Originally Posted by Kendo
Do you mind if I give you some constructive criticism?
This really needs to be clearer. For example, in the first issue, Umbri is in the forest, then one panel later he's suddenly in the clouds! And your third episode hardly makes any sense at all. What was the cowboy guy (or whatever it was) pic there for? He could have just used a Roundhouse Kick or something. Well, that's what I think. And I think you need a form for guest stars to apply.
At the last sentence here's one thing, he dosen't have to have guess stars if he don't want. Great comic though, GF!