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Creative Writing Share your fan fiction, stories, poems, essays, editorials, song lyrics, or any other related written work. All written must be your creation. Start a new thread, and keep replying to that thread as you add on more chapters. Anyone can join in at anytime.


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Old 09-13-2007, 02:09 AM
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Default My Pokerap

Heres MYYYY POKERAP ...... 1...2...here we go!!...
( Also A Mixture of songs from Pokemon.com

SO YOU WANNA BE A MASTER POKEMON! HAVE SKILLS TO BE NUMBA 1?!
To Be ---- The Very Best of ---- to Be a Master POKEMON
Have spirt ------ TO BE NUMBA 1
TO BE A MASTER POKEMON MASTER -- GO GO GO GET A START LIKE squitle and A Pokedex now for POKEMON - TO BE A MASTER POKEMON MASTER -------------------------------- Baulasaur Squirtle Chamander Pikachu Chazrad GO got catch em all Gotta catch em all! Gotta catch em all gotta catch em all! Sandshrew Chimchar Blastoise Wailord with 450 Or More to see to be a pokemon master is my destiny Stellix onix wailmer Dugitirio WERE ALMOST HOME Articuno Jynx POKEMON -- At lest 450 Or more to see to be a pokemon master is my destiny Pichu Richu Zapdos Moltres Apoim Apoim mew Mewtwo Ditto Munxhlax SNORLAX We Caught em all! --------------------------------- What!? ( Pokemon Envolution song) dAN DA DA DA DA DA DA DAA DA DA DA DA DA DA DAD A DS WE CAUGHT EM ALL!------------------------------------------------------------------------



So Liked my song I Made?
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Old 09-16-2007, 07:43 PM
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Heres MYYYY POKERAP ...... 1...2...here we go!!...
( Also A Mixture of songs from Pokemon.com

SO YOU WANNA BE A MASTER POKEMON! HAVE SKILLS TO BE NUMBA 1?!
To Be ---- The Very Best of ---- to Be a Master POKEMON
Have spirt ------ TO BE NUMBA 1
TO BE A MASTER POKEMON MASTER -- GO GO GO GET A START LIKE squitle and A Pokedex now for POKEMON - TO BE A MASTER POKEMON MASTER -------------------------------- Baulasaur Squirtle Chamander Pikachu Chazrad GO got catch em all Gotta catch em all! Gotta catch em all gotta catch em all! Sandshrew Chimchar Blastoise Wailord with 450 Or More to see to be a pokemon master is my destiny Stellix onix wailmer Dugitirio WERE ALMOST HOME Articuno Jynx POKEMON -- At lest 450 Or more to see to be a pokemon master is my destiny Pichu Richu Zapdos Moltres Apoim Apoim mew Mewtwo Ditto Munxhlax SNORLAX We Caught em all! --------------------------------- What!? ( Pokemon Envolution song) dAN DA DA DA DA DA DA DAA DA DA DA DA DA DA DAD A DS WE CAUGHT EM ALL!------------------------------------------------------------------------



So Liked my song I Made?
It's okay, but it's similar to the official Pokerap, which listed pokemon.
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Old 09-16-2007, 07:50 PM
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Default Re: My Pokerap

... No.

You seriously failed.

First off, what you just did is not original. This is pretty well the original Pokerap that they used to do now and then at the end of the original Pokemon series. All you did was change some Pokemon, the number of Pokemon and butcher most of their names. I mean, not to be an ASS or anything, but even if this is a joke, this is a seriously poor joke.

If you're going to do a Pokerap of any sort, try and make it original and worth the read. Also, I suggest using something like Microsoft Word or some online word editor, because your spelling and grammar is absolutely DEPLORABLE.

Try better next time, please.
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Old 10-17-2007, 01:27 AM
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No offense monkey boy but I agree with him all the way.
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Old 10-19-2007, 01:40 PM
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Sorry Monkey, but I have to agree with ReculsiveDemon, this is not original at all. And I don't even find it a good Rap song at first place...
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Old 11-18-2007, 01:58 PM
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no offense, but it wasn't that original...
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Old 11-18-2007, 02:05 PM
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Looks like everyone agrees that its not very good...
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Old 11-18-2007, 02:14 PM
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No.
Spelling/Grammar is terrible and it's completely unoriginal.
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Old 11-18-2007, 02:20 PM
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... No.

You seriously failed.

First off, what you just did is not original. This is pretty well the original Pokerap that they used to do now and then at the end of the original Pokemon series. All you did was change some Pokemon, the number of Pokemon and butcher most of their names. I mean, not to be an ASS or anything, but even if this is a joke, this is a seriously poor joke.

If you're going to do a Pokerap of any sort, try and make it original and worth the read. Also, I suggest using something like Microsoft Word or some online word editor, because your spelling and grammar is absolutely DEPLORABLE.

Try better next time, please.
Lol. I agree 100%.
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Old 11-21-2007, 05:57 PM
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Default Re: My Pokerap

I want that minute wasted reading that of my life back.

RD just said everything I was gonna say really =P
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Old 11-22-2007, 01:53 AM
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Default Re: My Pokerap

I agree with RD, but here are some other comments.
1. If it's a rap, there is no rhythm at all.
2. Also, if you're "A Pokemon Master" then why'd you fail at most names?


RD pretty much summed it up.
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Old 11-23-2007, 09:05 PM
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Heres MYYYY POKERAP ...... 1...2...here we go!!...
( Also A Mixture of songs from Pokemon.com

SO YOU WANNA BE A MASTER POKEMON! HAVE SKILLS TO BE NUMBA 1?!
To Be ---- The Very Best of ---- to Be a Master POKEMON
Have spirt ------ TO BE NUMBA 1
TO BE A MASTER POKEMON MASTER -- GO GO GO GET A START LIKE squitle and A Pokedex now for POKEMON - TO BE A MASTER POKEMON MASTER -------------------------------- Baulasaur Squirtle Chamander Pikachu Chazrad GO got catch em all Gotta catch em all! Gotta catch em all gotta catch em all! Sandshrew Chimchar Blastoise Wailord with 450 Or More to see to be a pokemon master is my destiny Stellix onix wailmer Dugitirio WERE ALMOST HOME Articuno Jynx POKEMON -- At lest 450 Or more to see to be a pokemon master is my destiny Pichu Richu Zapdos Moltres Apoim Apoim mew Mewtwo Ditto Munxhlax SNORLAX We Caught em all! --------------------------------- What!? ( Pokemon Envolution song) dAN DA DA DA DA DA DA DAA DA DA DA DA DA DA DAD A DS WE CAUGHT EM ALL!------------------------------------------------------------------------



So Liked my song I Made?

Wow... That was... Wow. Everyone else pretty much said it for me, but I'll give you some tips so you don't this again, ever...

Try getting Spell Check.

Put lots of thought into lyrics, those are what make a song good.

Try to make it not sound like the official ones, that isn't cool at all.

Look up the Pokemon names so you can actually spell them properly.

Try using the Caps only a few times.

And just improve on Grammar, period.
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Old 11-26-2007, 12:07 AM
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Lol! Monkey Boy! your such a n00b....lol
I couldn't stop laughing! Geez that sucked...I'll agree with everyone else on this.

NEVER DO THIS AGAIN
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Old 04-02-2008, 09:06 PM
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Yeah monkey boy when you said 'caught 'em all' that' really not all the pokemon... Try something ORIGINAL next time
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Yeah monkey boy when you said 'caught 'em all' that' really not all the pokemon... Try something ORIGINAL next time
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