Re: The mysteries of mount Coronet.
Rate: 1-10: 10
I like the idea of chapters, like traveling. The begging starts off dramatic, pulling in readers, which is a very nice element. You could build the story to where your face off with all three legendaries, or have supporting characters to travel with. You could also require to catch the three Lake Pokemon before Giratina or the other two appear, where catching those three causes a chain reaction to summon the legendary dragons. Researching and discovering, and on top of that, adventuring makes for a great plot. Keep it up!