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Old 10-21-2012, 03:20 AM
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Default Re: General Spriter's Showcase! **PLEASE post! Critique others' work and post your ow

Originally Posted by Ant2011 View Post
I really like the striped bow on the girl and the hair on the guy. I don't have any criticism for these two, they're really cool!

Thanks :) I ended up changing the shade of gold slightly because I felt like it was a bit too yellow, but I really like them too :)

Now we just need a few more competition entries!

EDIT: I've been thinking about your trainer sprites

Originally Posted by Ant2011 View Post

The one on the left with the hair over her shoulders, but like resting on her back, OR the one with her hair completely behind her? With her back arched the way it is, I wasn't sure which one seemed best...
I think the best thing to do would be to combine them both, so that the hair is falling off her back, sort of behind her arm? Then you'd still be able to see some of you back/waist, and the hair would look like it was falling more naturally. Hope that makes sense.

- ND

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