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Old 06-09-2008, 11:33 PM
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Lightbulb Coby's Adventure

This is a little comic my first
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Old 06-10-2008, 12:04 AM
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Some spelling errors, other than that good comic.
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Old 06-10-2008, 12:05 AM
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Seems like a good comic.
Has potential to improve.
Please add deaths, suspense and drama to make it a great comic!
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Old 06-10-2008, 12:06 AM
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+ Get a better title. Everyone uses, [NAMEHERE] Adventures.
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Old 06-10-2008, 12:26 AM
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+ Get a better title. Everyone uses, [NAMEHERE] Adventures.
Yeah, example:
Earth's Adventure!
That pretty bad! :thumbsdown:
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Old 06-10-2008, 12:30 AM
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Names like: THE SHADOW INVENTION and POKEMON NIGHTMARE attract watchers.
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Old 06-10-2008, 12:34 AM
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Names like: THE SHADOW INVENTION and POKEMON NIGHTMARE attract watchers.
Yes! You can learn from its authors! *coughuscough*
Just change the title into something more mysterious and plotful.
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Old 06-10-2008, 12:40 AM
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Organize your comics more, put them in links and get a banner. *coughmecough*
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Old 06-10-2008, 12:42 AM
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Also get an userbar to get promotion for it. coughmecough
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Old 06-10-2008, 12:47 AM
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Overall i rate your comic 1/10. *coughgetstuffromus*

-3 Bad Title
-1 No Banner not even banner coming soon
-2 No Promoting Userbar
-3 No guestarform
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Old 06-10-2008, 03:50 AM
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You guys, your posts are really starting to be SPAM. Almost every thread you post in becomes an out of place conversation between the two of you, and it really needs to stop.
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Old 06-10-2008, 02:21 PM
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thanks I'm working on a new name and plot agian thanks
can you help me please

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