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Old 07-30-2006, 02:24 PM
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Default Re: Fan Fiction Chat/Feedback

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Originally Posted by katiekitten View Post
Scep, it's nice! Good use of description, although maybe a little stop-start with the first sentences. (Short sentences, one after the other... Probably just me though. XD) I really liked it!

The Darkness Within?
I actually like it. It's no longer title pending, and I'm working on the first chapter. That was a prolouge.
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