Originally Posted by celebihunter
Ok,now that I have fully raised my Pokemon,I have returned.
I won't do the bold edit, as it would take up a lot of time. First of all, don't use ubers. Second, mystic water and similar items are gar-bage. Third of all, you have no walls at all, and you only have sweepers, which is pretty much suicide. Now, a rundown of all your pokemon:
Empoleon: No, not shadow claw. It is a special sweeper when used properly, replace shadow claw with agility. Modest nature...lax is one of the few natures that NEVER works.
Blaziken: Hax items like focus band are not allowed...but your movest fails. Two moves of the same type are almost always bad. Brick Break>Sky Uppercut, though close combat is better than both. Infernape outclasses Blaziken anyways, but oh well. I'd give it thunderpunch to beat water and flying types better...and brave bird over aerial ace...
Kyogre: I loled at EQ on it...it is a special attacker, not like it matters, since you can't use ubers in standard play...again, soft sand is made of fail, though your moveset isn't too bad. Replace EQ with calm mind.
Crobat: Last I checked, air slash was a special attack, and crobat can only use physical attacks well...same goes for sludge bomb. On top of it, you have a careful nature...jolly nature, and give it some physical attacks like aerial ace. Why mean look? Crobat can't survive long enough to be a trapper...and mean look just fails on it IMO.
Rhyperior: I didn't actually lol at this. Avalanche over hammer arm...and rash nature is made of fail on Rhyperior. Adamant and you're good.
Lucario: I won't comment since I suck with lucario.
Overall, your team needs defense, ASAP. That mean implementing some walls, and rhyperior doesn't count...more of a tank. Get rid of Kyuber and put in blissey or some other special wall for starters...also, EV train your pokemon...that way this isn't viewed as an ingame team.