Originally Posted by Linchy
The last one is my favourite. The third one's text is a little static (is that the word? I can't even remember anymore) and the first one's text is a tad hard to see. For a six month hiatus, I think it's pretty good. I guess overall I'd suggest you add in more depth and flow.
(ermgergerd am I bumping this thread oh well)
I haven't checked this for so long :O Thanks for the comments. I'm a bit terrible at text and I've never been really good at it, so I need tips.