Re: [SU/DS]Kingdom Hearts: The Other Nobodies(REVIVED!)[SU/DS]
...No, just no. I stopped at Pegasus's personality, which still has yet to be fixed. Did you read anything I typed about your last SU edit? I'm not normally an impatient person, but you don't seem to be understanding most of what I'm telling you, and if you do, you're completely overhauling the characters I gave you specific pointers on how to edit so that they would be accepted.
I cannot accept these as they are, sorry.