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Old 03-08-2004, 10:57 PM
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Default Re: Fan Fiction Chat/Feedback

Posted Chapter 6 Part 1

This chapter is a long one IMHO (with all its parts, of course).

Can anyone comment on it? Seriously, anything at all, good or bad. Especially bad, this way I can help myself by improving it.
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