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Old 05-30-2007, 08:58 PM
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Default The Adventures of Charlie The Unicorn: candy mountain and more favorites. [so funny]

Hi, i am telling the story of Charlie the Unicorn and how his life is a total disaster and stuff... well its gonna be funny and sort of stupid if you know what i mean... well here we go

Charlie The Unicorn

bonnie: charlie charlie! wake up!
sammy: yeah wake up ya silly sleepy head!
charlie: what? what? the frikin meadow better be on fire or else-
bonnie: no charlie. we're going to candy mountain!
sammy: won't you come with us charlie?
charlie: no!
bonnie: charlie come on! charlie! charlie charlie charlie!( as she jumps ontop of him)
charlie: Fine! i'll go with you!
sammy: come on charlie!
bonnie: the magic fart will lead the way!
as they are walking they spot a dying whale which bonnie and sammy call "the magic fart"
sammy: The magic fart has spoken!
bonnie: that way!
they run over to a bridge and start walking across it.
charlie: is anyone else here getting like covered in frikin splinters?
sammy: they're magical splinters charlie
bonnie: yah because we're walking across a magical bridge
charlie: yeah sure... you know there is no real candy mountain.
as they finish walking across the bridge they spot candy mountain!
sammy: shun the disbeliever because we are here
bonnie: go inside thee candy cave charlie
sammy: yeah charlie
charlie: i don't think so
the letters that spell candy suddenly appear and start singing.
C: ooooooh! if you go in the candy cave it will fill you with love and joy!
A: the candy cave is just a magicaaal woooooonder!
N: with candy candy cnady sweets sweets sweets in the woooonnnnddddeeeerrrrfffffuuuullll candy caaaaaaaaave!
D: with gum and lolipops and skittles and chocolate and peanuts and hairy dick ooooooops!
Y: and thats all we have to say so go in the candy cave!

charlie: ok! ok! i'll go in!
charlie walks in the candy cave
bonnie: goodbye charlie!
sammy: goodbye charlie!
charlie: what do you mean goo-
suddenly the door to the cave closes and voices start coming out of no where and then... suddenly charlie wakes up.
charlie: huh? what happened? aw krap! they took my frikin candy!

guess what? MORE CHARLIE THE UNICORN COMING YOUR WAY!!!!!
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Old 05-31-2007, 11:13 AM
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Default Re: The Adventures of Charlie The Unicorn: candy mountain and more favorites. [so fun

Charlie the Unicorn Episode 2


Bonnie: charlie wake up
Sammy: yeah charlie wake up!
charlie: nooooo! you already tried to kill me with the candy mountain thing
bonnie: no. we found a route to the magic tree bark.
sammy: yeah charlie
bonnie: wont you come with us?
charlie: No!
sammy: c'mon charlie c'mon charlie
bonnie: yeah charlie c'mon
charlie: FINE!
they walk to a dead whale
bonnie: look! the boar of knowledge!
dead whale: bleh!!! bleh!!!
sammy: it has spoken!
bonnie: lets go!
charlie: there is no magic tree bark
sammy: shun the disbeileifer!
bonnie: we're here!
charlie: there IS magic tree bark
magictreebark: bark! bark!
charlie: help!
bonnie: help!
sammy: help!
they run out of the valley of incredible stupidness
tune in for the next charlie the unicorn
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Old 05-31-2007, 11:19 AM
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Default Re: The Adventures of Charlie The Unicorn: candy mountain and more favorites. [so fun

This might be something close to funny if you actually knew the lines from Candy Mountain.
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Old 05-31-2007, 11:22 AM
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Default Re: The Adventures of Charlie The Unicorn: candy mountain and more favorites. [so fun

Hate to say it, but this really isn't a fan fiction, its more of a script without any detail, background, or plot to it. Also, I already know this isn't your original idea. It would be a lot better if you work on something that was...

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