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Old 05-07-2008, 12:25 AM
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That was kinda sad...
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Old 05-07-2008, 01:27 AM
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He's right. But a good final chapter. Two mistakes that I noticed:

1. In the first sentance, it's "lay," not "lie."

2. Arceus's attack is actually not punishment, it's judgement. I should know, I have an Arceus.
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Old 05-07-2008, 01:29 AM
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2. Arceus's attack is actually not punishment, it's judgement. I should know, I have an Arceus.
I don't have the D/P game yet, but I need the info anyways, where did you get Arceus?
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Old 05-07-2008, 01:31 AM
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Lol, how ironic, I used an Action Replay. Rolf.

I also have mew, celibi, deoxys (S form) Regigigas, all of the regi's Darkri, and Umbreon. All of them lvl 100 except Darkri and Regigigas.
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Old 05-07-2008, 01:54 AM
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Lol, how ironic, I used an Action Replay. Rolf.

I also have mew, celibi, deoxys (S form) Regigigas, all of the regi's Darkri, and Umbreon. All of them lvl 100 except Darkri and Regigigas.
That defeats the purpose I had in mind. Anyways, we'll stop spamming now, Kendo.
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Old 05-07-2008, 08:57 PM
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He's right. But a good final chapter. Two mistakes that I noticed:

1. In the first sentance, it's "lay," not "lie."-My composition book said it was lie! And notice the term 'Let sleeping dogs lie.' They didn't say 'lay,' did they? Anyways, it's what everybody keeps telling me.

2. Arceus's attack is actually not punishment, it's judgement. I should know, I have an Arceus.-Wikipedia's Bulbapedia subsection told me otherwise. He has both Judgement AND Punishment.
The story IS sad, but that's kind of what I was hoping for.

COMING SOON, FROM THE FABULOUS MIND OF KENDO-A ONE-SHOT MYSTERY DUNGEON/DASH COMEDY! IT'S A COMPLETE CHANGE OF PACE! So, if you liked LegendStory, but thought it was too sad, be on the lookout for this one!
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Old 05-07-2008, 10:12 PM
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I will be sure to do that ^_^.
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