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Old 01-19-2008, 02:41 AM
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Default The beginning of a fanfic I was writing...

Basically, what happens is, a boy has a run in with some Legendaries - Dialga and Palkia, to be exact. These two Pokemon then blasted him into an alternate universe - and two different pieces of soul and body - to do something.

The problem is, what?

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“The noise was deafening. Two young Trainers were fighting for the playground title of Trainer’s Glory, or Trainer King. The competing Trainers were a boy who calls himself ‘Neos’ and myself. It was a Double Battle, and Neos was down to his last two Pokemon, which he hadn’t sent out yet. I, on the other hand, still had four Pokemon yet to fight. He slowly brought the final two balls out of his pockets, clutching them hard and attempting to suppress a smirk. He tossed them into the air.

Both balls were a royal purple with a yellow shape on them. Then it clicked inside my head.

Master Balls.

The bleachers and on looking kids were silent, but I could tell that everyone else realized this too.

Time was slowing down, with all eyes on the two purple-and-white balls flying on a graceful arc through the air. Honestly, you could hear a feather drop. Slowly, very slowly, after what seemed like ages, the two balls hit the ground. The resulting blast of smoke, dust, and sound did nothing to muffle the sheer amazement of what were lurking inside those balls.

Dialga and Palkia.
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Old 01-19-2008, 05:47 AM
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Default Re: The beginning of a fanfic I was writing...

No offense, but what the heck isa kid doing with not one but two legendary Pokemon, not to mention two Master Balls?
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Old 01-19-2008, 07:20 AM
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Default Re: The beginning of a fanfic I was writing...

Yeah yeah.. That is true. Doesn't make much sense does it?
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Old 01-19-2008, 05:07 PM
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Default Re: The beginning of a fanfic I was writing...

At the beginning, it's just that - but it's explained later on.
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Old 01-23-2008, 11:23 PM
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Default Re: The beginning of a fanfic I was writing...

Ignore that fact --- master balls and legendaries have become so cliche that they aren't really cliche any more. There's really nothing wrong with it if it's set in strict game canon, where the legendaries are able to be captured.
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Old 01-27-2008, 01:33 AM
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Ignore that fact --- master balls and legendaries have become so cliche that they aren't really cliche any more. There's really nothing wrong with it if it's set in strict game canon, where the legendaries are able to be captured.
Yeah i agree the odds are about 2236588842/1
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