07-24-2006, 01:00 AM
The Ultimate Story
Here are the stories I've written since the very beginning. I left them as original as can be, except for editing grammar, spacing paragraphs, and minor word changes (like an overuse of slang and 'got'). Other than that, original. The original post dates and location of post are at the end of each capture.
Feel free to comment at any time by using the Story Feedback thread or sending me a Private Message. Only Graders may post here.
*~Note to Graders~*
I don't care for any advice, suggestions, or feedback in regards to the story. I write my way and nothing you say will change that. If you take more than 10 mins to write a grade, you are wasting yours and my time. Grading standard says no 'crap' grades, but that is all I require. Thanks for understanding and hope you enjoy.
Still Adding Commentary. These will give you insight to my thoughts about that chapter.
->ABOUT: This is an Adventure, similar to the anime.
The Beginning01- Getting Started
02- Increasing My Team
03- Annual Tradition
04- Annual Tradition: Round 2
05- Enter the City: The Park
06- Enter the City: Kakuna Crisis
07- A Fish Out of Water
08- The Cause of the Fish Out of Water
09- Untitled Capture Attempt 1 | 2
10- The Moving Tree 1 | 2
11- Doe, a Deer, a Female Dear 1 | 2
12- Caution! Sleeping Pokemon Ahead 1 | 2
13- One Spooky Night in Saffron City 1 | 2
14- Small Vacation Time 1 | 2
Tan Gang Incident15- Teleporting Fun
16- Tiny Dragon Apprentice 1 | 2
17- The Tan Gang Heist 1 | 2 | 3
18- Battle at Dragon's Pin 1 | 2 | 3
19- Three Years Ago With Uriel 1 | 2 | 3
20- The Tan Tank 1 | 2 | 3 | 4
21- Farewell, City of Dragons 1 | 2
Detective vs Trainer(You can start here and not have to read anything before.)
22- Two is Better Than One 1 | 2 | 3 | 4
23- New Dawn 1 | 2 | 3
24- The First Domino 1 | 2 | 3
Latest story: Character conflict make great stories. Much of the Lodge isn't in much detail. That comes later.
Thanks PE2K for all the memories.
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Last edited by Jack of Clovers; 08-01-2012 at 12:32 PM.