at all angering to anyone? I know I'm feeling anger.

On another note, have we read about Eon before? And furthermore, what happened to her?
I think a lot of people want to pound Virok right now. xD

Rye: Would that be such a bad thing...?

No, you wouldn't have heard of Eon yet. I just recently introduced her, but she'll be back. I'm giving her a major role later on. Wouldn't it be fun to see how her and Rye get along? xD I'll provide more info about her soon. =]

Rye: He never will. His selfishness knows no bounds. v_v

Virok: *yawns* Oh, sorry, were you talking to me? I didn't relaise you were that small...eh, it can't be helped. *smirks*

Rye: We learn from our mistakes and listen to our hearts. That is my way.
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Old 11-13-2008, 12:48 AM
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Well Virok, you just got your funeral...

*Attacks Virok* NO ONE MOCKS ME AND GETS AWAY WITH IT MORTAL!

....*Hiding behind Grassy*

True Rye...Still, I can't forget those that Tatsujin killed...They must never be forgotten.

...Meh, I attempt to kill the humans in revenge, and end up saving them instead...That's what seems to always happen.
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Old 11-13-2008, 01:35 AM
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Virok: Funeral? Come now, I'm too young. I'll just get Maske here to stop that annoying hedgehog.

Maske: Grrr! *growls and lunges at Nazo*

Rye: Those should never be forgotten. Remember, Cami, that your true courage and power has to be gained.

It is something that you have experienced through life. Let those deaths fuel your heart; let them guide you and never lead you astray. Only then will you find a life worth living by doing the best you can.


???: Eh, foolish humans. What do they think they can gain by this? You deny your path, Shadow.

Ack! That character was not meant to be here! He's for my new fic with Scooter. He plays an important role. *nods*
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Old 11-13-2008, 02:06 AM
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*Completely smacks Maske out of his way*

XD You gonna put Cami in your story? I'm honest-I love seeing how other people depict my characters XD

...She'll only do it if you put one of her characters in your story.

How do I deny a path when I choose it by my own free will?

Thanks Rye-you're right. They are the ones who fuel my flames...A power I thought I knew, but only just realized how to control. I shall never forget them, and even those I myself ended their lives drive me forward. I do hope to bring Nazo back-I feel that he and Sonic should forgive each other...I will never stop until I accomplish that.

....Thanks Cami?
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Old 11-13-2008, 03:51 AM
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Do you want Cami in my story? O_o I wasn't planning it, but I might be able to...

Maske: *growls and whimpers*

Virok: Heh, fool...

Fair trade, right? xD Good going, Cami. How would you like Scooter or Swift? Um...maybe not Swift, he has a really big identity that I'd like to keep secret right now.

???: Your will has been tampered with. What you were originally designed to do...that no longer exists.

How can one deny the path of destiny?


Rye: I have had a long time of solitude to figure those things out.

What may have burdened me once shall never exist again. Thank you, Cami.
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Ha, I finally finished reading the fic! *makes 3-point basket*

Rye's father is pretty darn heartless, but something about him sounds kinda foolish to me...

And I was also slightly disturbed when Zanna kissed a ghost.
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XD Scooter might be interesting with his big ego...He'd get on Future's nerves, that's for sure. Skye...Not so much XD I wonder where he'll fit in...What universe? Hmmm...You don't have to put her in, but a twisted Shadow? Wonder how she'd handle her lover being like that...She handles the predicament in DoD quite well, but that's only because she herself is in an awkward position...

*Tackles Virok*

Thanks for what Rye? You are the one who put your past behind you, not me...

My destiny...My destiny has always been to ensure the human's well being. Although now, I have even more to live for...

...Wow. Shadow can be romantic XD
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Old 11-16-2008, 08:56 AM
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Ha, I finally finished reading the fic! *makes 3-point basket*

Rye's father is pretty darn heartless, but something about him sounds kinda foolish to me...

And I was also slightly disturbed when Zanna kissed a ghost.
Yay! Thankyou, Lus! ^_^ Was it good?

Yeah, he is. No wonder Rye's the way he is, poor Elekid...

He was NOT a ghost! D= Altair is a Light Spirit. See? He's good. =] But I do get what you mean.

Lol, Scooter and his ego. I wouldn't want him to catch you saying that. You'd be upside-down so fast you wouldn't know what was happening. xD


Virok: Fool! Surrender to my might! *Punches Nazo on the forehead*

Rye: Yes, but these little talks help me, sometimes. Surely they must help you?

Swift: Ensure their well being? Are YOU sure? That's not what you were programmed to do.

How...do you give up that? How do you control yourself...?


Shadow! He lives for me, right?!!!
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