Thread: [Pokemon] Secrets of the Spirit Callers
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Old 11-28-2012, 10:53 PM
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Default Re: Secrets of the Spirit Callers

@Flynt: Two issues:

1) The histories of your two characters are a little too similar. If two of your characters share a lot of history, then there should be different perspectives on the events, instead of mere duplication.

2) You MIGHT want to tone down the effectiveness of Leonard just a little bit. At least enough so that there won't be speculation about him being a Hunter. Because those rumors would last exactly as long as it would take for someone in the Guards with the authority to arrange an "accident" for Leonard to hear them. The Guard does NOT screw around.
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