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Old 12-04-2007, 10:54 PM
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Imagine it... the ability to go back in time... just like Dialga.

A group of 10 kids find a Japanese flag from World War II and use it to go back in time, to anything they wanted. They went back to numerous places and times, like the Prehistoric Era, The Great Depression, 2998, to where the meteor that brought Pokemon first landed on Earth, or even just a year ago when they made a mistake in life. The flag allowed them to go anywhere, besides a time of war, for a strange reason. Every time they went back, or even forward, in time, everything else in the current era stayed frozen. So they were perfectly safe to make it home before dinner.


But, there were a few people who wanted it. Some might have been parents that had found out about it, others may have been official government. Whoever it was, it was these kids' job to protect the flag.

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Must be at least eight sentences long.

Main Character form(ONLY TEN!)
Name:
Age: (10-16)
Appearance:
Personality:
Pokemon: (1-6) No LEGENDS!! Fakemon allowed, just not too strong

Flag Hunter form
Name:
Age: (20-80)
Appearance:
Personality:
Pokemon: (1-6) NO LEGENDS!! Fakemon allowed, just not too strong

Credits: Hakken for my plot idea. >>
Me for actually RPing again
You for joining.
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Old 12-04-2007, 11:22 PM
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Reserved for RPers

Main Characters
Sir Aaron-Reserved
Hakken-Reserved

Flag Hunters
Sir Aaron-Reserved
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Old 12-04-2007, 11:27 PM
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So the Japanese Flag is like the Magic Tree house? It takes them back in time and it fresses the present?
Other Person PRofile:
Name: Kiryu
Age: 22
Appearance: (Without sword)
Personality:
Pokemon:



Name: Cole
Age: 16
Appearance: http://content.answers.com/main/cont...om_Hearts).jpg
Personality:
Pokemon:


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Old 12-04-2007, 11:35 PM
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Tsk, Tsk. Dus. You need to post your character. xD

Um. I'll edit this. Soon.

Name: Megan Aleixi (Ah-lake-see)
Age: 11... no... 12! (xP You know what I mean.)
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Personality:
Pokemon:
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Old 12-05-2007, 12:07 AM
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Name: Dusty Nesnej
Age: 12
Appearance: Dusty has brown hair as well as brown eyes. He'll only wear regular jeans with any kind of shirt
Personality:
Pokemon: (1-6) No LEGENDS!! Fakemon allowed, just not too strong
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Old 12-05-2007, 12:53 AM
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I might join this if there was more to the plot. It seems interesting enough, but it seems that you rushed it. I can't find a real aim besides the usual, keep the thing from the bad guys to keep the world safe. I'm not saying this is a bad RP, just lacking a bit in plot. The idea is interesting, but some basic information isn't there. The starting time setting, some back history of why the 'Flag Hunters' want it so badly. What is their motivation exactly? Is there another, bigger entity behind it all? When, as in era, did the children find the flag? Common era, before modern technology and urban cities, a futuristic metropolis-like planet? Where did they find the time-moving cloth? There isn't enough specific information. So many questions are left unanswered in your plot, and to save it from getting closed by a moderator, I'd improve it.

If, or when you improve it, I'll return and might join, which is why I'm saying this in the first place. I'm here to comment in a helpful way.
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Old 12-05-2007, 04:54 AM
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I might join this if there was more to the plot. It seems interesting enough, but it seems that you rushed it. I can't find a real aim besides the usual, keep the thing from the bad guys to keep the world safe. I'm not saying this is a bad RP, just lacking a bit in plot. The idea is interesting, but some basic information isn't there. The starting time setting, some back history of why the 'Flag Hunters' want it so badly. What is their motivation exactly? Is there another, bigger entity behind it all? When, as in era, did the children find the flag? Common era, before modern technology and urban cities, a futuristic metropolis-like planet? Where did they find the time-moving cloth? There isn't enough specific information. So many questions are left unanswered in your plot, and to save it from getting closed by a moderator, I'd improve it.

If, or when you improve it, I'll return and might join, which is why I'm saying this in the first place. I'm here to comment in a helpful way.
i agree with saraibre you really should increase the story line and then i will join but until then
ps mabey you should the people having pokemon bit cause that make's it go cooocooo
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