Thread: [Other] Modern Mythology [SU/DS]
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Old 01-11-2013, 10:29 PM
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Default Re: Modern Mythology [SU/DS]

It's not that you did anything wrong, however you didn't seem to use normal paragraphs in places, like appearance and personality. Your descriptions seemed like the kind you put bullet points next to, which I've never seen done in an SU before...then again, I've only ever RPed on Neopets and on here.
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