Originally Posted by Orange_Flaaffy
Werid? In what way? Being thrown in the river? (Yahe for claws :3!) *eyes Bartholomew*
Oo, a poetic story? Like a monologue, or like an epic peom? *thinks of the Odyssey*
Well, that and all the emotions she's going through. A lot of the story seems to be like a kaleidoscope of feelings, thoughts, and emotions, and this seems to take prescient over the actions that are actually happening.
It’s a bit confusing at first but it’s an interesting way to approach a story.