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Old 04-07-2008, 09:38 AM
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Default Me, Burmy, Biography.

This is a story written in the first person. It is a real world and a pokemon world mix. please note that posts may be short due to the fact Im typing on my PSP.I have had the idea for sometime now.

Rating: U

feel free to review!

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Old 04-07-2008, 10:00 AM
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Default The story begins! Part 1

My name is Albert, and this is my tale.

There it was, by the old, oak tree, a kind of shrimp for a pokemon. Burmy, the Bagworm pokemon, just how legends thought it looked like was staring me in the face. With a swift movement, I gently grasped hold of the pokemon and shoved It into my coat pocket.

It was a fine afternoon. dinner was a lovely roast full of torchicken, carrots and mashed potatoes. Dinner was done so I rushed upstairs to greet the now sleeping bug.

"Your name is now Burms!" I boomed.
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Old 04-07-2008, 07:19 PM
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Default Re: Me, Burmy, Biography.

Much, much, much too short .
Please read the fanfic rules :
http://www.pokemonelite2000.com/foru...ead.php?t=8501
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Old 04-07-2008, 09:29 PM
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never mind.

lock this.
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Old 04-07-2008, 11:59 PM
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Heh, just because Orange Flaffy said it was too short dosen't mean you lock the thread!
You'll get better. Just write another chapter and see. Please?*Puppy eyes*
I like the idea!
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Old 04-08-2008, 03:36 AM
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Default Re: Me, Burmy, Biography.

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Heh, just because Orange Flaffy said it was too short dosen't mean you lock the thread!
You'll get better. Just write another chapter and see. Please?*Puppy eyes*
I like the idea!

While it is a beginning, there usually needs to be more in your first post, else it will be difficult to fully grasp what you are trying to convey. Don't give up. Writers have a long road as Orange Flaffy can tell. She's been writing forever!

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