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Old 05-15-2007, 11:38 PM
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Default ~Over the Years~

Over the Years

A poem I made up randomly. I really don't know if it's good or not. If I'm somehow in the wrong section, notify a mod and let them move it. Thanks.

I walk slowly through the dirt, so cold and afraid

Squeezing my bouquet of roses every step I take to your grave

I look down to the dirt and snow that is the path I take

My breath and body shaking so much I might break

All the memories we had together; from beginning to end

I will never forget the day we became friends

We both disliked each other, we were stubborn after all

Laughing at each other every time we had a fall

But then I protected you and you protected me

And as we got to know each other; we became like family

From then on we fought and battled together

Thinking our friendship would last forever

But now as I walk, my black hair blowing in the breeze

I realize that could never happen in our dreams

Not since the day that car drove by

And you push me out of the way with a silent goodbye

All I heard was the impact and the car screeching to a halt

And as the paramedics came I thought it was my fault

I was mad and wondered why

Why of creations did you have to die?

Then I blamed you, for saving me

If I knew you were safe I would have died happily

But I guessed that’s how you felt knowing I would be alright

And knowing we would never get into another fight

But that meant no more laughing, no more tears

No more traveling together over the years

A few feet away from your grave, I come to a stop

Then I realize that this was nobody’s fault

It all sinks in now, the tears that I’ve held back

Start to flood my eyes as the bouquet starts to crack

The tears let loose now, and I break out in a cry

I scream out and fall to my knees, more tears burning my mud colored eyes

No more caring and loving, no more hugging and fears

All those things we have shared over the years

Why? Why couldn’t you see?

That you were a brother to me?

Why did you have to go and leave me here alone?

No more warmth or happiness; I’m cold to the bone

I manage to get up from my position and walk weakly to your grave

And thank you for my life that you had saved

I kneel down to your bed, and put the roses down

And thank Aceus for the friend I had found

The tears are drying up, but I’m still feeling blue

But I remember all the good times we had and happiness shines through

I said “You were my friend, and I know you knew…”

“And I just wanted to say…good bye…Pikachu…”

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*Sob* I made myself cry...so sad...You would have to have a IQ of ten to not know who the character talking is (or you haven't watched the anime). So, R&R!

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Old 05-16-2007, 02:19 AM
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xD Poor Ash-kun. I thought that Pikachu never died. Oh well too bad for the Pikachu I am sure that he is happy in Pika-heaven.
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Old 05-16-2007, 12:09 PM
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xD Poor Ash-kun. I thought that Pikachu never died. Oh well too bad for the Pikachu I am sure that he is happy in Pika-heaven.
Yes, poor, poor Ash...

Maybe this will be my poems page...I'm sure I'll make up another poem today...If so, I'll post it...

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