Re: Kamara's Poem Collection
I agree with Sealboy that the poems are very short. I do think that you could make longer ones if you wanted to, but a good thing to keep in mind is to write about things that are meaningful to you that could hold personal worth. If you do value peace and fighting enough to write about them, then good, that's what you might prefer to write about, but don't be afraid to incorporate things like emotion into your pieces to create things detailed with feeling. It's a good idea to draw from experiences and create something that represents a way you felt or something similar.
Keep it up. :]
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