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Creative Writing Share your fan fiction, stories, poems, essays, editorials, song lyrics, or any other related written work. All written must be your creation. Start a new thread, and keep replying to that thread as you add on more chapters. Anyone can join in at anytime.


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Old 05-21-2008, 01:25 PM
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Old 05-21-2008, 06:32 PM
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awsome this is sounding good already i hope you can make another chapter soon i think ill stick with this fic
oh yer i just restarted my pokemon red and started of with a pidgey as my starter pokemon i traded my bulbasuar for it with a mate great choice of pokemon for the fic.
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Old 05-21-2008, 10:17 PM
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That caught the true essence of Pokemon training. It was beautifully written, with no grammical errors. It was true to Pokemon, and true to our world. It brought out guilt in the readers if they had done any cheating. Amazing! I hope to see more from you in the future!
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awsome this is sounding good already i hope you can make another chapter soon
Um...it's a One-shot. There's not going to be another Chapter.

And as for the fic. I like this sort of writing. Perhaps you're a bit stale on your description. I'm not saying that you're not describing enough, but that they way you're describing it's a bit...bland. I still think it's really good, though.

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