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Old 06-09-2007, 04:54 PM
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Chapter One: The Truth


In the Sinnoh Region, before there were Pokemon, before water, before even life under the clouds, there was Arceus. Arceus was lived in Skyland, a world above the world of clouds. From Arceus split Dialga, and Palkia. Arceus planned to pass on the world to Dialga, and Palkia. But little did he know that that would be the undoing of it all.

Dialga was pure at his soul. He didn't care if he had to share the world Pialka. Arceus was actually planning to split the earth into four quarters. Three to Dialga, one to Pialka.

Pialka heard of this, and was outraged. Pialka, unlike Dialga was evil to the core. He wanted the entire world to himself. Now, Arceus didn't know of this, until a spirit from even above Skyland, from the heavens alerted Arceus of the dangers.

Arceus heeded these warnings immediatly and summoned the last of hils strenght, sacraficing him self, he formed Groudon, Kyogre, Raquaza, Mespirit, Uxie, and Azelf. But to do these things, Arceus had used the last of his life energy to save the world, Arceus died.

Groudon formed land, while Kyogre formed Water. Uxie, Mespirt, and Azelf controlled both Dialga and Pialka. They sealed them in a different dimesion, never to be seen again.

Groudon, the maker of ground, had a terrible battle with Kyogre, the maker of water. It changed the balance of nature, and lasted for days and days.

Until the great Lord of Skyland: Rayquaza came down from the heavens and stopped th battle. He sent the two into eternal slumber.

So heed this, history is harsh. Be careful what you wish for, especially in the Mystic Marsh.

The past has warned you, I hope you don't-





I read the wall sevral times, but there was just the one thing I didn't get. What happened to the rest of the legend. "I wish I knew what it meant, and the rest. And especially in the Mystic Marsh. I am there. I wish I knew what happened, to see it.

I knew right there and then something terrible had happened to the balance of nature. I didn't know why. All I had done was break into the Spacial Time Spirit Cave(a cave located on the outskirts of Sinnoh), and read the tablet.

There was an earthquake. The sun beat down on my neck, but it was also raining. There gigantic waves coming from nowhere. The sky, even though there was a sun, and rain, had a purplish tinge.

In some spots there was sun beating down, and in others there was the worst of rain. In the other there were that unusual purple something. Now it was going around in a kind of wave I was sure spread around the entire planet. It went over the other calamities, temporarily blocking out the sun and rain from certain spots.

To top it all off there were glaciers, and fissures, and volcanos erupting everywhere. Just when I thought the worst had come, a flash of light, and then it seemed I was in a kingdom.

I saw a ledge. I walked over to it, expecting to see water. I looked down, and nearly fell down it.

Instead of water, I saw cloud, endless layers of cloud, noithing else. I couldn't beleive it.

I somehow was transported back in time, to Skyland. It was rumored that it was destroyed thousands of years ago, and Rayquaza went to the Hoenn Region.

I ran to the castle like building. I dashed up the marble stairs, and into the gargantuin stone building.

I walked serenely around the room. As I expected, Arceus was slowly pacing by the throne. This was what I wished, and it came true: to see what really happened.

I could change history, change destiny, change the death of Arceus. If only I could convince him.

I saw light forming at Arceus's head. I ran, and yelled," No!" But too late, I saw what looked like an explosion.

Light went acroos the room, going through the walls, and spreading across the universe. The flash of light got brighter then faded. I looked at the throne, where Arceus stood mere minutes before.

Arceus was on the floor. There was no form of life in the God of Pokemon. Arceus, just as the legend said it would, had died.

I knew what would happen next.

I ran out of the gargantuin building, and to the edge of the clouds. I looked over the edge, and my jaw dropped.

The war was being waged in front of my eyes. I was so suprised I nearly fell off.

In the beggining, I almost fell out, but in the end, I did fall out.

I didn't know what would happen next, I would fall down to Groudon, and Kyogre waging their war.

Either that, or I would have to send out my Pokemon, and put their lives in jeoperdy. It was a no brainer. I would not risk my Pokemon.

I kept falling, waiting for the worst to happen. I kept waiting, but noithing happened. I didn't hit the ground, I just, kept falling.

But, I didn't fall, I was just suspended in mid air for what felt like an eternity. It was like I was floating, was I already dead?

I didn't know, but I knew what it was, it was something Arceus made, for those were the only living things, apart from the small fish in the sea.

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Old 06-09-2007, 09:34 PM
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Dear god I love this. Please, PLEASE, add more!
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Old 06-10-2007, 10:53 PM
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Hehhehheh, thanks for the comment. I'll add more later.

EDIT: I know the next chapter is short, but this is my first Fan Fic.

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Old 06-10-2007, 11:26 PM
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Chapter Two: The War
I wasn't falling after all. I was being suspended in midair by Uxie, one of the three legendary pixies that arceus made.

"Hey, thanks little guy," I said, patting Uxie's head.

Uxie lowered me down onto some newly made ground. I looked up at the sky, and I thought I saw a blur of brown get hit with a blur of green.

But that blur of green was getting closer, and closer. It wadn't a blur of green, it was Rayquaza! It was coming to stop the battle. It come closer, while something something was charging in its mouth.

Then, it realesed, and shot straight into the water. The Hyper Beam made a gigantic splash, and soaked me, Uxie, Kyogre, and Groudon. I spit out some salt water while Groudon was charging a Solar Beam.

It sent it straight at Kyogre, and hit it. Kyogre looked extremely weakened. Rayquaza found that it was time, and a weird attack that I had never seen before. It was like energy was emmiting for every particle of his body.

Eventually a falsh of light ammited from Rayquaza. A flash of light! I had seen this attack before, Arceus had used it. But that meant that Rayquaza would...

Kyogre and Groudon were sent to the bottom of the sea, and were sealed away.

Then Rayquaza, with a swish of its tail, flew away and become that tiny green speck again.

I couldn't beleive that, when Arceus used that very same attack he died in a flash, and Rayquaza flew away like nothing was wrong. I didn't get know how that could be. I was positive that Rayquaza and Arceus had used the exact some attack. But, one died and the other didn't.

"Uxie, what just, Uxie?" I said to Uxie, but Uxie had dissapeared. There was nothing to do now except wait for the next saga in the legend.

The next saga, one saga happened, but another didn't. Did that mean that the legend wasn't in order.

That would make the legend incorrect, and things that are incorrect are often not com- plete. That would mean that that meant that there could other parts of the legend. I just had to wait for the unknown furture to happen.
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Old 06-11-2007, 03:06 PM
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Ooh, very interesting. I really like this story.
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Old 06-11-2007, 03:17 PM
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no offence but i think you should make chapter 2 longer
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Old 06-11-2007, 08:09 PM
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I know, but, I'm really not a writer, and this is my first Fan Fic
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Old 06-12-2007, 06:14 PM
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ok, sorry for the coment
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Old 06-13-2007, 05:52 PM
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It's okay there was no possible way that you could've known.
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