Here's my new story.......Hope you like it(more of 13000 words....hard to wrote)
My eevee can evolve now,so in this story she evolve.
The Flower Garden of recollection
The Flower Garden of recollection
"Where I can go now?" I said "Mmmhhh....I don't know.....Maybe...Uh?A Sunkern?"
A little sunkern had a Sunbathe in the grass
"Oh,I want it!Go,Scyther!"
The Scyther came out from the ball "Scyy-ther!" he said
The Scyther attacked the little pokčmon,but while he hit it,a razor leaf stopped the Scyther.
"Who used the- W-what?A storm of grass pokčmon?"
There was many grass pokčmon,in which Vileplume,Weepinbell,Sunflora and Shroomish.
"Whoa!There are the most big grass pokčmon's group.Scyther,wing attack!"
The Scyther flied and attacked the grass pokčmon,but They used their stun powder and paralyzed him.
"No,Scyther!Get you up again!"
The Scyther was knell down,he tried to raise him,but he can't.Meanwhile,the grass pokčmon absorbed light to strike their solar beam....
"Stop you,flower!" a woman said.
The grass pokčmon stopped to absorb light.
"Who are you?" I said.
"Who are you,and why you're here?"
"Excuse me,I'm Zantetsu,but if you want you can call me Zan.Now,who are you,and where I am?"
"I'm Violet,and this is my flower garden.Why you came here?"
"Ehm.....I'm searching pokčmon,but I don't know this was a flower garden.Excuse me again."
"Well,you didn't do anything,so why I would excuse you?"
"Thanks Violet.Now,can you cure my Scyther?Please,he's affected by your pokčmon's powder."
"Oh,really?Ok,follow me." so we went to an house. "Ok,open the ball and call your Scyther."
"Ok Violet....Go,Scyther." scyther came out from the ball "How do you feel?"
He looked to me "Ttheer....Scyther."
"Hmm....he doesn't feel good.Well,this should resolve his problem." She took a little perfume-bottle. "In this phial there's a special scent with therapeutic properties.Use them to cure your Scyther."
"Thanks,Violet.Scyther,smell this.It's for you."
Scyther looked me suspicious "Scyy?"
"So you don't trust me?"
"Safe bind,safe find....Scyther,if you wanna be good,you must smell this.It's for you."
Scyther looked her suspocious,but he started tho smell the scent.
"Good scyther" she said,stroking him "Now,leave him alone."
we leaved the house and we walked in the garden
"Your Scyther wil be fine in a few hours.Don't worry about him."
"No,thanks you.Now I can talk with you.You know,it's hard to talk with pokčmon......they can't reply you."
"It's real,they try to reply you,but you don't undersand their language."
"Ahahaha......Zan,you're a really good boy." she said. "Zan,can I ask you something?"
"Yes,why not?What you wanna know?"
"That Scyther is your first pokčmon?"
"No,he isn't.My first pokčmon was this eevee.Go eevee."
Eevee came out from the ball. "Eeevo!" she said.
"Oh,it's so cute.Hello eevee!" she greeted her.
"Ueevo" she said.
Violet said "Oh,she's very fond to you.It's a pleasure to see."
"Thanks Violet.Hmm....I too wanna ask you somethings."
"Uh?What you wanna know?"
"Ehm.....where we are?"
"Oh......yes.Well,we are in the 'Flower Garden Of Recollection'."
"Flower Garden Of Recollection?"
"It's a strange name,you think,yes?"
"Well........yes,it's a strange name.Why have this name?"
"My granny founded this place.She told me that she created this place because she want a place where everyone can remind their memories."
We walked in al cleaned path,in a tree-lined avenue....
"Whoa.it's so wonderful..."
"Seems you like it.Now we are in the Path of the Sun...."
"Nice name!" I said,walking. "There's a strange atmosphere here.....Is.....so peaceful...."
"You aren't the first saying that.....This is my favourite place...And is the Sunkern's,too."
The sunkern came out from a bush." Kiklen." he said and he started having sunbathe.
"Uhm....Call him stupid....." I said
"yeah....Oh,now your Scyther must be fine."
"Uhm......shall we return to the Rainbow Hall?"
"Rainbow Hall?This is the strange name's fair!Well,why not.But while we return,you tell me the name of all the places."
While returning to the Hall,the wind blowed too strong.
"What happening?" Violet said.
"I don't know-what's that?"
A giant Fearow flied in the garden.
"What?A Fearow here?In this area isn't fearow!"
"What?! so this Fearow is of a trainer."
A voice said "Exaclty,this is my Fearow!Go Fearow,gust!"
The Fearow tossed his wing and caused a tornado.
"Gasp!" Violet said "Help me,Zan!"
"Violet! Cling you to a tree!"
"Ahahaha!You can't compete with me!" The trainer said
"Who are you?" I asked to him
"Uh?You remind me a person.Well,I'm Gorthan,and now I capture all the pokčmon are there."
"What?!You're a poacher?" Violet said
"Ahahaha!Yes,i'm a poacher.Now is time to get some pokčmon.Go,Nosepass!Sand Tomb!"
The Compass pokčmon came out from the ball and trapped all the grass pokčmon of the garden in a sand trap.
"No!!!Free them,please!" Violet said
"Why? For these pokčmon my customers will give me many money! "
"But...these aren't yours!Please,free them."
"Grrr.....Eevee,go!Take down the fearow!" I said.
Eevee charged the Fearow,and hit him.
"Ahaha!Fearow,peck that eevee!"
The Fearow pecked Eevee,weakening her
"No,Eevee!!" I yelled "Please resist!Bite now!"
Eevee focused her energy,and bited Fearow.
"Eevee,dodge the attack using quick attack!"
Fearow's wings turned into steel and charged eevee,who dodged the attack and hit fearow.
"Fearow,reuse the steel wing!"
Fearow re used the steel wing,and now hit eevee.
"Eevee!Are you ok?"
"e-eevo.." said eevee,flatted down.
"AHAHA!Now finish him with your drill peck!"
Fearow was attacking eevee,when he heard a strange noise......
"What is this?"
Scyther appeared and slashed fearow.
"What?! A Scyther?" Ghortan said
"No.My Scyther!" Scyther approached to me "Are you alright,now?" Scyther nodded "Ok,lets' go,now!Scyther,Wing attack!"
"Ahaha.....using a bug versus my flying?You're crazy!Fearow,Drill Peck!"
Fearow tryed to peck Scyther,but he dodged the attack and used his wing to hit him.
"Go now,use the Slash!"
Scyther slashed Fearow,but he flied and dodged the attack.
"Now use the Drill Peck!"
"What the-" Fearow falled down to peck scyther "Scyther,stop his beak with your arm!"
Fearow pecked Scyther,but he stopped his attack with his blade arm.
"Good job,Scyther.Now jump e slash him!"
"Fearow!drill peck again!"
Fearow tried to free him from Scyther's vice,Scyther jumped and hit fearow's wings,who fells down.
"Scyther,finish him with another slash!"
Scyther hit Fearow,and KO him.
The compass pokčmon came out from the ball and hit Scyther
"Scyther!!Are you alright?"
"Stop you Scyther!" Violet said. "I'll see to it.Go Venom!Razor Leaf!"
A Venusaur came out from Violet's ball,and throwed a lot of leaves to Nosepass,hit him.
"Venom,razor leaf again!"
Nosepass created an electric sphere,Venusaur re used the razor leaf,the two attack crashed and nullified.
"Nosepass Zap cannon again!"
Venusaur absorbed sun's energy,and was hit by the Nosepass's zap cannon.
'Venusaur can't resist at another attack,but the solar beam didn't is ready...' in that moment,Sunkern came out from a bush. 'Oh,Sunkern......uhm,he can........yes!' "Sunkern!" I said.Sunkern turned to me. "Sunkern,can you bring the sun?"
Sunkern looked me confused
"Please,Sunkern,you can do this.Use the Sunny day,or that man steal your friends!"
Sunkern looked me again confused
"Oh dear......." I said.
"Sunkern,you understand me?Use the Sunny day attack!" Violet said
"Kiklean!" Sunkern said,and started shining
"Go Sunkern!Sunny Day!" Violet said
Sunkern shone and created a light ball....The sun started bright.
"YES!You made it!Great Sunkern!" I said.
"Venom,strike your solarbeam!"Violet yelled
the two beam crashed,and the solar beam erased Zap Cannon,hit Nosepass
"Argh!I'm not beaten.Go Salamence!Outrage!"
Salamence came out from the ball,and breathed on venusaur.
Venusaur fainted after this attack...
"Ahaha...You can't beat me!"