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Old 02-20-2007, 09:11 PM
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Pokemon Dungeon rescue team 5 renew

Team pearl is home resting but one.Torey couldn't go to sleep she wanted to go home.

"Now were to go."Said Torey.She looked around but couldn't find a way to get back home.

"Hey! Who that?"Asked Torey. A Gengar was walking with Kip.

"Is that Kip!?"Said Torey.She went to Kip's room but,he wasn't there. With Gengar............

"So Kip can you do me a favor?"Asked Gengar.
Kip looked at him.

"Uh....Well......Blaze said not to listen to you."Said Kip. Gengar slap his forehead.

"Do you have a new member?"Asked Gengar.Kip was tolded not to tell anyone.

"Well....No and why?"Said Kip. Gengar turned to Kip and looked at him in the eyes.

"In your mind it said you do have new members."Said Gengar. Kip was shocked.

" And thier names are.......Tom.......And Torey."Said Gengar. Kip was ready to run.

"Kip! Waht are you doing?!"Yelled Torey. Gengar turned and glared.

"Hi Torey! This is Gengar."Said Kip.Gengar soon had idea.

"Nice to meet you. Say can you do me a favor?"Asked Gengar.Torey wasn't sure what to do at all.

"Well..Ok."Said Torey.

"Ok Blaze has my badges so can you get them?"Asked Gengar.

"Uh..If its yours ok."Said Torey. Kip pulled Torey to a tree.

"Are you crazy!He only has 2 badges!"Yelled Kip. Torey looked like she did the worse thing on earth. They walked back to base.Tom went out with Sceptile and Blaze to get one mission.Torey had her chance to get the badges.
Kip was looking at a book at his room.

"Wow! Blaze has tons of badges."Said Torey.She looked at them and took her hand and grabed all of the badges.

"Ok thats over with."Sai Torey. Now she put them in her bag.

"Now to gengar."Said Torey. Tom and the others came back.

"My badges!!! Were are they!!???"Yelled Blaze.

"Oh-no"Said Torey.She tiped toed to the door but,she got puched on the door.

"Run!Open the door before we get killed!"Yelled Sceptile.Torey opened the door and ran.

"Oh man run!"Yelled Sceptile. Everyone ran but,Kip got caght by Blaze.

"Kip.Do you know what happen to my badges?"Asked Blaze. Kip sighed.

"Ok Torey is giveing it to Gengar."Said Kip.

"I kenw she wasn't good!"Yelled Blaze.He ran down the stairs.

"Uhhh....Bye?"Said Kip. Torey now in the woods. "Uhhhh......Hello?"Said Torey.Then a team spoted her.

"You!"Said Nuzleaf. Torey looked at him.

"Uhhh...I have to go so I don't have time for this."Said Torey and ran.

"Leader! We Found a Blaziken!"Said Nuzleaf.

"There almost gone...I say there is maybe.......60."Said the leader. Blaze got to were Torey is.Torey had to stop.She hread Blaze but she fell.

"Oh-no Blaze!"Said Torey.Blaze hide as soon as Torey got up.

"Ha!"Yelled Blaze.Torey looked at him and was tring to flee but,it was no use.

"Ok Torey, give me my badges."Said Blaze and sicked out his hand.Torey was thinking.

"We can do this the hard way."Said Blaze.

"Fine you have to battle for them."Said Torey.

"Hey wait a second! I can hit girls!"Said Blaze.

"Ha! right.....Chicken."Said Torey. "Help!Shiftry is in danger!"Yelled Jumpluff.Blaze saw a Jumpluff that was cring for help.

"Ok battle off."Said Torey.Then she saw Shiftry in air and a Zapdos.

"Blaze look!Its Zapdos!"Said Torey.Blaze looked up. "Hey bird! Over here!"Said Torey.

"What are you doing!?"Said Blaze.

"Saving Shiftry."Said Torey.Zapdos swooped down and grabed her.Blaze tried to pull her but,it was too late. "

I'll get help!"Yelled Blaze.

"Gaaaaaaarrrrwwww"Yelled Zapdos. It made thunder storms.

"Not the rain!"Said Blaze.Rain came down."I had to say rain."Said Blaze. He went back to base.

Zapdos's home....................

"Hey! What happened!?"Said Shiftry."I grabed you,you over grown plant!"Yelled Zapdos.

"Hey! Is your name Thunder in japanese?"Asked Torey.

"Stop talking you over grown chicken!"Yelled Zapdos.

"Since you two are here that means I get to battle you."Said Zapdos.

"But....But...But!"Said Torey.

"Shut up!!!!"Yelled Zapdos.It shocked Torey. Then it flew away. Torey and Shiftry had no place to go and nothing to eat.Blaze told his team that mission to save Shitfry and Torey.

~ANASTASIAR~

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At the time Torey got to base with Tom they thought somthing is mission

"Torey look! Is that look ok to you?"Asked Tom. Torey was walking away finding somthing better to do.


"Oh!....Uh...Its ok."Said Torey.

"Hey!What are you doing?"Asked Tom.

"Whats it look like? I am walking."Said Torey.Tom knew by the look of her something is
up.

"Torey...Torey....Torey whats up?"Asked Tom.Torey only showed hafe her face.

"Who needs to know?"Asked Torey.Torey turned her face to the hill.


"Torey...Wrong way."Said Tom. "See ya."Said Torey.Then a Pikachu ran right at her.


"Help!He iscomeing!"Said Pikachu. A Machamp jumped and grabed Pikachu.

"Hey! Thats not your Pikachu!"Yelled Torey.Machamp went back but didn't give Pikachu.


"Are you the one who wants this Pikachu?"Asked Machamp.

"Duh!Who elas!"Said Torey.Both glared at each other.

"Well gess what?Say bye!"Said Machamp.He aimed for the sky.

"Hey, I'll battle you for it."Said Torey.He stop and put Pikachu down.

"Ok.At dawn."Said Machamp.

"Ok."Said Torey.Then they went slowly back to base.

"Torey did what?!"Yelled Kip.

"She going to battle Machamp.How hard is it to say that?"
Asked Tom.The whole team was shocked with fear.

"She is going to die early thats for
sure."Said Blaze. Torey just got to the base.

"Hey!Whats going on?"Asked Torey.The
team looked at her shrap."Nothing."Said Blaze.Then the team got closer to
her.

"Ok....Why are you and the team getting close for?"Asked Torey.The team got
closer,and closer.

"Now this is weird."Said Torey.She push the team away.

"Ok fine go ahead and die if you want!"Yelled Blaze.Kip grabed him down and Sceptile closed his beck.

"Blaze!Sssshhhhhhh!"Said Kip.

"Tom! You told them!?"Asked Torey.Tom said this

"Yeah...I am sorry I didn't know it was a secret!"Torey ran to her room.

"What?!"Asked Blaze.He went to his room with a temper.Everyone elas was planing for dawn.

"Ok!Its dawn."Said Torey.She waked up an hour ago.

"Hey Machamap!You have the battler."Said Torey.She looked at the field of tall grass.

"Ok!Lets battle!"Said Machamp.

Torey spoted him and was ready to fight.Machamp grabed Torey's leg and swang her in
the air.

"I think I am sick."Said Torey.She used her blaze kick but, didn't kick!She let it
burn.

"Ooooowwww!"Yelled Machamp.His hands were burning red.

"You'll pay for that!"Said Machamp.He punched the ground and made a erathquake.

"Aaaahhhhh!"Yelled Torey.She had got up from that move.Already Torey was ready to give up.She could barely walk.

She stand and used flamethower that went to 15 feet long.Machamp was now beaten.

"Ok you win!Take that Pikachu!"Said Machamp.Torey walked very slow to her base.

"Look Torey can barely walk!"Said Tom.His vines had to keep her from falling.

"Told you so!"Said Blaze.Torey looked at the team.

"I won."Said Torey.The team chreed.

"Wow!"Said Kip.Sceptile helped Torey getting up.Blaze knew she is fakeing.

"Facker!"Said Blaze.Torey had the power to get up.

"What do you mean fake!"Yelled Torey.She was yelling in front of Blaze's face.

"Get away!And by that look you so lost."Said Blaze.

"Your just saying that bacause you can't say that I did"Said Torey

"Oh,whatever!"Said Blaze.

"Don't you ever think about others!"Said Blaze.

"How about you?"Said Torey.They both can't stop fighting.After a while they clam down and went to thier rooms.Sceptile was thinking about the two of them.

"I found out why they fight!"Said Sceptile.He ran to Kip and Tom.

"Guys come here."Said Sceptile.Sceptile wispred to them.

"Of coures!"Said Tom."Duh!"Said Kip.They talk about that all night intill bed time.

Its morning and Team Pearl went to Ninetails home because Torey needed to asked her
somthing.

"Yes,you and your friend are the reason why the disaster are comeing up more."Said Ninetails.Blaze turned to Torey.

"Well...Thats a cures right?"Said Blaze.Then they went to town. RENEW!!! So wait for a new chapter later.

~Anastasiar~

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Re: Pokemon Dungeon rescue team 7 renew

When Team pearl got to town Tom spoted Gengar on a boxes to stand.

"Fellow pokemon.Do you know why the erathquakes are here?"Gengar asked.The pokemon didn't know but needed to know.

"Well there is a pokemon that is a human!"Said Gengar.Everyone then looked around for that pokemon.Torey was know scared and Tom was too.

"The human who was doing this was.......Her!"Gengar said.He pointed
at Torey

"What!?"Torey said.The pokemon gasped.

"You?"Said Pikachu.Torey was speechless.

"Kip! Its her!"Said Sceptile.Kip was back up two steps,hided,and cried.
Tom went with the mob.

"Tom!Who's side are you on?"Asked Blaze.

"Thier side."Tom said.

"Torey,please forgive me."Said Pikachu.He shocked Torey.

"Hey! Cut that out!"Torey yelled.

"Torey.If you not a human then will be friends after this."Said Tom.
He hit her with his vines.
"Oooww."Said Torey.Blaze was still and had no ideas to help.

"Blaze do somthing!"Torey said.Blaze snaped out of what was going on and helped
her

"Thanks."Torey said.

"Back to base?"Asked Blaze.

"Back to base!"Said Torey and ran.

"How did we do?"Torey asked.Blaze looked behind him.

"Yeah.we are ok...for now."Blaze said.Torey looked and saw a team.

"Hello,I am Alakazam.And this my team:Charizard,and Tyranitar."Alakazam said.Torey was too tired to hear untill the last two words that Alakzam said

"Run away."Torey had never though of runing away.

"Well Torey,we have to pack up."Said Blaze.Torey will miss Sceptile,Tom,and Kip.

"Let's go."Said Torey.At dawn Torey and Blaze went to far away places.They never rested they keep walking.Then they got to Mt.Blaze."We are now at Mt.Blaze.This is were most fire pokemon were born."Blaze said.

"Were you born here?"Torey asked."Yeah..................Wait!I hear the mob!Get in!"Blaze said.Torey ran with Blaze in.

"Hey!Were is Blaze and his girl sidekick?"Asked a pokemon.

"They are goners now if they are in Mt.Blaze."Said Alakazam.They went back to town.

"Blaze lets keep moving!"Said Torey.They both had know idea about the bird.Blaze and Torey got to the top they were awakeing Moltres.


RENEW ~Anastasiar~

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Old 02-22-2007, 01:24 AM
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Default Pokemon Dungeon Rescue Team Chapter 14

You know what? I am goin to just show the story


Pokemon Dungeon Rescue Team Chapter 13

The drought that has been going on was getting worst. The days were hotter and dry. That ment Groundon was having a rage. All teams had to stay at home due to the weather.

“Kip! Look at the lake!”Sceptile yelled.Kip dashed to the lake and saw a hole.

“My lake!”Kip said. Kip groaned sofely to himself.

“Kip,it’s okay. I mean….There might be one or two more.”Torey said happily.Kip muttered to his self.

“Torey can you go back to base?”Asked Sceptile. Torey was counfused. The team and her were suppost to go get Groundon.

“Blaze said he didn’t want you to get in the way.”Tom replied. Torey was now angry at Blaze.

“Were is he anyway?”Torey asked.

“Don’t know. He said he went somewere.”Sceptile said.Torey went to town to sreach for Blaze.

“Toreeeeeeyyyyyy!!”Yelled Pikachu. Torey then saw Pikachu at her.

“I needed your help. Machamp is after you and me for that battle he lost.”Pikachu explained.

“He wants to get us.You needed to get Blaze!”Pikachu begged. Torey then saw the anagry Machamp. He ran torweds them and Torey was weak at the moment.

“You two! Get them!” He yelled. Torey and Pikachu screamed from the tops of their lugs.

“When I get my hands on you to you’ll be sorry for messing with me!” Yelled Machamp.

“Well, your going to have to get us frist!”Torey laugh and at the same time scared.

“Help!”Pikachu demanded someone. Evreyone in town made a crowd so it made it harder for Torey and Pikachu to get away.

“Help!” Torey yelled. She just ran after Blaze. He looked around and saw Torey and Pikachu running.
“You guys!” Blaze yelled. Then he saw Torey in a fight.She gave one hard and hot flamthower.Machamp ran as always to base.

“Thanks.”Pikachu said. Torey then saw Blaze.

“You! Why can’t I go?”Torey asked and demanded. Blaze ignored her qusetion.

“Just go.”Blaze demanded. Torey can’t stay and do nothing.

“Blaze,why are you so hrash?”Torey asked. Blaze also ignored her qusetion.

“Fine you win I’ll go back.”Torey said. She went to the tree. She sat on her bed looking at the ceiling.

“Well the boys have fun while I am stuck in my room.”Torey muttered to herself. She grouned for hours thinking of the team.

Five Days Later……..


“Torey we are back.”Tom said.Torey was asleep she didn’t even bouther to listen.

“Torey are you okay?”Asked Kip. Torey woke up pale.

“What happened?”Torey asked. She cough five hard times.

“She is sick.”Blaze said.

“Now you notice.”Torey said. She went to sleep again with no idea what to say to anyone. She clutched her belly every time she wakes up.

“What have I been eating?”Torey asked herself. Then later the team was telling the story about Groundon. She though after the story for minutes. Groundon was told as a storng,hard to talk to,no manners,hates other pokemon.

“Wow! He must have been hard to beat.”Torey said. She went to rest again. She had a nightmare,but not from Gengar.

Torey’s Nightmare

Torey fell in a dark world with no life found. She then aw a dark pokemon.It came to her,but Torey couldn’t see the face. She then stood up and was running. Then the pokemon came after her.

“Aaaaahhhh! Who’s getting me??!!”Asked Torey.The pokemon grabed her and checked the head.
Torey knew it was looking for a weakness.Torey tired to kick the pokemon,but it was not solid.

Torey wakes up..


“Aaaaahhh! Help!”Torey screamed.The only preson awake was Blaze.Blaze dashed into the room.

“Torey! Are you okay?!”Blaze asked. Torey then stoped and calmed down by takeing deep breathes.

“I had a nightmare.”Torey answered.Blaze thought it was real danger.

“Ok..Goodnight”Blaze said.Torey covered herself and went to sleep.


~Anastasiar~

I will post later.

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Post Pokemon Dungeon Rescue Team Chapter 15

Pokemon Dungeon Rescue Team Chapter 14

Torey was having a strang stomach acke and it got worst by the days. She moaned every day and clushed her stomach.

“Torey! It will never get better when you do that!”Tom said. Torey’s face was truning away when he said that.

“I don’t care…….On second though I wouldn’t clush.”Torey replied. She stoped her clushing.Tom and Torey were in the woods walking and talking.

“So Torey…How long was that stomach acke?”Tom asked. Torey was ingnoring that qusetion. Tom picked a flower and looked at it with silence.

“Tom,what are you doing?” Torey asked. Torey was thinking of the nightmare she had when she looked at him.

“Tom…Are you embarrass?”Torey asked. Tom had a sad face and a tear running down his face.

“No.I miss someone.”Tom replied. Torey felt the same way when she thinks of home.

“Torey.Do you get a feeling that you miss someone?”Tom asked.Torey answered

“Yes.” Tom and Torey were looking at the ground intill someone came.

“Not him!”Tom yelled. Machamp came running down in need of help.

“You guys have to help me!”Machamp demanded.Torey and Tom looked at him.

“Whatever.”Tom said.

“Ok you have to come with me.”Machamp said. Torey went frist and fell.

“What just happen?”Torey asked.The two boys went on. Torey fell in a hole and knew it was a trap.

“Torey are you okay?!”Tom asked. Machamp kick him over into the trap.

“I knew this was a trap!”Torey yelled.She was in a net that would never break with fire.

“Then why did you come?”Machamp asked.Torey glared at him. Tom was watching the moon and stars while he was in the trap.

“I hate you!”Tom yelled.Machamp walked and had no care for them.

“I think this might be the last time we will see home.” Torey said. Tom never wanted to think of home anymore.

“Home you say?” Machamp asked.Torey shut her beck and covered it.

“What do you mean home?”Machamp asked. Torey closed her eyes and truned around.

“Tom what dose she mean?” Machamp asked.Tom glared at him and so did Machamp.

“You know,I can always call my team.”Torey said.Machamp was watching. Torey yelled

“Hhhhheeeeeeeeeeeeeeeellllllllllpppppppppp!!” Torey yelled.Machamp covered his ears and droped the net.

“Runaway time!”Tom said happily.They both ranaway from there.

“I hope he is still asleep!”Torey said.Machamp had a rage going on.

“Rrrruuuunnn!”Tom yelled.


At Base…

“Okay! Kip is here. Sceptile is here………..Were is everyone elas?”Blaze asked. Tom and Torey dashed into the room.

“Oh my god!”Torey said.She fell to the ground and Blaze didn’t notice.

“Hey Blaze.”Tom said. Blaze didn’t care so he didn’t look. Torey went to Blaze’s room to see if he had something cool to play with. Then she found a notebook.

“Nice! I guess Blaze dosen’t care.”Torey said to herself.She was reading cool stories and pokemon.

“Well I’ll take this for a while.”Torey said. She ran back to her room and fall asleep.




~Anastasiar~





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It needs some work, but its alright!
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Thanks I work on this and I am planing for a new story some time in the year. I will work on a chapter, but I want to ask if anyone wants to be in my story.(I am running out of new pokemon.) So tell me your name,the pokemon you want to be,nickname or not, and are you good,bad,in a team or not. Post soon!

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Thanks I work on this and I am planing for a new story some time in the year. I will work on a chapter, but I want to ask if anyone wants to be in my story.(I am running out of new pokemon.) So tell me your name,the pokemon you want to be,nickname or not, and are you good,bad,in a team or not. Post soon!

~Anastasiar~
Sorry I double posted,but I have to say that you can't be this pokemon:

Deoxys

Lugia

Ho-oh

Celebi

Mewtwo

Mew

Rayquaza

Groundon

Kyogre

Latios

Latias

Jirachi

and the regis

Sorry but everyone.
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POKEMON DUNGEON RESCUE TEAM CHAPTER 15


Torey was reding the notebook that she would never stop reading.

“Well this is a master piece.”Torey said gladly. Blaze then saw the book and wanted to know what in the world is she reading.

“Torey… What book are you reading?”Blaze asked. Torey then hid it behind her.

“What book?”Torey asked. Blaze grabed the book and was shocked what Torey was reading.

“My book!”Blaze said. Torey grinned with enjoy meant.Torey then try to walk out of this,but Blaze grabed her anyway he could.

“Now you cross the line.”Blaze yelled. Torey gulped before anything elas happened to her.


At the woods.

“Why are you bring me here?”Torey asked.Trees with pokemon watch them walk by.

“Hi!”Tom yelled.Blaze and Torey screamed as loud as Tom yelling.

“Don’t do that.”Blaze said. Torey was still in fear on the ground waiting to know who did that.

“Torey.It’s Tom.”Tom said.Torey came up steamed.

“Don’t do that ever again!”Torey demaned. Torey wanted to quit the team so bad that she wanted to say that snice she meet the team.

“I’am leaveing.”Torey said. She throwed the scarf and her badge on the ground and left.
Then Tom knew why she did that and ran to get her.Blaze picked the badge and scarf and put it in the team bag and went after Torey and Tom.

“Wait! Torey don’t go!”Tom yelled.He saw town from the hill and it was sunset. Blaze caught up with Tom and ran even more.

“Go Blaze!Go!”Tom chreeded.Tom fell over the hill and fell over Blaze.

“Let’s move!”Tom said.

“Uh……….That is the only thing we can do right now.”Blaze said.

“Oh.”Tom said.They rolled all the way to town and fell over the pokemon.

“Hey! Blaze and Tom! Watch what you’re doing!”Pikachu said.

“Sorry!I need to get my team member!”Blaze said. He ran to Whiscash’s pond and saw no one there.

“Hello?”Blaze said confused. Torey came after Blaze and fell to the ground again.

“I hate this! I want my life back!”Torey said. Blaze didn’t really understand what she ment.

“What do….you….mean?”Blaze asked.

“I was suppost to be a place called Erath.”Torey answered.

“Is that a dungeon?”Blaze asked. Whiscash poped out his head out of the pond and heard what she was talking about.

“No. It’s a planet.”Whiscash answered.Blaze understood now.

“Got it!”Blaze said.

“Everyone to town!”Yelled Pikachu jumping up and down.


At Town..

“It’s a gaint star about to hit us.”Said Alakazam. Everyone screamed with fear.

“That’s it ! I will go to Rayquaza and bring the team.”Torey said. Everyone looked at her like she was crazy.

“I know what will happen!”Toery said. Then the pokemon wanted to know and listen closely.

“That is a metor comeing and the only pokemon that could get it away is Rayquaza.” Torey said. Then Alakazam knew what will happen too and then everyone understood now.

“Go Torey! Go,Go,Go!!”Yelled the pokemon.

“Let’s move.”Blaze said.


I’ll post later..
~Anastasiar~

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POKEMON DUNGEON RESCUE TEAM CHAPTER 16
Torey went to her room with sadness in her. Pikachu went to see her. He jumped on her bed were Torey was.

“Well…what’s up?” Pikachu asked. Torey whipped off her tears and talked to him.

“Nothing…”Torey said. Pikachu knew that it was something.

“Is it Blaze?” Pikachu asked. Torey nodded her head “yes.” Pikachu came closer.

“He’s acting strange and meaner. To me and the team!” Torey yelled. Pikachu found that odd. Blaze doesn’t show he has a problem, but this is showing it. He thinks that he is having a hard time with Torey.

“Did you do something?” Pikachu asked.

“No. Why?” Torey asked. Pikachu then went to Blaze’s room.

“I’ll be back.” Pikachu said. He went down the hallway and to his right.

“Hi Blaze.” Pikachu said. Blaze was sitting on his bed looking at a piece of paper.

“Hey…”Blaze said in a deep voice. He didn’t look very pleased when he looked a Pikachu.

“Are you okay?” Pikachu asked. Blaze nodded “no”

“No. Not at all.” Blaze answered. He let his paper fall to the ground and let himself on the bed. Pikachu jumped on him hard.

“Tell me what’s going on!” Pikachu yelled. Blaze grabbed him and put him down.

“Why? Did anyone want to know?” Blaze asked. Pikachu then nodded his head.

“Who? And answer my questions.” Blaze continued. Pikachu then stopped and told a lie.

“No one. No reason. And I want to know.” Pikachu said.

“Tell the truth now and here.” Blaze said. Pikachu breathe two times and said.

“Torey. However, I don’t know why. I sewer.” Pikachu said. Blaze sighed and looked up.

“What’s wrong with her? She isn’t acting herself anymore.” Blaze asked. Pikachu thought he knew what was going on.

“She said that you are acting up more.” Pikachu said. Blaze then stood up with a shocked face.

“She really said that?!” Blaze asked. Pikachu nodded. Blaze ran out of his room. Pikachu ran to Torey’s room. He shut the door and locked it. Torey was shocked how quick he moved.

“What’s going on?” She asked. Pikachu ran to her and grabbed her arm.

“Blaze is coming!!! Hide! Now!” He yelled. Torey had no place to go. Blaze knocked on the door twice. Torey opened the door. Pikachu felt so pathetic.

“Hi Torey. Can I talk to you?” Blaze asked. Torey didn’t want to go, but she needed to.

“Fine.” Torey said. She went and closed the door.

“Hey! What the?! Get me out…Hey a diary” Pikachu said.

~Blaze and Torey…~

“What do you want?” Torey asked. Blaze didn’t look at her when she said that.

“Nothing…what about you?” Blaze asked. Torey really need to say something, but she would let everything out too quick.

“Someone…” Torey answered. She was about to faint, but it would be rude to do it for no reason.

“Who someone?” Blaze asked. Torey looked up at him.

“Someone that I know.” She answered. Blaze knew what she was talking about, but she didn’t make it clear.

“To tell the truth… That someone is you.” Torey answered. Blaze knew it. He couldn’t have guessed anything else.

“Well I uh…” Blaze said, but couldn’t continue. Then all the sudden Torey came up to Blaze and gave him a small kiss on the side of his face. She then gave a note and soon ran off. Blaze couldn’t believe it. Torey gave a kiss to him! He was blushing the whole time.

~***~

“So…what happened?” Sceptile asked. Blaze was back at base with everyone except Torey.

“Well…Torey gave me a kiss.” Blaze said. Then Kip grabbed him and they fell to the ground.

“She what? That was the moment you were waiting for!” Tom yelled. Blaze was getting to feel someone was getting to do that for something.

“Blaze how do you feel?” Sceptile asked.

“Loved...” Blaze said. He fell on to his bed.

“I forgot! Tomorrow we need to go to Rayquaza!” Sceptile yelled. Everyone went to bed early for tomorrow.

~***~
~Next day…~

“Are you ready?” Alakazam asked. Everyone nodded and went to the star that was made. They went higher and higher and closer to Rayquaza.


~Leaving the ground…~
Everyone looked around and saw they were in a cloud.

“I never have been in cotton candy before!” Kip said. THUMP! Everyone fell, but was on the cloud.

“Okay…Let’s head in.

~Five hours later…~

“Aaahhhh!” Yelled the team. They were chased by wild pokemon after them. Finally, they made it to the top.

“Hello?” Torey said. Then and green like snake came down.
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