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Old 02-20-2007, 09:17 PM
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Default Re: Rate my Fan-Fic!

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Originally Posted by Entei_3000 View Post
I have a Fan-Fic and I want to find out what everyone else thinks of it. I've had it up for awhile, but now hardly anyone has commented, and I want to know what I can do to make it better.

My Fan-Fic is called 'Lezlie, a Special Girl With A Special Gift'.
To be honest, I've alawys noticed it was there. But you want to know one possible reason barely anybody(including me) is reading/commenting?

The title is cheesy.

It's lengthy, repetitive, and sounds odd. Some people around here might think it's a nooby story just by that title. O_o
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