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Old 10-21-2007, 03:58 PM
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Once there was a land so peaceful and so quit that you can only here a pin drop that is untill mewtwo came..Now the land is evil and dark all you can hear is screams and crys pokemon suffering from slavers.Mewtwo wants to capture all pokemon and make them slaves to build a giant fortress that can destroy an entire army and he wants it so big so that it can touch the sky.But what will he do with the slaves if it finished....

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Im Riachu

Pokemon:Riachu
Moveset: Thunder/Thunder shock/Thunderwave/Tackle
Apearence:
Personality:Nice/kind/Sometimes clumsy
Age:(6-16)10
Level: 36
Description:As a kid riachu trys to find out what Mewtwo is planning but he is having a bit of trouble.
pokemonType:Thunder
Stats:Sp.atk:80%
Ability:Iblivious
Gender:Female

Im looking for someone to play Mewtwo. spots for mewtwo open!
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Old 10-21-2007, 04:02 PM
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Once there was a land so peaceful and so quit that you can only here a pin drop that is untill mewtwo came..Now the land is evil and dark all you can hear is screams and crys pokemon suffering from slavers.Mewtwo wants to capture all pokemon and make them slaves to build a giant fortress that can destroy an entire army and he wants it so big so that it can touch the sky.But what will he do with the slaves if it finished....

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Level: (1-70)
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Im Riachu

Pokemon:Riachu
Moveset: Thunder/Thunder shock/Thunderwave/Tackle
Apearence:
Personality:Nice/kind/Sometimes clumsy
Age:(6-16)10
Level: 36
Description:As a kid riachu trys to find out what Mewtwo is planning but he is having a bit of trouble.
pokemonType:Thunder
Stats:Sp.atk:80%
Ability:Iblivious
Gender:Female

Im looking for someone to play Mewtwo. spots for mewtwo open!
If you improve the RP a bit, I'll be Mewtwo
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Old 10-21-2007, 04:05 PM
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Ok tell me what i need to improve on
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Old 10-21-2007, 05:39 PM
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Once there was a land so peaceful and so quit that you can only here a pin drop that is untill mewtwo came..Now the land is evil and dark all you can hear is screams and crys pokemon suffering from slavers.Mewtwo wants to capture all pokemon and make them slaves to build a giant fortress that can destroy an entire army and he wants it so big so that it can touch the sky.But what will he do with the slaves if it finished....

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Im Riachu

Pokemon:Riachu
Moveset: Thunder/Thunder shock/Thunderwave/Tackle
Apearence:
Personality:Nice/kind/Sometimes clumsy
Age:(6-16)10
Level: 36
Description:As a kid riachu trys to find out what Mewtwo is planning but he is having a bit of trouble.
pokemonType:Thunder
Stats:Sp.atk:80%
Ability:Iblivious
Gender:Female

Im looking for someone to play Mewtwo. spots for mewtwo open!

First of all, this is in the wrong section. You should of posted this in the Sign up board, rather then the Other boards.
The plot of your story is okay, but there are lots of mistakes in there, such as spelling, grammar and punctuation. Finally, your sign-up is very poor. You should take a look at threads other people have made and look at the lengths of their sign up. Also, you state Raichu is female, but in part of it you say 'he'.

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Old 10-21-2007, 05:45 PM
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Oops using he was a mistake lol maybe i could try again if i find out how to edit soon
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Old 10-21-2007, 08:25 PM
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Oops using he was a mistake lol maybe i could try again if i find out how to edit soon
Oh, and, one question, who in their right mind evolves a Pikachu into a Raichu at level 10? It's ridiculous, it's exactly the mistake everyone who watches the anime learned from Ash's battle with Lt. Surge (anyone else miss the good old days when Pokemon was actually well written?)
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Old 10-21-2007, 08:38 PM
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no the age is 10 the level is 36
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Old 10-21-2007, 10:26 PM
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I'll join, and maybe help you improve the rp. Would that be okay if I did? This has a good concept to it.

Pokemon: Blaziken

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Personality: Shy and socialble, but you dont want to get on her bad side. She is also a good battler, and a formidable foe.

Age:15

Level: 65

Description: She somtimes wears a necklace made from shiny stones, which she believes is her good luck charm.

pokemonType: Fire

Stats:
Attk: 100
Def: 92
Sp Atk: 116
Sp.Def: 91
Speed: 98

Ability: Blaze

Gender: Female
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Old 10-22-2007, 01:15 PM
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I'll join, and maybe help you improve the rp. Would that be okay if I did? This has a good concept to it.

Pokemon: Blaziken

Moveset:

Apearence:

Personality: Shy and socialble, but you dont want to get on her bad side. She is also a good battler, and a formidable foe.

Age:15

Level: 65

Description: She somtimes wears a necklace made from shiny stones, which she believes is her good luck charm.

pokemonType: Fire

Stats:
Attk: 100
Def: 92
Sp Atk: 116
Sp.Def: 91
Speed: 98

Ability: Blaze

Gender: Female
Ok your acepted
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Old 10-22-2007, 02:36 PM
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Yay. thanks.
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Old 10-22-2007, 07:53 PM
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Your welcome
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