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Old 09-01-2008, 06:26 PM
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Sorry I've been neglecting the story, and left you all hanging, but I'll get back into it soon. My bottle of inspiration status is currently: O - Not a single drop left.
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[12:38:59 AM] GallantlyGlaceon: ...So how do we do this? XD
[12:39:20 AM] Sight of the Stars: it's nothing really big, just usually a note in your sig that's all like 'paired with soandso'
[12:39:44 AM] Sight of the Stars: just be like "SIGHT OF THE STARZ IS MAH BIZNITCH"
[12:39:57 AM] GallantlyGlaceon: XDDD
[12:39:59 AM] Sight of the Stars: and I'll be like "GALLANTLYGLACEON IS MAH HOE."
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Old 09-01-2008, 06:59 PM
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Really? Hmm...I'll fill it back up! *Held back*

No way! With your luck, you'll put poison in it!

*Looks down at bottle, has a skull/crossbone mark on it* ...Point taken.
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Old 09-01-2008, 07:00 PM
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Lolz. Nice try, but I think posion will end up with Vanessa and I dying.
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[12:38:59 AM] GallantlyGlaceon: ...So how do we do this? XD
[12:39:20 AM] Sight of the Stars: it's nothing really big, just usually a note in your sig that's all like 'paired with soandso'
[12:39:44 AM] Sight of the Stars: just be like "SIGHT OF THE STARZ IS MAH BIZNITCH"
[12:39:57 AM] GallantlyGlaceon: XDDD
[12:39:59 AM] Sight of the Stars: and I'll be like "GALLANTLYGLACEON IS MAH HOE."
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Old 09-01-2008, 07:12 PM
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I'm cursed I tell ya! Cursed! Watch! *Pokes Shadow*

*Vaporizes into dust*

See?

*Staring down at dust* Shadow?
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Old 09-01-2008, 09:14 PM
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*looks at dust* oh... dust! vacuum!*vacuums up dust*
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Old 10-23-2008, 01:53 AM
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As mentioned in Starlight, Pokemon Is My Life is back! Hey, you all know that Pokemon Is My Life will end at Chapter 19, right? It'll be the last chapter.

***

Chapter 18: Paths of a Miracle

That sensation.

It flooded through me.

I felt... lifted, almost invincible. I rose from the bed, and tried to stand. I stumbled, but Marcus caught me. We embraced, gripping each other tightly.

"Thank you." I said into his ear.

"You're welcome." he replied. I gave him a little kiss on the cheek and giggled. Carla approached us.

"I would let you go now, but god darn regulations say questioning has to take place. Come with me." Carla said, motioning to me to follow. I left Marcus and followed Carla.

I explained everything to her-from that faithful day in the meadow to now, where I am- and cried at moments, but I made it through.

"I understand, Vanessa," Carla sighed, "You're just a woman that had every wrong done to you, and only some right." I nodded.

She was right.

"Thank you, Carla, amy I leave this place, now?" I asked.

"Yes, Vanessa, go."

And so Marcus, the Pokemon, and I left, and flew on Flame and Flare all the way to my private property on the Floroma Meadow.

***

Carla knocked polietly on the door labeled 'CEO of the Pokemon FBI Agency, Jonathan Clarkson'. The door opened, and a tall man in a tuxedo with chocolate brown hair opened the door.

"Ahh... Carla!" he exclaimed, "Have a seat, have a seat." Carla sat in a chair on the opposite side of the CEO's desk. He continued talking.

"I am offering you a new mission. I want you to carry it out-" he was cut off by Carla, who stood up, knocking her chair to the ground.

"Either you find yourself another agent, or the mission isn't done at all. Your employees treated Vanessa wrong, so I quit." She ripped the badge off of her uniform, tore the uniform off, and was left with a sky blue shirt.

Carla then walked out of the room, proud of herself.

***

We landed on the meadow, and examined it. There was a lump of dirt with a tombstone in the distance, sitting on the hill and basking in the sunset. We approached it, and kneeled down by the grave.

"I never even got to say good-bye..." I weeped. Marcus rubbed my back caressingly.

"I bet if I had know her, I would have mourned her passing greatly. Arceus bless the poor Lopunny." Marcus said solemnly. A neon light flashed, and Hypno was out of her ball.

"Hypno!" I cried, reaching for my belt, but Marcus grabbed my hand, and said,

"Look." I looked, and saw Hypno sitting criss-cross on the top of the tombstone. The Alakazam began to glow purple, her spoons bending side to side, front to back. Suddenly, a wisp of brown emerged from the dirt.

We just stared.

"Sassy...?" I asked in disbelief. The wisp of brown took the shape of a Lopunny. It nodded. So Hypno could bring spirits out of their graves. "Good-bye." I said, and waved. "Go back to the world of spirits and rest."

The wisp disipated into the the evening air.

"Awesome." Marcus said. I gave him a shove.

"Hey! What was that for?!" he inquiered, shoving me back.

"For not coming sooner and saving me!" I joked.
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[12:38:59 AM] GallantlyGlaceon: ...So how do we do this? XD
[12:39:20 AM] Sight of the Stars: it's nothing really big, just usually a note in your sig that's all like 'paired with soandso'
[12:39:44 AM] Sight of the Stars: just be like "SIGHT OF THE STARZ IS MAH BIZNITCH"
[12:39:57 AM] GallantlyGlaceon: XDDD
[12:39:59 AM] Sight of the Stars: and I'll be like "GALLANTLYGLACEON IS MAH HOE."
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Old 10-24-2008, 02:34 AM
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new chappie! yay, it rocks. you didnt forget about it!
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Old 10-24-2008, 09:13 PM
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Oh...it ends the next chapter...
Well, I can't help being sad. It was a good story.

But I thought this chapter is wrapping things up very well. Carla quit, Vannesa could say goodbye...

"Thank you, Carla, amy I leave this place, now?" I asked.

That needs to be fixed. 'amy'?
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Old 10-24-2008, 09:25 PM
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Yeah, good chapter XD

Amy?!? *Hides*

Good choice for a mistake though. The name of Sonic's self-proclaimed girlfriend XD
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Old 10-24-2008, 11:13 PM
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It was supposed to be 'may'. lolz

@scalec Don't worry! There'll be an awesome sequel! New chapter soon!
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[12:38:59 AM] GallantlyGlaceon: ...So how do we do this? XD
[12:39:20 AM] Sight of the Stars: it's nothing really big, just usually a note in your sig that's all like 'paired with soandso'
[12:39:44 AM] Sight of the Stars: just be like "SIGHT OF THE STARZ IS MAH BIZNITCH"
[12:39:57 AM] GallantlyGlaceon: XDDD
[12:39:59 AM] Sight of the Stars: and I'll be like "GALLANTLYGLACEON IS MAH HOE."
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lol. i liked that chapter alot, and i hope you go through with a sequel.
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Old 10-25-2008, 03:09 AM
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Why, thank you! I'm using a Spell Check this time so I don't misspell 'may' anymore. ^-^

Also, a bit short because I don't want to spoil anything for the sequel. :]

Chapter 19: A Happily Ever After

Carla took out a Poke Ball from her bag and released a Dragonite.

"Come on, Swift. To Floroma Meadow." she said. She climbed on, and the Dragonite rose to the sky. Carla didn't bother to look back; this place meant nothing to her now. It screamed of misery and torture.

Unlike most of the employees, she had heard their screams. The screams of the ones trapped in their cells and tested on, not to mention tortured. That is another reason why she defended Vanessa. She would have been condemned to the hell-like cells in the basement.

***

Marcus stared out into the sunset with me.

"You know what?" I asked.

"Hmm?"

"This would be a nice place to settle down and build a house."

"We can," Marcus paused. "If you want."

"That would be great." I said, beaming.

"I have the blue prints already laid out in my head."

"Really?" I inquired.

"Yep." Marcus responded. A gentle breeze began to blow.

The next day, we went to a store and bought all of our supplies, and I even bought a Composition Notebook, and wrote down my accounts and experiences in it. Carla's experiences, too. It became a great book.

Where is this book, you ask?

Funny you ask, because you just read it.

So I guess I finally got my

Happily Ever After.
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[12:38:59 AM] GallantlyGlaceon: ...So how do we do this? XD
[12:39:20 AM] Sight of the Stars: it's nothing really big, just usually a note in your sig that's all like 'paired with soandso'
[12:39:44 AM] Sight of the Stars: just be like "SIGHT OF THE STARZ IS MAH BIZNITCH"
[12:39:57 AM] GallantlyGlaceon: XDDD
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awsome last chapter, i like the idea that the story was a book. now, i am just impatiently looking forward for the sequel!
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Old 10-25-2008, 05:28 PM
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Wow, they fell in love really fast XD Some hearts have the stars on their sides...(Carrie Underwood, I love that song!) Good chapter.

Sequels rock.
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I loved this story, I loved the last chapter, and I love that you are making a sequel!
THANK YOU!
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