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Old 07-31-2004, 03:00 PM
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Late Creative Writing Results for Week #3 - Loss

I'll get to the chase. The winners for week four will be announced tonight (or tomorrow).

- Duke, of Team Flora, for his poem, "The Home Front"
- Neo Pikachu, of Team Nox, for his poem, "One Among Many"

I'd also like to point out that this week, I laughed and I (almost, there were a few tears) cried reading the entries.

-Matt
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Old 07-31-2004, 11:10 PM
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Team Nox
(I hope this isn’t too late…)

Surrounded

What seems best becomes a mistake in time
We what seems like benefit becomes a crime
And then there is a question that drives me
That nothing is right and nothing is fine

Upon my forehead is my hand
As I try to make one last stand
The lines of anger are all I see
Trying to satisfy the demand

I have become the enemy of the state
Everyone looks at me with the glare of hate
And even now I cannot fight
My will is over with the choice of fate

To many, this has become the end
To me I will no longer have a friend
And even now that I might
My name will never be met by commend

I’m surrounded by the anger of my mistake
Even though it was a choice I had to make
It hurts to see the friend become the foe
Can anyone forgive me for heaven’s sake?

For now, an apology is what I sent
Let them know I said what I meant
Lay it down for them all to know
They all have pressured me to the greatest extent

But even know, my plea goes unheard
They seem unfamiliar to every word
They surrounded me with this strife
The blame upon me is absurd

The hurt and pressure has only built
The flower of my youth has begun to wilt
And upon this vast overcoming of my life
I have become overrun by guilt
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Old 08-02-2004, 11:02 PM
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I'll judge week 4 later I'm just too tired from the tenis all day -.-;; sorry

Theme #6: Dreams
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Old 08-03-2004, 11:54 PM
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Here I am, yet again trying to win a point I know I won't win. There are so many better writers here than me! Well at least I'm trying.
BTW I'm from Tri-Blade.

The wind. Flowing. Erupting in gusts around me. Pulling. Stretching and twisting me into shapes I didn’t think possible for the human body. Tall waves of moving coldness washing around me. Pulling. Shoving. Yanking. Tearing like the claws of an angry tiger. Cold. So cold. Shivering. Freezing cold.

The wind. It was trying to get something from me or push something in, I couldn’t tell which. I tried to keep it away. My legs, thrashing. Cold. Pain. Unbearable agony. No! Stop! That hurts! Stop! Something cold and agonizing flowing into me, to my very bones. Pain. Screaming. Someone yelling. I can’t hear. Stop! The agony. Pain gone. Cold. Alone…


“Mahrya! Mahrya!” My eyes snapped wide open. I found myself staring up into the thin, tight-lipped face of a girl with long auburn hair and sapphire blue eyes.

“Malasa.” I wheezed faintly to my twin, still feeling the remnants of that sheer cold in my body. I shivered uncontrollably at the thought of the tearing wind ripping through me… But it was only a dream, wasn’t it? And why was I so cold?

I reached up with my left hand to touch my sisters pale face, wanting to give myself a small reassurance that it was nothing more than a dream. That was when the realization struck me. My hand was numb. It was a pure bloodless white. I stared in shock as the putrid feeling of dread began to creep over me, beginning at the pit of my stomach. Why was I so cold? Could that dream have actually been real? I shuddered at the thought. It couldn’t have been. It wasn’t possible. As soon as my hand touch my sister’s cheek she jerked back.

“Mahr! You’re so cold!” He usually calm voice was high pitched with panic as her worried frown deepened in concern.

“I’m okay!” I cried hoarsely, trying to keep my cold lips from chattering, saying it as much to reassure myself as to reassure my sister. I tried to sit up but as I did, the yellow light of the oil lamp that sat on the oak table beside my bed blurred and flipped. I fell back into bed with a soft thud as I landed hard on the soft bedding.

“Mahr.” Malasa said softly, trying to conceal the worry in her voice and not succeeding very well. “You’re not alright and you know it.”

I shook my head slowly, “It was only a dream.” I whispered. "Only a dream."
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Old 08-05-2004, 06:18 PM
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Golden Age

Every day people die on front of my eyes
I could hear their discouraging, frantic cries
During those nights I dream
And hear a painful scream
But sometimes I see a golden age
An age of peace without anger or rage

I also dream of you and I
Your serenity and grace enough for me to cry
I wish that age was here
Where there was no death or fear

It was but a dream
To many people it may seem
But it is an age worth fighting and dying for
Because out of the blood and gore
Peace will eventually restore
And I can return to our home at the beach
Where roams a fragrance of peach
Though I dream of that day
Where there is no longer a price of life to pay
It seems an impossible thought
After experiencing those battles we fought
But I still cling on to the light
So no longer may I see another fight
And just be with you
Among the beach sands or the field’s dew

I assure you when this is done
After this long battle is won
I shall return to you
And what used to my dreams will come true
Conclude shall the death and hate
And through it will come a golden age of great
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Old 08-06-2004, 06:00 AM
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team nox

Icarian dreams

Oh to soar unbounded,
beyond the problems of this earth
on waxen wings...
to reach the heavens; to touch the sun;
survive to soar again,

in slumber, blankets sheathed
from distant midnight skies
set my lofty ambitions,
against laws of logic,

and the glare, the rusts
that held me fast, give way
to flights of fancy...

a proud indignation,
glory days,
waft away.

Prosperity, wealth all but an illusion
fading as spirits do;
no reconciliation,
no requiem sung for the beloved.

Boast of pridefulness;
sins of the hypocrisy do not condemn.
as you may fly to the sun
and nary a wing will you burn

rest
rest has come at last
and what was dreamt
now dreams.
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Old 08-06-2004, 04:36 PM
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Team Tri-Blade

Forever Dreaming

Before the world was always stirring, constantly ever shifting,
before the sun’s consistent setting, the moon’s recurring rising,
before the first flower’s blossoming, the trees earliest budding,
forever did I dream of you.

While the rivers are swiftly curving, currents always sweeping,
while tides are timely rising, the waves always crashing,
while the wind is wordlessly whispering, the stars progressively glimmering,
forever do I dream of you.

After the world may finish its whirling, the sun renounced its blazing,
after the rivers freeze their rippling, the trees no longer aging,
after the wind has suspended its murmuring, the stars have abandoned their glistening,
Still, forever will I dream of you.

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Old 08-07-2004, 04:36 PM
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Me quits as Creative Writing judge.
Me shoulds find a creative writing way to tell you all this.
and why.
Me finds that now.
Me runs off leaving a note behind.

I was your judge
I read about your hot fudge
But now I'm gone
Isn't that fun?

Why you may ask
There are reasons by the flask
The first reason is
I haven't been in the biz
For the past two weeks

Reason number two
Is that the time, there is none
But there is time for fun
So that's my flu

This is my resignation
This is the application
So get a new judge
To judge Weeks four and five
Yay! I live in a hive!

This poem sucks
I realize that, my ducks
But it's a creative way
To show my dismay
I bid you good day!


I hiope the new judge remembers me :(
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Old 08-15-2004, 01:15 AM
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er this portion has been left stagnant for some time, was np supposed to take control of this aspect of the war?
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Old 08-15-2004, 01:48 AM
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Quote:
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er this portion has been left stagnant for some time, was np supposed to take control of this aspect of the war?
Yes, but I wanted to talk with the other war leaders about it first, and so far Harry hasn't been on for us to contact him so we haven't had a war meeting for quite some time. That's the reason for the delay...
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Old 08-18-2004, 12:00 AM
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Ummm, not to be rude or anything, but come on, we need to get this problem worked out! People that have talent in this section of the war aren't able to support their team now...is anyone trying to sort this problem out? It's time for our results and a new topic.
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Old 11-01-2004, 08:48 PM
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i noticed this was called 'WAR creative writing'
if u want sum creative writing about war listen to slayer!
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