Originally Posted by Sceptile Frost
Interesting beginning. You've got me interested. I'd like to see how this progresses.
So far, your story has been pretty good. I really like your humorous beginning and your cliff-hanger ending. Keep up the good work.
Thank you. ^^ Yes, I managed to bring the dreaded cliche of the 'Wake up one morning to get new Pokemon', but I decided to let them BOTH pick a Pokemon, so things got a little more interesting.
I appreciate your compliments, and I'm working on the second chapter as we speak.