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Old 06-04-2008, 10:25 AM
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Thanks for your comment, ScytherWolf. ^_^

I'm glad you like my battles. I try to describe them really well, so you know exactly what's going on. I also try my best to make the characters think on their feet, as if they were in a real battle, which they kind of are anyway.

Take your time, there's really no hurry, and I hope to hear from you soon.

~Next chapter up in a couple of hours at the most. =3
I finished reading all the current chapters, and I'm really impressed with your writing style, especially the battle scenes. I love the way you describe the attacks, and Kraal's attack against Scythe was one I really liked in particular^^

So far my favorite character is Rye, and I think he's an awesome character. I'm glad that Scythe won't die though, she's definately one of my favorite pokémon villain characters out of all the stories I've read.

I didn't find any mistakes, and everything is really well written. Great job and keep it up! =3
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Old 06-04-2008, 10:32 AM
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I finished reading all the current chapters, and I'm really impressed with your writing style, especially the battle scenes. I love the way you describe the attacks, and Kraal's attack against Scythe was one I really liked in particular^^

So far my favorite character is Rye, and I think he's an awesome character. I'm glad that Scythe won't die though, she's definately one of my favorite pokémon villain characters out of all the stories I've read.

I didn't find any mistakes, and everything is really well written. Great job and keep it up! =3
That's praise....thanks a whole bunch SW. =3

I love it that you love my battles. They're the best to write because they're so interesting and you have to think exactly like a trainer would. As in, 'this so and so attack is coming...what would you do?'. See, see?

Rye's my favourite character too, and K-pop's.....just check out her sig....lol.

And Scythe won't die just yet...I have something planned for her...
You'll see in upcoming chapters. ^_^

(I double checked this one for mistakes ;) )
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Old 06-04-2008, 10:39 AM
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That's praise....thanks a whole bunch SW. =3

I love it that you love my battles. They're the best to write because they're so interesting and you have to think exactly like a trainer would. As in, 'this so and so attack is coming...what would you do?'. See, see?

Rye's my favourite character too, and K-pop's.....just check out her sig....lol.

And Scythe won't die just yet...I have something planned for her...
You'll see in upcoming chapters. ^_^

(I double checked this one for mistakes ;) )
Yeah, I need to get better at making sure there's no mistakes in my own story ^^;

And yes, the battles were some of the most interesting parts of this story to read. I just love the way you write them-they're exciting and not at all predictable, so it's hard to guess what the outcome will be. (And that is a very good thing! =D)
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Old 06-04-2008, 10:50 AM
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Yeah, I need to get better at making sure there's no mistakes in my own story ^^;

And yes, the battles were some of the most interesting parts of this story to read. I just love the way you write them-they're exciting and not at all predictable, so it's hard to guess what the outcome will be. (And that is a very good thing! =D)
I caught a few mistakes in the first chapter. Are you going to go over them again?

I should do that with mine, but they take waaayyy too long to do that...

Unpredictable battles are my speciality it seems. =3 I'm happy with that.
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AAAAAAHH!! ^o^ I just read the new chapter, and it..was..awesome!
The way you left Kraal and Marilai before, I was sure something bad was going to happen. I certainly didn't see all that coming.
Scythe sounds scary when she turns. Although, I think what Kraal did would scare some people too! That was soooo cool.
Keep up the awesome work, can't wait to see what's coming next. ^^
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Old 06-05-2008, 06:48 AM
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AAAAAAHH!! ^o^ I just read the new chapter, and it..was..awesome!
The way you left Kraal and Marilai before, I was sure something bad was going to happen. I certainly didn't see all that coming.
Scythe sounds scary when she turns. Although, I think what Kraal did would scare some people too! That was soooo cool.
Keep up the awesome work, can't wait to see what's coming next. ^^
Thanks K-pop!

I really love what happened to Scythe, not that you know the whole story yet.....
And Kraal was just so...angry. I kind of feel sorry for the little guy.

Anyway, next chapter should be up in a few days. One thing I forgot to mention is that I have 'parts' to this story. Each 20 chapters or so, I'll start a new part. If you like this, wait until you see part two!
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Chapter 15 was great! Can't wait for Chapter 16... The suspense is killing me!

By the way, for the last time... Thank you
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Old 06-05-2008, 09:15 AM
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Chapter 15 was great! Can't wait for Chapter 16... The suspense is killing me!

By the way, for the last time... Thank you
Haha, no worries, Ash!

I'm glad you like it so much. ^_^

Chapter 16 will be up in a few days. I'll be reading your fic too.

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Old 06-05-2008, 08:28 PM
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Wow! Awesome!

I think Scythe could teach my villains a few things or two.
Course, they haven't been introduced yet.

Either way, I really like Scythe! Isn't that right, Aggranium?

...Aggranium?

*Cowering* And I thought Sonic looked scary when mad...

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Old 06-05-2008, 09:54 PM
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Wow! Awesome!

I think Scythe could teach my villains a few things or two.
Course, they haven't been introduced yet.

Either way, I really like Scythe! Isn't that right, Aggranium?

...Aggranium?

*Cowering* And I thought Sonic looked scary when mad...

Thanks Grassy!

I like Scythe as the main villian, but it can only get better, as you'll soon see....

btw, I hope more of your story gets put up soon. ^_^
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Old 06-06-2008, 09:25 PM
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I read it and I absolutely loved it! I'm happy that Marilai hasn't died. Kraal's final attack was awesome, too.

Scythe is scary. Although maybe Raze is the more vioent? I dunno, maybe that's just me.

I can't wait for the next part!
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I had originally thought that Raze was just a follower of Sythe, with her being a really mean villian, but now I think it's the other way around...Raze seems more evil.
Anyways, I LOVED IT!
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Old 06-06-2008, 09:43 PM
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I already have Chapter 4 up...

ANYWAYS- I thought it was funny that Raze flew away.
I could imagine him shouting "Fly away! F-L-Y AWAY!"
And then running into the mountain. Violence and humour in one!

Scary thing is, she thinks like this all the time.

Sonic's doing commentary because chicken boy is still cowering. *Points*

*Muffled* I'm not a chicken!

Now it's my turn to wait for a new chapter! *Sits and stares*

Oh my lord that's creepy...She doesn't even blink!
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Old 06-07-2008, 01:46 AM
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I read it and I absolutely loved it! I'm happy that Marilai hasn't died. Kraal's final attack was awesome, too.

Scythe is scary. Although maybe Raze is the more vioent? I dunno, maybe that's just me.

I can't wait for the next part!
I'm glad that Marilai didn't die too. The story would be kind of bland without her. ;)
You'll see about Raze and Scythe later. I have many plans. ^_^

@Scalec - Glad you liked it.
And more on the two villains soon. It's not just the protagonist's past that is important, you know.

@Grassy - Now that would be funny.
If Raze flew into the mountain...hmmm...

Anyway, a new chapter will be up soon. I just have to finish off my WAR entries.

It should be up within four days...If the suspense doesn't kill you first, that is. ^_^

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Old 06-09-2008, 03:39 AM
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Just letting everyone know, chapter 16 should be up in a few days.

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