Thread: [Pokemon] GLADIATOR [su/ds]
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Old 11-24-2012, 12:04 AM
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Default Re: GLADIATOR [su/ds]

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Originally Posted by Pokemon of Destruction View Post
NAME: Zachary Richards

AGE/GENDER: 17 Male

PERSONALITY: Zac is a cold person to be around. He only gets along with his Metagross being his only pokemon. However Zac deeply cares for Metagross and may care for others as well even though he doesn't show it. He is very pesistent and stubborn which is why he doesn't respond to people well. Rather than pick fights he tries to avoid them because his Metagross has a short temper.

APPEARANCE: Outside the battle field he is about six foot. He has dark brown hair with a red tint. He is a bit pale and has blue eyes. He wears a black short sleeve top with blue jeans. He sometimes wheres a green jacket but only rarely as he says it not his style. He has red sneakers and a black digital watch.

On the battle field he has light blue battle armour with glowing grey lines with flashes of pink to show Metagross's types. His helmet has a grey cross on it at eye level with glows during a psychic attack. His arms and legs look similar to Metagross's legs except with Zac hands at the end.

HISTORY: Zac was Unova to take a holiday with Metagross. Zac fought a battle with another trainer and when he lost Metagross was determined to become stronger. Metagross trained and trained with Zac but wouldn't. Zac then found out about the Pokemon Gladiators returning and tried to get approved. He got in and when he found out he will be linked to his pokemon he thought he will finially see what it would to be like Metagross.

POKEMON LINK: Metagross

ABILITIES: Metallic Skin, Super Intelligence, Psychic, Super Strong and Can hover.
Looks good so far, but I feel like the history doesn't convey much about Zac. (Also, I asked for 2 paragraphs ^^') Seems like Zac and his Metagross are close, but could you possibly explain how they became close? Maybe talk about how they met? I like the idea of him joining the GLADIATOR contest in order to become closer to his Pokemon, though ^^ See if you can expand the history a bit more, then we'll see about your acceptance :)

*acceptance pending*
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