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Creative Writing Share your fan fiction, stories, poems, essays, editorials, song lyrics, or any other related written work. All written must be your creation. Start a new thread, and keep replying to that thread as you add on more chapters. Anyone can join in at anytime.


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Old 05-25-2008, 01:23 AM
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Default Re: One Chance at Victory

This is the Pokemon fan-fic section. Odds are, no-one's going to forget them here.
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Old 05-25-2008, 01:28 AM
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This is the Pokemon fan-fic section. Odds are, no-one's going to forget them here.
Yeah well its up now whatcha think?
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Old 05-25-2008, 01:33 AM
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Default Re: One Chance at Victory

Well...It still needs a lot of work.

The grammer really needs to be fixed up, same with the formatting, dialogue and the description.

Try to explain it like a movie. So we see what you see.
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You're on the right track just you need to fine tune some things
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Well...It still needs a lot of work.

The grammer really needs to be fixed up, same with the formatting, dialogue and the description.

Try to explain it like a movie. So we see what you see.
I put it up I didn't do the check yet
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Default Re: One Chance at Victory

Instead of putting it altogether in one long post, post your new chapters as new replies.
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Old 05-25-2008, 01:42 AM
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Yes, just as Miler said.

Have you checked out the other fics yet? It would be a good idea just to get some pointers.
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Instead of putting it altogether in one long post, post your new chapters as new replies.
I know that I'm just letting you know it will be up soon
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