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Old 05-29-2007, 11:23 PM
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hey i been a fan for a while....just i dont post i read
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Old 05-30-2007, 12:47 AM
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Chapter IV

Silver VS... Jasmine!?

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“RALTS!” Says Ralts, flying up into the air via Pidgeys gust

“Geeeee...” Says Pidgey, falling to the ground

“Pidgey is unable to battle” Exclaims the ref

“HOOO!” Says Hoothoot, hit by Spearows Aerial Ace

“Ralts, help Hoothoot” Silver commands

“RALTS!” Replies Ralts

“Hoothoot, Hypnosis!” Orders Jasmine

“Ralts, DREAM EATER!”

“ROOOW! says spearow. Fainting in his sleep

“Spearow is unable to battle” The Ref exclaims Jasmine and Silver are the victors

“... I can’t believe it... I lost allready” says Falkner

“OH YEAH! WE WON!!!” Exclaims Silver, jumping with joy

“Not quite” Says Falkner

“Huh? Whats that supposed to mean?” Asks silver

“You may have beaten me, but this is’nt some fancy Hoenn Gym, if you want the badge, You two have to have to battle” Says Falkner, grinning

“We.. Have to battle who? Asks Jasmine, looking around

“Eachother” Says Falkner

“WHAT!?” Silver and Jasmine both ask

“Battle each other... To get the Gym badge?” Asks Jasmine

“Yes, thats the rule for double battles” Says Falkner

“Grrr...” Silver looks at Jasmine

“That’s not fair!” Silver says

“Fair or not, those are the rules. The battle will take place tomarrow at noon” Says Falkner

“We didn’t know that” Says Jasmine

“Jasmine, that is enough” Says Silver

“We have to battle?” Asks Jasmine

*Silver nods*

*That same evening, outside of Violet City*

“RALTS, PSYCHIC!” Silver orders Ralts

“RAAAAAAAAA!” Ralts screams, uprooting a tree from its roots

“TOSS IT!” Says Silver

“RALTS! Raaaaa...” Ralts says, tossing the huge tree like a twig

“We’ll have to...” Silver mutters

*Back at Violet City*

“Are you ready?“ Silver asks Jasmine

*Jasmine nods*

“Allright, Ralts, you know what to do” Silver mutters to Ralts, next to Silver

“The battle between Jasmine and Silver. Trainers choose your Pokemon” The ref says

“Hootrhoot, I choose you!“ Exclaims Jasmine

“Cuddles” Silver ,throwing his Pokeball proclaims “I choose YOU!”

“Trainers ready... BEGIN!” The ref exclaims

“Hoothoot, peck” Jasmine says

“Cudles, growl” Says Silver

“Hoothoot use hypnosis” Says Jasmine

“Cuddles... Sleep” Silver says

“Huh?... Um, right. Hoothoot use peck” Says Jasmine

“Cuddles... Sleep” Silver says again


“Eh? Um, Hoothoot, peck” Jasmine says

“Ralts... DESTINEY BOND! Exclaims Silver

“WHAT!” Falkner says, watching the battle from afar

“Hm... Hoothoot and Ralts are both unable to battle” The Ref says

“What did you do?” Asks Jasmine

“Read the rules” Says Silver

“What do you mean?” Asks Jasmine

“He means, you both have earned the Zephyr Badge” Says Falkner, walking up to the two

“Huh?” Jasmine says

“According to the official Johto League rulebook. *ahem*” Falkner begins to explain

“In the event of a draw between two CHALLENGERS, not the challenger and the Gym Leader. In the event of a draw between two challengers, you are both eligible as the victors” Falkner Explains

“I told you, I was top in the Pokemon Academy” Silver says, grinning ear to ear

“Wow” Jasmine says falling to the ground

“JASMINE!?” Silver yells rushing to Jasmine

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What happened to Jasmine? Sorry if this chapter seems a bit “off”... I kinda have writers block. Can’t think of anything...
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Old 05-31-2007, 01:28 AM
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it is good! keep going!
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Old 05-31-2007, 01:33 AM
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Are you ignoring my previous posts or something? -.- I basically have the same comments for this chapter's layout as the other chapters.

However, I love your ideas. <3 Battling the gym leader and then each other? That's so kewl.
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Great, you're at a fourth chapter, yes so many replies. I congratulate you.
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hey i been a fan for a while....just i dont post i read
I love that avatar. And I had to post-pone my fanfic...
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Old 06-23-2007, 03:48 AM
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oh no! our great writer is now banned! it cant be!
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oh no! our great writer is now banned! it cant be!
Oh No! I want next chapter!
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Old 06-25-2007, 11:02 PM
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Oh No! I want next chapter!
I am back. Sadly, I am closing this Fanfic. No more chapters... I'll be starting a new one when (and if) I have time on my hands
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