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Old 09-22-2007, 05:55 PM
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Plot

It is the year 2000 and the new laws coming into arder the pokemon professors are being put out of their jobs. The new law states that ten year olds are no longer able to get a pokemon from the professors. It also doesn't help that strange things are starting to happen in Kanto. Wild pokemon are attacking random travellers for no reason and in some places pokemon are dissapearing all together. As a desperate cry for help, Professor Kagami chose the best candidates to take the last pokemon from the lab and destroy the evil team behind all the strange going ons, and to get her job back. However, Team Toko are stealing everyones pokemon and since they found out about the group of children they are after them and their pokemon. PokeCentres are being built in every city and town and the top floors are being converted into homes for the special group of children, chosen by professor Kagami.

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No Cussing Please ;;; Because They Don't on Pokemon so it's only Tradition to not do so here.
No Godmodding ;;; We don't like anyone controlling another's character. We believe in Freewill.
Age ;;; between 10 - 12 years old please.
No Bunnying ;;; Just don't do it please. Unless for a good reason or permission.
Be Good ;;;

Form

Name
Age
M or F
City
Appearance
Personality
History
Pokemon Chosen
Other



Current RPers ( i will start the RP when I get ten RPers )

1.) BecOnima
2.)
3.)
4.)
5.)
6.)
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8.)
9.)
10.)

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Just tell me if it needs any work, thanks
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Old 09-22-2007, 05:56 PM
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Story needs a little more work and our sign up must not be included in first post
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Old 09-22-2007, 06:22 PM
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Default Re: Pokemon GX

thanks for the help, I've updated my sign up sheet.
Just tell me if there is anything else I need to sort out.


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Here's my example for my characters...

Name
Haruko Raharu / Zakuro Raharu
Age
10
M or F
Female
City
Pallet Town
Appearence
Haruko and Zakuro are identical twins. they have pink hair and red eyes. Haruko's hair is longer then her sisters and is kept in two low poytails.

Haruko and Zakuro

Personality
Haruko
Haruko is shy and doesn't open up to new people easily. She doesn't talk much and she values of her friends alot.
Zakuro
Zakuro is energetic and loves to move around. She can't sit still for very long but she will always help her sister, or anyone who is in trouble.
Most pople think Haruko is to whimpish to be a trainer and Zakuro doesn't care, but when either of them get into the battle they can kick some major butt.
History
Haruko and Zakuro's mother died in childbirth and their father passed away when they were five. They used to live in the region of Orre, but when their father died they were sent off to the Kanto region to live in Pallet town. They lived in the newly built PokeCentre there under the care of Hitomi Samejima. They first found out about the strange goings on when their best friend Hisano and Tomoy Miyaji was attacked by a pack of wild houndour and houndoom and was in hospital for a long time. On their tenth birthday they got shocking news, Tomoyo and Hisano had passed away in hospital. They also had to choose a pokemon each from the pokemon lab. They were both to sad to choose a pokemon at first but in the end they both chose the same pokemon.
Pokemon
Eevee / Eevee
Other

Hisano and Tomoyo

Tomoyo has long purple hair and eyes and Hisano has short purple hair and blue eyes.

Parents

Mother
Ichigo Nandaba
Father
Samuru Raharu
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Old 09-22-2007, 06:24 PM
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Its okay. Btw, love the first pix on your siggy. Lol Cingular.
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Old 09-22-2007, 09:05 PM
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Sigh.... Its A Fail Awnser the questions and i will join


What do we do
How do we know were picked
why did the professers not let all the pokemon be relesed
Then also ZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZz oops sorry I forgot 666666 Other Q
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Old 09-22-2007, 10:17 PM
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Sigh.... Its A Fail Awnser the questions and i will join


What do we do
How do we know were picked
why did the professers not let all the pokemon be relesed
Then also ZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZz oops sorry I forgot 666666 Other Q
Thats mean.
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Old 09-22-2007, 10:19 PM
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Thats mean.
Ready Steady Can't Hold Me Back...
Ready Steady Give Me Good Luck...

Please remember the four word rule

Yes, I agree, your plot needs a lot more work

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Let's Get Started Ready Steady Go!
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Old 09-23-2007, 01:06 AM
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Yah. I said it too. She/He added something. U didnt see when I havent told him/her yet.
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Old 09-23-2007, 10:21 AM
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Thanks for all the help you guys. I'll think of a way I can sort out my plot. I really apreciate all the help you are giving me, just keep telling me if there is any thing else I need to sort out and I will sort ASAP.

Before I forget I will answer anyones questions so I better answer the ones from Monkey Boy.

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What do we do
I don't really know how to answer this one. It's like most of the other RPs I guess, I will start the actual RP when 10 people join.

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How do we know were picked
I've updated my sign up sheet again so I have an accepted list on it, and I will tell you if you are accepted after you post your character form.

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why did the professers not let all the pokemon be relesed
If Professor Kagami had let the pokemon free then they would start acting strangely like the wild pokemon because there is a strange force making all wild pokemon attack any travellers but it doesn't happen to pokemon owned by trainers.


I hope I have included enough info. just tell me if I need to do anything else.

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btw i'm a girl. yay me.
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Old 09-25-2007, 05:02 PM
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It's sort of a good plot, but you sort of need to explain some things.

First of all, as Monkey Boy said, you need to put the objective of the RP onto the first post. All I see is random children get pokemon to go somewhere.

Secondly, who the balooka are Team Toko? Explain who they are, because you just jumped in without telling us who they are.

Finally, how did Professor Kagami choose the lucky 10? Did she advertise? Did she go knocking on doors, asking? Did she hypnotise passers by? Tell us what's so special about these children.

Improve on those things, and thsi would make a VERY good RP
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Old 09-25-2007, 10:37 PM
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"What did you get Lucy?"
"I got candy! What did you get Linus?"

I have a few concerns of my own...

1) How did the professors lose their jobs? So they can't give beginning Pokemon to kids, but that's not all they do, they also reaserch...a lot...on Pokemon behaviors and all that stuff.

2) You probably need to introduce Professor Kagami and Team Toko more...like what does Professor Kagami reasearch? Does Team Toko use a specific type of Pokemon? Did Team Toko have old crime records? (I think you get it)

3) Why would every Pokecenter built a housing for the childern? If that happened, the ending would come too soon.

4) Is there a specific sorce of how the Kanto Pokemon are reacting wiredly?

5a) How did the Professor choose the children? Did they have specific abilities that no one else had?

5b) Relateing to the last question...How did she find them? How did she know they were special?

That is all...

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"...I got a rock..."
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