Originally Posted by Charmander96
Once there was a land so peaceful and so quit that you can only here a pin drop that is untill mewtwo came..Now the land is evil and dark all you can hear is screams and crys pokemon suffering from slavers.Mewtwo wants to capture all pokemon and make them slaves to build a giant fortress that can destroy an entire army and he wants it so big so that it can touch the sky.But what will he do with the slaves if it finished....
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Moveset: Thunder/Thunder shock/Thunderwave/Tackle
Description:As a kid riachu trys to find out what Mewtwo is planning but he is having a bit of trouble.
Im looking for someone to play Mewtwo. spots for mewtwo open!
First of all, this is in the wrong section. You should of posted this in the Sign up board, rather then the Other boards.
The plot of your story is okay, but there are lots of mistakes in there, such as spelling, grammar and punctuation. Finally, your sign-up is very poor. You should take a look at threads other people have made and look at the lengths of their sign up. Also, you state Raichu is female, but in part of it you say 'he'.
Hope this helps.