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Old 02-02-2008, 07:52 PM
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Chapter 1: A Mysterious Start

"Joey do u really get to start a journey" A little orphan asked.

"You know it and i can't wait to see what Pokemon i will get and to meet Professor Rowan." Joey said to the group of smaller orphans around him. Joey is a 12 year old orphan. He holds the record of the oldest orphan to live in the orphanage. For some reason no one wanted to adopt him. Even after a such a bad childhood he is confident that this journey is his new beginning.

"Wow Joey the new cloths Ms. Lovda got you are actually nice." Another orphan said.

"You think so." Joey stood tall in his new clothes. Joey got a new red shirt with a pair of black jeans, a pair of white sneakers, and a black baseball cap that covered his blond hair.

"so how did you get a Pokemon because your not getting one from Professor Rowan." Ashley asked. Ashley was a stuck girl who always hated Joey.

"Well some lady that Ms. Lovad had never seen before came into teh orphanage. When she walked up to the front desk she placed a pokeball on it and said This belongs to a child here I believe his name is Joey Kinna. So today Professor Rowan said he would give me a Pokedex and I could leave on a journey."

"Don't forget big shot that i am getting a Pokedex too and me and Teddiursa are going to be better than any Pokemon you get.

The Door swings open and Ms. Lovda walks in children I believe it is almost time for Ashley and Joey to leave." In the conor of her eye she could she Ashley was still in her pajamas. " Ashley dear i believe i told you to get DRESSSSS !!!!!!"

Ashley ran off to get dressed as everyone else walked down the stairs to the entrance of the orphanage to see Ashley and Joey off. "Ashley dear are you almost done." Ms lovda yelled up the stairs.

"I'm coming." Ashley walked down the stairs in her new cloths. She was wearing a pair of blue jeans, a tight pink tee shirt, a pair of white sneakers. She had her red hair in a side pony-tail. Her Teddiursa that she got from her biological parents left with her when they dropped her off at the orphanage was poking his self out of her backpack.

"OK do you have the medicines that Roy the Poke-mart own gave you, and the money i have been saving up for you two."

"Yes Ms.Lovda." Ashley and Joey said in unison

"So I guess the last thing to do is to give you this Joey." Ms. Lovda handed Joey the pokeball. "Go a head open it."

Glup! Joey was ready to see what Pokemon was left for him. "Go Poke ball !!" The red and white ball flew through the air for seconds when it opened and the red light shot from teh ball.

"Freee"

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THAT IS THIS CHAPTER DOSE ANYONE HAVE A GUSS AT WHAT THE POKEMON IS
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Old 02-02-2008, 08:48 PM
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Its a Butterfree isn't it.
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Old 02-02-2008, 10:52 PM
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Chapter 2: The New Girl

A big purple butterfly with blue feet and big white and blackes lined wings flew over to Joey. It had a note tied to its leg. Joey reached down and untied it from its leg. As everyone stood in awe at the pokemon Ms. Lovda asked, " Read it out loud?"

Joy shooke his head, " Hi my name is Lola. I am the daughter of your mother's first pokemon. I aldreay know a lot of attacks," Joey reads teh attacks out lound, " So my mother must have been teh one who dropped Lola off and that means my mother must be a sucessfull Trainer!"

"Yes Yes well ther will be plenty of time to pounder that on your jounry and if you don't hurry up you two will be late to Professor Rowans lab."

"OO yea where is it again Ms. Lovda?" Ashley asked.

"It is right up the road And I wis..." before she could finish Ashley adn joey were out teh door and yelling good-bye to everyone.

"So a Butterfree. That is your pokemon pretty coomon don't you think."

"You know you have big words for someone that is two years younger than me."

Ashley stopped dead in her tracks and joey adn Lola stopped adn looked at her. " You know what battle me right know I will show you who is better."

" We not have time for this. We are going to be late."

" Teddurisa lets go battle stance."

" If this is the only way than alright lets go Lola"

"I will start this off right Teddy get her with a head butt." Teddy flew forward with surprizing speed. But Lola was faster and quickly dodge it. Joey remeberingteh list of attacks new the perfect counterattack. "Lola Hidden Power." A ring of white orbs formed in between Lola's small claws until they shot and struck Teddy sending him flying. Teddy land but rolled on the groumd for a few seconds before getting up

"Teddy Sweet Scent." Lola was drawn closer to Teddy because it enjoyed the scent. "Now Teddy Slash." Teddy drew his claws and struck Lola. Lola laid on teh floor in pain. " Now finish her Teddy Faint Attack. Teddy started to run towards Lola. Thinking Fast Joey yelled out a command.

"Lola Safeguard." Lola stood up and started to glow a blue color. Teddy struck Lola but it did nothing instead Teddy jumped back. "Lola Sliver Wind." Lola flapped her big white and black lined wings fast. A sliver wind with the strenght of a hurricane struck Teddy knocking him out.

"Teddy return. Lets go Joey I see professor Rowans Lab just up this road." Ashley was quite teh rest of teh way up the road until they reached Professor's Rowan's Lab.

He met them at the front door with a cart next to him with two pokedexes and 10 pokeballs. " Well now you must be Ashley and Jeoy."

"Yes." They said inunisin.

"Well this is your pokedex it will tell you everything about your pokemonand you each get 5 pokeballs. Well that is about it you may go now." Ashley ran off with and as Joey started to walk away and girl came out of te lab.

"Professor Rowan is that the boy you were telling me about."
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Old 02-02-2008, 11:49 PM
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Ha I knew it.
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Chapter 1: A Mysterious Start

"Joey do u really get to start a journey" A little orphan asked.

"You know it and i can't wait to see what Pokemon i will get and to meet Professor Rowan." Joey said to the group of smaller orphans around him. Joey is a 12 year old orphan. He holds the record of the oldest orphan to live in the orphanage. For some reason no one wanted to adopt him. Even after a such a bad childhood he is confident that this journey is his new beginning.

"Wow Joey the new cloths Ms. Lovda got you are actually nice." Another orphan said.

"You think so." Joey stood tall in his new clothes. Joey got a new red shirt with a pair of black jeans, a pair of white sneakers, and a black baseball cap that covered his blond hair.

"so how did you get a Pokemon because your not getting one from Professor Rowan." Ashley asked. Ashley was a stuck girl who always hated Joey.

"Well some lady that Ms. Lovad had never seen before came into teh orphanage. When she walked up to the front desk she placed a pokeball on it and said This belongs to a child here I believe his name is Joey Kinna. So today Professor Rowan said he would give me a Pokedex and I could leave on a journey."

"Don't forget big shot that i am getting a Pokedex too and me and Teddiursa are going to be better than any Pokemon you get.

The Door swings open and Ms. Lovda walks in children I believe it is almost time for Ashley and Joey to leave." In the conor of her eye she could she Ashley was still in her pajamas. " Ashley dear i believe i told you to get DRESSSSS !!!!!!"

Ashley ran off to get dressed as everyone else walked down the stairs to the entrance of the orphanage to see Ashley and Joey off. "Ashley dear are you almost done." Ms lovda yelled up the stairs.

"I'm coming." Ashley walked down the stairs in her new cloths. She was wearing a pair of blue jeans, a tight pink tee shirt, a pair of white sneakers. She had her red hair in a side pony-tail. Her Teddiursa that she got from her biological parents left with her when they dropped her off at the orphanage was poking his self out of her backpack.

"OK do you have the medicines that Roy the Poke-mart own gave you, and the money i have been saving up for you two."

"Yes Ms.Lovda." Ashley and Joey said in unison

"So I guess the last thing to do is to give you this Joey." Ms. Lovda handed Joey the pokeball. "Go a head open it."

Glup! Joey was ready to see what Pokemon was left for him. "Go Poke ball !!" The red and white ball flew through the air for seconds when it opened and the red light shot from teh ball.

"Freee"

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THAT IS THIS CHAPTER DOSE ANYONE HAVE A GUSS AT WHAT THE POKEMON IS
its obvie its butterfree
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Old 02-03-2008, 03:46 AM
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it is a butterfree, no other pokemon says *free* like butterfree
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Old 02-11-2008, 01:35 AM
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Chapter 3: The Water Girl and a Double Battle

"So this is teh boy you got to escort me too Jubilife City." A girl only about one to three years older than Joey is standing in front of him with a Prinplup standing next to her. She is wearing skin tight blue jeans, a blue t-shirt with white bubbles all over it, and blue shoes. Her pink hair held back in a pony-tail. "Where is the girl that is supposed to be with you."

"Oohaa.... She kinda ran off with into Route 202 wit out any hesitation." Joey was stunned by the over all hotness of this girl she looked very mature for her age if you know what i mean.

"Anyway my name is Nina and I am a water Pokemon trainer. I am here to do a job for Professor Rowan. And I heard that there where some new trainer coming in do I decided to travel with them to the city."

"Well what makes you so special. Your just a trainer like me."

"Not really. I am really the gym leader of the Waterside City gym. I am quite a good trainer."

"Than why are you here shouldn't you be at your gym?"

"I do various jobs for Professor Rowan and his research as do most of the other gym leaders."

"Well enough chit chat I believe Joey her is behind all the new trainers and you Nina need to get going you have a gym to get back too. So on your way."

"Yes sir." The two said in unison before heading up Route 202.

"So your a new trainer. Right?"

"Yea and you point being." The whole time joey talked to he was trying to act cool but it wasn't really working.

"What starter Pokemon did you pick and did you catch any others."

"Well my story is a little different." Joey wasn't looking at Nina he was admiring the Surrounding trees and flowers. All the different Pokemon that were running around none of them catching the attention of Joey. They were all two common everyone catches these Pokemon.

"How so?"

"Well I am an orphan so i didn't get a starter Pokemon instead my biological mother drop me off a Butterfree that was her being Pokemon's daughter."

"So at least you know your mother now. most orphans don't get that satisfaction"

"Ahhh. Wrong again. I didnt get to see her before hand."

"Wait you said her first Pokemon was a Butterfree. I do know a person with the same story as you."

"What who? Who?"

"well the gym leader of the Entra City gym. Her name is Rose she is the daughter of the previous gym leader. She turned the gym from just a grass type to gym to a grass and bug type gym."

"So you think she could be my mother."

"Possible she is in her mid-twenties and it was rumored that she had a child very young."

"My mother a gym leader." Joey Stared up into the sky imagining what it would be like to have a strong battler like a gym leader as his mother too teach him. All the battle they could have and all the catching up they have too do.

"Hay stop staring into the sky Orphan. We have company."

"That isn't a nice nickname."

"You will learn that I am not a very nice person."

Joey finally looked out and saw two identical twins staring at him and Nina. The both had green hair that was wild and spiked up. They both wore light brown khaki shorts and green t-shirts that matched there hair. "And you guys are?"

They spoke in unison, "We are the Koba Twins Jimmy and Pat. One of us will win the Pokemon league the other the runner up. We know that you are the gym leader from Waterside City and we want a badge."

"Well this can't be an official match but we can still battle if you are up two it. Two on two me and orphan here against you two.

"Stop calling me that."

"Fine your on. Monferno and Gortle GOOO!"

"Prinplup you know what to do."

"ButterFree Lets do this."

On the twins side there was a green turtle Pokemon with what looks like bushes growing out of it back and a very strong green and yellow jaw. Next to teh Gortle was and brown furred monkey with a long brown tail with a flame on the tip of it and a wired blue eye brows and red nose almost like a clown. And standing in front of Nina was a was a partly dark blue and sky blue fat penguin Pokemon. It has yellow beak and white spots like buttons on its belly.

The Trainers stare at each other until Nina breaks teh silence with "I will go for the monkey you get the overgrown turtle."

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If anyone can make me trainer cards or tell me how to do it that would be great because i want to make one for each of my main characters that are starting their journey like teh twins, Ashley and Joey and one other who we haven't seen yet. And all the new gym leaders i made up because this about 30 years after Ash and all the old gym leaders have let someone seceded them so they could live exciting lives.
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To make a trainer card, use this link: PokeCharms' Trainer Card Maker
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My trainer cards got fed up and I had to get rid of them

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Chapter 4: The Power of a Gym Leader

"What?" Joey questioned."

"Your Butterfree's flying and psychic ablities should make quick work of that over grown turtle and my flying and water attacks will put out that ugly monkey. Do you understand now."

"Umm.. Yea."

The twins spoke in unison, "Are you ready or what?"

"Ready when you guys are. New plan orphan just watch what a gym leader can do ok."

"All right than lets being."

"Prinplup go drill peck on Monferno." Prinplup yellow beak started to glow a bright white as she started to spin slowly on one foot. The twins laughed at the penguine. "Go Prinplup." Prinplup took off with such force that Butterfree flew out of the backwind and joey had to catch here. Prinplup was spinning so fast that you couldn't even tell what pokemon it was.

Monferno tried to dodge the attack but it was to fast. The attack was so strong Monferno was flown it a tree at least 10 feet away. Monferno was thrown with such force that it broke the tree. Monferno was out of the battle. Jimmey's Monferno was out of teh battle it was up to Pat's Gortle.

"Prinplup Ice Beam."

Prinplup Stopped spin and turn in Gortle direction. Prinplup had a great blu orb of ice power form at her beak. Gortle was in a state of fear so bad that he couldn't move. "Fire." Prinplup glared at Gortle as three ice beams shot out of the one orb. The beams hit gortle sneding him flying. He quickly stop and fell out of the sky as a giant ice boulder.

Joey stood in amzament as he watched each Pokemon taken out with one hit. He couldn't belive it. He thought to himeself "Is a gym leader really that strong." He looked down at Butterfree. Butterfree was not in a state of amazment but in a state of determination.

Butterfree looked up at Joey and he knew what she was thinking. One day we will be that strong. The twins recalled there Pokemon and retreed to Jubilife City.

"Well we are here Orphan. What did you think of my battling skills."

"Stop calling me that."

"I will when you can beat me."

"Well take me to your gym I bet Butterfree could take out one of your Pokemon>"

"Huh Orphan Orphan Orphan. The requriments for my gym are five badges adn at least six Pokemon. Win you r frist five gyms and growq up a little bit than coem to Waterside City."

Nina started to walk away.

"Well when I am ready to battle you be ready because i will win. I am not weak."

"Well Orphan that will be decided at another time and another place." Nina ran away into Jubilife City. She left Joey and Butterfree to fend for themselve in such a big city.

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Sorry the chapter is so short but i got big plans for the next chapter is i can get enoough replies i will give a plot summary in a spoiler box. And what do you think of my new gym leaders. There are more to come.
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i am killing this fan fic if anyone wants to contunie it i will give them permission just pm if you do
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I have decide to bring this back the next chapter will be soon
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Your chapters are very short, try not to list details. Show them to the reader, don't tell . Also, take extra time to edit your spelling and grammar . This will help you write even better stories in the future
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Cool, Fan-fic!!(a Lttle Short Though!)^_^!!
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Chapter 5: The Return of an Old Friend

"Well Butterfree so far I have only one Pokemon, no badges and I have no idea where to go."

Butterfree landed on his head sad for her trainer. She tried to comfort by flying around and letting out a sweet scent. It did bot work Joey just sat there keeping teh outside world from his thoughts.

"Teddiursa look at this loser sitting around when there is an adventure of a lifetime handed to him."

Joey looked up and Ashely was standing there with her Teddiursa on her shoulders. She sat down next to him and looked at him.

"Why so down there Joey?"

"Lets just say I am not having as much fun as I hoped I would have on this so called adventure. I should just go back to the Orphanage adn finish my education."

Ashley clenched her fist as Joey talked.

"It is just not for me I should just give up."

"Shut Up!!!" Ashley slapped joey right across the face. He sat there in shock. Butterfree flew in front of him to try and protect him.

"Your the one that was so excited to come on this adventure. You were going to find new Pokemon, and become a Pokemon master. Joey you were going to find your mother."

"I am sorry Ashley but I don't want to do this anymore!!"

"Why because you are having one bad day, so what Joey. You can't give up you need to fulfill your dreams. Your nothing but a loser and a quitter."

"Don't call me that!!"

"Why that is what you are!!"

"No I am not!!"

"Prove it with a Pokemon battle. Go Roselia."

"Fine, GO Butterfree."

"Isn't using Butterfree a little old why don't you chose a different Pokemon."

"I don't have any others."

"Wow you really are a loser."

Joey grew more and more enraged by the minute. People that were walking the streets of Jubilife City stop in their tracks to watch teh two battle. On joey's side Butterfree was ready to defend her trainer's honer her white wings flapped hard as Butterfree prepared for battle. On Ashley's side stood a flower Pokemon. It stood on its little green feet it had a big green leaf covering its body and on both hands sat flowers. On the left hand a red rose and on the right hand sat a blue violet.

"Get ready Ashley because I will not lose. Butterfree Silver Wind go."

Butterfree flapped it's powerful and stunning white wings releasing a burst of wind that was as powerful as a hurricane with in teh winds were silver stands that just made the move even more spectacular.

It came closer and closer to Roselia but the flower Pokemon stood there unfazed by the attack. Right before the attack was able to strike Roselia was able to leap out of teh way and into the beautiful sky.

"Roselia Poison Sting."

As Roselia flew through the bright sky both its flower shook before letting out a stream of purple stingers. They flew towards Butterfree at an extremely high velocity.

"Butterfree dodge and use Aerial Ace."

Butterfree spun around the attack as it just barely escaped. At that point Butterfree speed up and flew directly into Roselia. Roselia flew back as Ashely caught it.

"All right Joey that is enough."

"What you can't even call that a warm up and why didn't you use Solarbeam you could have won."

"Winning just would have reinforced the fact that you should quit. The reason for this battle was for you to see that you have the potentially to be great."

"Your right you know and about my mother. I meet a gym Leader named Nina and she thinks my mother is the gym leader at Entra City."

"That is great Joey but before you can get your second badge there and find out if she is your mother you have to catch some Pokemon and win your first badge in Oreburgh City. Stay her in Jubilife and catch a Pokemon before going onto Oreburgh OK."

"I promise."

Joey watched as Ashley walk in Oreburgh's direction and stood there wondering what will happen during this crazy adventure.

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