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Old 11-01-2008, 02:49 AM
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Mousey! *Hugs Zanna clearly still out of it*

*Muttering* Sure, do not give ME a hug...I have problems too, you know.

I don't think Kris will be too happy with the next Dark Storm chapter either...0.o
I'll give you a hug, Nazo. I have special sympathy for deleted-from-shows characters. *hugs*

*Mimicking chip*Whadya do?!
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Old 11-01-2008, 09:52 AM
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Wow really cool chapter! I found a few typos though.

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I closed m eyes for a brief second
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She told me that the poison had only been temporary; that Balian sill cared about her too much to kill her.
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I saw it looked almost exactly like myself, only slighter larger and more graceful
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I glanced down at my stomach nd removed the bandages
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“Then how will you fair?!”
fare


The story is getting really more interesting. I liked the part with the ancient temple and Altair. Also, I really hope that they'll find a way to solve whatever happened to Rye soon. D=

I liked that you gave Zanna healing powers, but didn't make it so that she could cure others instantly without a problem-that would be too easy. I'm guessing it will be hard for her to learn the other powers that Light pokémon have, and they won't be easy to use either. I'm looking forward to the next one!
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Old 11-02-2008, 06:29 AM
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Mousey! *Hugs Zanna clearly still out of it*

*Muttering* Sure, do not give ME a hug...I have problems too, you know.

I don't think Kris will be too happy with the next Dark Storm chapter either...0.o
Zanna: Oof! She needs to take some pills! O_o'

More typos? Jeez, word doesn't do much these days. And I re-read it! O_O'

Anyway, thanks, Scy. Let me change those.

Nope. Anything is far from easy in my story. xD These powers will take time to unlock and will sap energy if Zanna uses them. If she uses a too powerful 'spell' or for too long, it can seriously hurt her.

Reminds me of Eragon. xD
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Old 11-04-2008, 12:51 AM
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*Bonked on head by Sonic* X.x

*Hugged by scalec* Getting hugged by a male...Awkward...

Poor Rye T^T
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Old 11-04-2008, 06:41 AM
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*Bonked on head by Sonic* X.x

*Hugged by scalec* Getting hugged by a male...Awkward...

Poor Rye T^T
Aww, Cami, don't worry. I'm sure he'll be up before you know it! ^^

Rye: I hope I am too. Being unconscious really isn't that fun. v_v

Zanna: You're telling me.
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Old 11-04-2008, 06:30 PM
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Hi LL, and i was wondering, will you continue with redeemer? just wondering, and you need to do a sequel to this story, it would be awesome!
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Hi LL, and i was wondering, will you continue with redeemer? just wondering, and you need to do a sequel to this story, it would be awesome!
Redeemer? Yes, but not right now.

Also, I've already planned for a sequel and maybe another after that.

Expect the next chapter of StormRiders to be a few days away.
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Old 11-04-2008, 11:34 PM
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X.x

You have two sequel's planned? Grassy beat you by one more XD Although she's considering doing a prequel to Dark Storm, although it may drive her nuts to watch all the SonicX episodes again XD

I hope so Rye...But, what if you attack your friends?

Being unable to stop one's self is very unpleasant. Take it from an expert-you atleast have people you are close to. I...Well, I am already dead So it does not matter for me.

Zanna, you better be prepared...
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Old 11-05-2008, 05:56 AM
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Yup. And Sonic, haven't you heard of quality over quantity? xD Gotcha.

Btw, do you know of a site where I can watch Sonic X online? I swear I can't find any...


Rye: Then I will be filled with sorrow. But it is something I am used to; something I can easily overcome.

To be close to someone is a new experience for me. These feelings...I have never felt them before. But then, I never get close to anyone.

For what I do, it is a price I am gladly willing to pay. v_v


Zanna: I'm not afraid. Whatever Rye throws at me, I'm sure I can handle.

That's even IF he hurts me. I don't think I've ever really seen him vicious...
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Old 11-05-2008, 11:23 PM
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Good point :/ 4kids.com has episodes, although the new format prevents some episodes from being seen (season 2/3 selectors do not work). Thankfully, Grassy was far enough into season three to be able to see the last episodes. She can't see the one with my Dark form anymore though

I never had any friends

That's what I thought against Sonic...I ended up getting poisoned and Shadow going berserk.
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Old 11-06-2008, 04:11 AM
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Good point :/ 4kids.com has episodes, although the new format prevents some episodes from being seen (season 2/3 selectors do not work). Thankfully, Grassy was far enough into season three to be able to see the last episodes. She can't see the one with my Dark form anymore though

I never had any friends

That's what I thought against Sonic...I ended up getting poisoned and Shadow going berserk.
I tried that one. They don't work for me at all. >_<

Rye: You'd want friends. Their a good asset to have.

Zanna: Uh...I'll be careful? ^_^'
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Old 11-06-2008, 04:39 AM
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You could always try Youtube. ^^
Actually, this particular channel --> here <-- has episodes 1 through 78.

Friends are good. And I'm sure you'll be fine Rye... At least, I certainly hope so.


Yeah, there's probably nothing for you to worry about Kris. =^-^'=
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Old 11-06-2008, 10:12 AM
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Wow, thanks, Kris! ^^

Do you know anywhere that has all the episodes? That's what I'd want...or a whole season at least? It's so hard to find.


Rye: I thank you for your concern, dear Kris. Hopefully I shall be fine.

Zanna: I'll make sure you are! >=D

Rye: Thankyou...Zanna.
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Old 11-06-2008, 06:49 PM
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XD im back, and two sequels!? AWESOME! uh oh.... brain overload.... *dead*
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Old 11-07-2008, 12:26 AM
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Uh Kris? I think there were only 78 episodes made

And it ended on a cliffhanger...


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I realize that, although after what I have done I can never make friends...Nor allies...

Do be careful Zanna...I sense many dangers ahead for both you and myself.
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